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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #120 on: December 12, 2007, 07:23:37 am »
Part 38: Revision

Arka and Sudisir worked systematically through her mother’s papers and her own notes. The parts Arka had struggled to translate were made clear by Sudisir’s superior knowledge of the language. Arka had already cross-referenced most of the tales her mother had gathered, making it easier to discard the myths and exaggeration from the facts.

After several hours, with only short breaks for food and drink, they had a full list of issues that were still unresolved. These, they worked through, one by one, each using their own sources to evidence their position and in each case, working carefully to a compromise they could both agree on. Arka had been completely immersed in the task and had not noticed the hours slip away. They had worked through the night and it was starting to get light.

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Together they had established that the sons of Mim, Garwin and his older brother Fjinn, had fallen out over a woman. She was Syl, daughter of Dúr. Garwin had made a special gift for her, a fine bracelet of gold and silver, set with garnets, but Fjinn had wanted Syl for himself. He spread false rumours against his brother, secretly and subtly so that Dúr would refuse Garwin the suit. Mim took his oldest son’s side in the affair. Garwin had taken this badly to the extent that he had told others that he wanted to see his brother dead. Some said the enmity between the brothers lasted for years; others that it was never resolved. In time, he redeemed himself in Dúr’s eyes and he and Syl were married.

Having been driven from their own lands, the Aoelfrae eventually settled in Erengabord, the home of the Pekdverm (Nibin-Noeg to the elves, or ‘Petty-dwarfs’ as they were known in the language of men). They built settlements on the surface, not knowing that the dwarfs were living in their city under the ground. When the dwarfs emerged for their biennial hunt, the Aoelfrae thought they had come from outside what they now saw as their land, and attacked them. This earned them the name ‘Oskaralfreth’ or ‘dark-elves’.

Whether or not Garwin had been reconciled with his brother, most accounts told of him fighting the elves alongside Fjinn, though whether through brotherly ties, because of loyalty to his father the King, or from self-defence was not clear. The fighting went on for some time, almost a year, and there were heavy losses on both sides. The dwarf council argued with Mim that they should cut their losses and return to their underground city, sealing the entrances against the elves. But Mim was enraged that the elves should take the dwarfs’ hunting lands. He planned a suicidal attack on the elves’ main settlement intended to strike terror into their hearts. Garwin was chosen to lead this attack, with some accounts suggesting that this was because Mim favoured his oldest son, and so was prepared to send Garwin to certain death. Fjinn had offered to go with him but Mim had forbidden this.

Secretly, Garwin planned a way to escape the fighting and enlisted 50 families to his cause. He and four others: his brother in law, Hjalstr, Hanter, a friend of Hjalstr, Hydr, wife of Hanter and Pjet, a friend of Garwin, found a way underground to a new chamber, deep in the rock, where they could build a new home. They hoped to stay there until the fighting was over then return to Erengabord to sue for peace with the elves. They returned and gathered the 50 families together to make their escape under cover of darkness. But Fjinn found out about Garwin’s plan and followed the deserters with a squad of fighters.

There was a brief and bloody battle during which all of but one of Fjinn’s band had been killed. Most accounts told of a final fight between Garwin and his brother, in which Fjinn was slain. One fighter escaped to alert the king of his son’s treachery.

Garwin then took the decision to seal off the entrance to the chamber, which meant that they would never be able to return to Erengabord. This act became known as the Rodfrakkert, or the ‘Great Divide’. The survivors sent out search parties to find another exit from their new home, which now looked like becoming their grave. As supplies ran low they became more and more desperate and some talked openly of overthrowing Garwin, who was now seen by many as unfit to lead them.

Then Garwin stumbled upon a new passage, which led deeper into the earth. This led to the area now known as the Stone Labyrinths. At this point accounts varied widely. The most common view was that the dwarfs arrived in Ylliakum in the Fourth Epoch and helped to expand the Stone Labyrinths and to build the fortress at the Bronze Doors in return for safe passage, under Talad’s blessing and protection, into Yliakum. So impressive was their work that they earned the name ‘Perrakith’ or ‘they who cut rock’ although this was commonly reduced to the term ‘Stonebreakers’.

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Finally, both Arka and Sudisir were satisfied with the history they had compiled. In particular, it was now clear that Garwin had left Erengabord before Sudisir’s father had been murdered. Each point was referenced to the texts of the accounts recorded by Arka’s mother and the Aoelfrae chronicles, which Sudisir had memorised. Arka had learned many new terms in the old tongue of the Perrakithor, and had been busy adding these to her dictionary.

Sudisir made ready to leave, having committed the new histories to memory. He and Arka embraced, marking the end of the long and bitter division, both between the two and their peoples.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #121 on: December 12, 2007, 07:47:56 am »
oh heck, that was just brilliant!!!
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #122 on: December 13, 2007, 03:56:00 pm »
With each chapter you get better and better. This one was really fantasic. Reading the history as you wrote it makes it feel like it is part of my history too. So very real.

