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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #135 on: December 22, 2007, 09:22:28 am »
Part 41: Reconciliation

Arka opened her eyes and saw a bright blue sky above. It was midday and the crystal light felt warm on her face. She put her hand to her left shoulder. The gown was ripped and caked with blood, but the skin below it felt smooth. Her arm ached but she could move it.

She turned her head to see her friends in a huddle. Sarine caught her eye and ran to her side. She knelt down on the stone floor and stroked Arka’s hair. “Thank Laanx you are alive. I was so worried about losing you.”

Arka smiled. “What’s going on over there?” she asked.

“They are going to track down Sudisir. Einnol has been acting awfully strange since he saw him. He says it is essential that we capture him.”

“No!” said Arka, alarmed. If they went after Sudisir all their work would be lost. “I need to talk with Einnol. Now!”

Sarine jumped up and brought Einnol over.

“Thank you Sarine. Could you leave us a moment?” asked Arka.

Sarine looked at Einnol, who nodded. She went back to the group who were still discussing tactics.

“He is headed up to the Bronze Doors, Arka. We can alert the Sunshine Squad. They will find him.”

“No, Einnol, you must let him go.”

Einnol looked at her. “He still has control over you,” he said, “like he once controlled my mind. We have to capture him to release you.”

“Einnol, he has no more control over any of us. He is going back to his people. We will not see him again.”

“We cannot take the risk.”

Arka’s heart sank. How was she going to convince Einnol she was not entranced? Then a thought struck her.

“My mother’s notebooks. In the cellar. Get them for me, I need to show you something.”

Einnol disappeared and came back shortly with a bundle of papers. Arka had him hold each one up in turn until he found the page Sudisir had returned to her.

“Good. Now, have you got the scrap of parchment I sent to Sarine in the letter?”

Einnol nodded. He reached inside his pocket and fished it out.

“Get Andoryn. She needs to see this.”

Einnol stood up and called Andoryn over.

Arka held the page in her right hand. “Andoryn, you take that small piece of paper from Einnol. Good. Now Einnol, you know where the scrap of paper came from?”

Einnol nodded miserably. He didn’t want to be reminded of this.

“Well, this is the page you took.”

His eyes widened.

“You will be pleased to know that Sudisir was the one who made you steal it. He gave me this back after he told me what had happened. If he had meant to control me he would have kept this. It contains the charm he used.”

Andoryn looked at the page in Arka’s hand and nodded. “Arka’s right, Einnol – this is ancient magick.”

“Now Andoryn,” said Arka, “Hold the piece of paper Einnol gave you to the page, near the bottom where it is torn.”

Andoryn did so. As the scrap of paper touched the page, there was a faint hissing as the tear repaired itself. The page was whole again.

“How?” asked Einnol.

Andoryn looked at him. “I told you in the Library. The books have their own energy. This means they can repair themselves, although I’ve never seen it before.”

“I guess ye are right Arka,” agreed Einnol, “But we should still try to find the fiend.”

Arka dropped the page and grabbed Einnol’s arm. “You must let him go. We have revised our history, Einnol, we have reconciled our differences. He needs to tell his people that we are no longer enemies. If he does not return they will send an army here to destroy us.”

“We can defend ourselves. Like we did against the Dwarvesbane.”

“This will not be like Dwarvesbane. These are Oskaralfreth. Dark-elves. Their Ways are much more powerful than ours. Nothing could stop them. Except the truth.”

Einnol thought about this. “And they will believe Sudisir, when he returns to them?”

“Of all the Oskaralfreth, Sudisir has the greatest reason to see us dead. Our ancestors killed his father. That’s why he volunteered to come here. When he tells his people they do not need to pursue us, they will believe him. If they don’t, well, we will have to face that. But if you stop him, they will send their army and we will perish. We have to give him a chance to try.”

Einnol considered this. Then without another word he stood up and returned to the others.


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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #136 on: December 25, 2007, 09:36:05 am »
Part 42: Epilogue

After a few days, Arka was well enough to travel. The two menkis had gone on ahead to rescue Erelenga and report to Lolitra. Rell had left with Sarine as she needed to get back to her boys.

Aerianna found Arka, tidying her parents’ grave.