I am very impressed.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #123 on: December 13, 2007, 10:56:26 pm »
A well written addition. I like it. However... you have to be -very- careful when writting about the history of Yliakum. All races but Lemur, Kran, and Ynwnn came through Portals. No race came from the surface, or has ever seen the surface.

I know it says some may have come from the surface on the main site, but that was added by a proofreader without permission, and went a long time without being noticed. It has been fixed in some places, but not others. It will be fixed everywhere eventually when someone finds the time to go back and rewrite that part. Settings has been very busy lately. ;)

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #124 on: December 14, 2007, 07:54:26 am »
... came through Portals. No race came from the surface, or has ever seen the surface.

You mean it like "teleportation portals"? With an origin in their distinct home worlds? ... Then we might agree with "surface on their home worlds", or "surface" as synonym for the home worlds?

That to be discussed elsewhere...

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #125 on: December 14, 2007, 09:32:44 pm »
Arka! I'm so glad I've had the privilege of reading this, you've got Sarine's character down so well, I'm truly impressed. I'm on holiday at the moment, so I won't be in game for at least another month. Can't wait for the rest of the story!

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« Reply #126 on: December 14, 2007, 09:52:03 pm »
Oh woman you are good! \\o// The amount of history you have written is just amazing. It all seems so realistic and like this really took place. You did a wonderful job with this last chapter. Yays! Can't wait for more.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #127 on: December 15, 2007, 07:10:35 pm »
Phew!

That seems to have stirred up a lot of interest. I guess my reading of the settings (being quite a long time ago, as I have been playing 3-4 years now) must have led me to believe that the Stonebreakers arrived later through the Stone Labyrinths and therefore from the surface somewhere. I guess I need to do some more reading. UTMs comments made me think about writing an alternative ending - I might still do that.

@ Zorbels: Enjoy your holiday - and yes there is more to come.

I have also had lengthy PMs from Nilrem that have made me think about Sudisir's apparent change in heart. Maybe it was a bit too sudden?

However, I will press on with it.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #128 on: December 16, 2007, 11:34:29 am »
Part 39: An ambush

Sudisir opened his bag and took out a small package, wrapped in leaves and a delicate brown bottle. “Here is some Elvin bread and a potion to help build your strength. You will need this for your journey home.”

Arka took them and thanked him. She then handed Sudisir one of her axes. “I want you to take this. It may help you on your way.”

“You would divide your axes? I have never known a dwarf part willingly with their axe. I am honoured.” He bowed to Arka. “But I have already stayed too long. Fare well, Arka Garam, daughter of Embra and Golthart. May your shadow never lengthen.”

With that he started to climb the steps and threw open the trapdoor, filling the cellar with the early morning rays of the crystal.

As he stepped onto the top step, there was a blinding flash and Sudisir fell backwards into the cellar, showered in sparks.

“A fireball!” he shouted, “Get down Arka! There will be more.”

“Got him!” came a familiar voice. Arka recognised it as her trainee mage, Andoryn.

“It’s all right, Sudisir. They are friends.”

She held up the burning candle. Sudisir lay on the floor. She could see that the side of his face was bleeding and his right arm was badly burned. “Here,” she said, opening the bottle he had given her, “Drink this. I will go and stop them.”

Quickly she made her way up the steps. Pausing at the top, she shouted out, “It’s alright. Put down your weapons. I’m in no danger.”

“’Tis a trap, “ she heard Einnol say, “Get ready Andoryn.”

Arka peered over the top of the steps. Einnol, Andoryn and Rell were crouched in a clump of bushes, not forty paces away.”

“Arka!” shouted Andoryn, standing up, but Einnol pulled her down again. “No! ‘tis a trap. He has her under his control.”

Arka climbed out of the trapdoor, her hands in the air. “Look, it’s fine. Sudisir means no harm.”

“He had your axe, Arka,” shouted Einnol.

“I gave it to him.”

“See, Andoryn, it is a trap – Arka would never give away her axes.”

Arka took a step towards the others and they stood up backing off. Arka had not seen Sudisir behind her, holding a black glyph in the air. He called out to them, “Put down the glyph. It’s no use against this.”

Einnol froze, immediately recognising the high whine of Sudisir’s voice. He put his hands to his head, muttering to himself, “No, no, make them go away. I will not do it, not again.”

For a moment the others were startled and turned to face him. Sudisir saw his opportunity and made a quick movement away from the trapdoor. But Rell had spotted him.

“Get ready Andoryn,” he shouted to Andoryn, and she fingered the red glyph nervously. Arka was too close to Sudisir. If she fired at this range, she could kill them both. Einnol was kneeling on the ground, his head still in his hands.

“Put the glyph away, Sudisir, and let Arka go,” shouted Rell.

Arka turned to look at Sudisir. She tried to make out his expression. “Run! She hissed. Run, while you have the chance.”

Sudisir looked the left, his only chance of exit. He would have to run along one of the two remaining walls enclosing the ruined forge. He wouldn’t make in before Andoryn fired another fire ball. He kept the glyph held tightly in case he needed to defend himself. Sudisir took hold of Arka’s shoulders. “Sorry, but I need to use you as a shield,” he whispered, and Arka nodded.

Together, they edged along the wall as the others approached slowly, spreading out.

“He’s getting away!” shouted Rell. They started to run and Sudisir let go of Arka’s shoulders. A white menki appeared from the bushes to Arka’s left and she saw a flash of steel. Pushing Sudisir, she dived in front of him and took the dagger in the shoulder, a deep red stain spreading across the white silk. A burning pain spread down her arm and Arka sank to her knees.

Sudisir took to his heels. Andoryn saw her chance and raised the red glyph, holding it aloft in both hands.

“No!’ shouted Arka with the last of her strength, but it was too late. The glyph glowed white and Andoryn dropped it with a yell of pain before it shattered into a thousand pieces, with a deafening roar. The shock wave blew everyone off their feet and sent Sudisir sprawling onto the grass. He picked himself up and ran limping towards the Bronze Doors. Everyone except Einnol lay dazed on the ground, too stunned to move. Arka had collapsed on the stone floor of the forge, a pool of deep red blood forming around her shrunken body.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #129 on: December 16, 2007, 01:03:38 pm »
OH NO!!!!   :o

More more more!!!!!!  \\o//

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #130 on: December 16, 2007, 05:08:33 pm »
As I look around the room I see anticipation in the eyes of all the people gathered because of Arka’s announcement of another chapter of her story to be read.

Akra walks in the room and we all watch as she carries her well worn book to her chair in front of the room, sits and starts to read.

We all stare in total awe as the story goes on. We are completely captivated. As you finish reading the chapter, close your book and look up at us you see how we are enthralled by your writing and smile. No one in room moves or talks, we just sit and thinking of what we just heard, all of us feel so part of the story that it seems real. Then suddenly we all rise and applaud loudly.

Akra, to say amazing, remarkable, stupendous, awesome and grand is not enough. I know I feel honored you have written such a wonderful story for me to read. Thank you for this great gift.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #131 on: December 16, 2007, 11:08:08 pm »
Arka. Join Settings and you will know -exactly- when the Stonebreakers (and Hammers) came through their Portal, and even when [censored], leading to [censored] in the [censored]! That is just the tip of the story, though. Wait till you find out about how they [censored]. Now that is a sad tale.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #132 on: December 17, 2007, 05:54:08 am »
No Arka! Don't join settings! Devs can't head guilds!

Now, I'm going to sit here until you post the next installment. So you'd better post quickly, because if I die of starvation, it's your fault.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #133 on: December 19, 2007, 08:46:39 am »
Part 40: Between life and death

Arka tried to move, but she was too weak.

“Ye have lost a lot of blood. Try to be still.”

It was Einnol’s voice and Arka managed a weak smile, “You are alive, Einnol I thought…”

“Hush, hush. I am fine.”

Sarine appeared by his side and Arka turned her head.

“And you Sarine. I am sorry to have got you into this.”

Sarine tried to smile but her concern showed in her face, “Don’t apologise, Arka. Try not to speak. You will be fine,” she said unconvincingly.

Sarine looked at Einnol. “The others are recovering but Sudisir got away. I’ve bandaged Andoryn’s hands, but they are very badly hurt. She can’t use her crystal glyph.”

Einnol frowned. He was kneeling over Arka, holding the wound in her shoulder together, the knife blade still embedded. “I cannot take this out ‘till we are ready to heal ye,” he said.

Arka murmered and Einnol moved his head close to her face to hear.

“In the cellar – a brown bottle”

Einnol nodded. “Quick as you can Sarine – in the cellar – look for a brown bottle.”

Sarine ran down the steps and returned moments later with the bottle already uncorked. She went to administer the potion to Arka but Einnol stopped her. “No! There is only enough for one – give it to Andoryn.” Sarine looked aghast. She could see Arka’s need was far greater.

“Do it!” shouted Einnol and she ran across to Andoryn, not daring to argue.

Andoryn took the bottle and drank what was left of the potion. Immediately she felt the life return to her hands.

“Quick Andoryn! Over here, now!” Einnol was doing his best to staunch the wound, but Arka’s lips were pale and she was already unconscious.

Andoryn fumbled for the glyph and muttered the words. Arka and Einnol were bathed in swirling white-blue light, and the colour returned slightly to Arka’s face.

“Get ready for a second one,” said Einnol, “I will try to get the blade out.”

“Not yet,” said Andoryn, “I need to build up my strength up again.”

Arka’s breathing was fast and shallow and Einnol was not convinced she would make it.

“Can ye not hurry?”

“No, I need to have the strength to cast it.”

“But I am losing her. Ye have to do it now.”

“If it fails, she will die before I can manage a third. You have to wait.”

Einnol could feel the life slipping out of Arka’s body. “Hold on Arka, hold on! Do not leave us.” Tears were streaming down his face, blurring his vision and dampening his beard.

“No! Ye cannot go!” he called out in anguish.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #134 on: December 19, 2007, 05:55:31 pm »
sniff.... sniff... Lolitra wipes away the tears.
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