“Are you all right, Arka?”

Arka nodded. “Where is Einnol?”

“He is with Andoryn. They are taking a look around.”

“How is he? I was worried that meeting Sudisir might have affected him.”

Aerianna smiled. “You needn’t worry, Arka. Einnol is a lot stronger than you think. It was just the shock of hearing his voice, I think. He seems to be back to normal again.”

Arka nodded. “I was amazed he let Andoryn use her magick. He’s normally so sceptical about all that.”

“We were all surprised. To start with, he tried to make out that you were just ill and he needed to help you. Sarine and I were to keep guard, away from the forge in case there was any trouble. It wasn’t very convincing. Rell managed to get it out of him that Sudisir was after you. We thought he had killed you, Arka. It was terrible.”

“I thought he wanted to kill me too,” agreed Arka, “But in the end…”

“Well, we all thought Sudisir was likely to be armed with magick, so Andoryn argued that it would be better to disarm him with a spell before Einnol led an attack. But when Einnol lost his nerve, it took us all by surprise.”

“Poor Einnol, it must have been a real shock hearing that voice again. He must have thought he was losing his mind.”

“Honestly, Arka, he seems fine now,” said Aerianna. She fell silent for a while, just looking at the gravestone with the carved runes. “I’m sorry about what happened here,” she said at length.

“So am I.”

“I still don’t understand how you can forgive him, Sudisir, I mean.”

“Neither do I,” Arka smiled, “But sometimes you have to put your personal feelings aside. Greater issues were at stake.”

She re-arranged the posy of flowers in the earthenware jar and made sure it was firmly planted in the ground.

“You made a good job of the headstone,” said Aerianna, feeling a little uncomfortable.

Arka looked up, surprised. “That’s odd. Sudisir said something very similar. He said I’d made a good job repairing it.”

She stood up and walked around the grave. Running her fingers along the smooth surface of the stone, she was amazed to find faint cracks running along the face. They had been expertly repaired, so that the join was almost invisible.

“Look at this, Aeri. The stone has been repaired. I wonder who did it.”

“Aerianna took a close look. It looks like its been done by magick. You could hardly tell. Nothing is as it seems.”

Arka didn’t answer. Aerianna’s words had opened up old memories. Her, floating in a sphere of light in the Temple in Hydlaa; balloons and streamers at her birthday party; and a hunt, many, many years ago, with a tefusang fur beard that kept coming unstuck. And most of all, a good friend who had always been there for her. A very special dwarf, strong in will and adept in the Ways. And now she knew who had repaired the headstone, of its crack, its ‘frakkert’ you could say. Just as she and Sudisir had, she hoped, repaired the Rodfrakkert. And that, too, was a kind of magick.

It would soon be time for her to return to Hydlaa, a journey she had made many times before. She looked up at the brightening sky, tears springing to her eyes. “Thank you Pinante,” she said, “wherever you are. Garamdor, Eldamart, garamdor.”

END

Arka put down her quill and looked at the pile of papers stacked neatly on her desk. She wondered what to do next. The tale was finished, but a new chapter in her life was beginning. Maybe a walk would do her good. Now her strength was returning, she might risk a hunt in a day or two. She opened the shutters of her study window and gazed out over the smoking chimneys of East Hydlaa. It was a clear, brisk morning, and the hills looked so close you could almost touch them. Why wait another day?

She opened her desk drawer and took out the knife Zorbels had given her, Crossing the room, she carefully lifted her Great Axe from its mountings above the fire, and briefly wondered what had happened to its twin. She hoped that Sudisir would keep it to remember his time in Yliakum. More than ever, she hoped there would be no more Dwafish blood spilled. Pulling her cloak around her she clattered down the steps and into the cold morning.

"Watch out, Trepors," she said to herself, "Arka's back!"



[To all of you who made it to the end: A very happy holiday and a glorious new year!]

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #137 on: December 25, 2007, 09:48:02 am »
Great work Arka!  \\o//

But now I have nothing to look forward too...unless Arka's Return 4 is planned for the future?  :D

Merry Christmas and keep up the good work! I expect to be told the name of the book you publish.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #138 on: December 25, 2007, 01:14:49 pm »
Arka,

I was so looking forward to the end of your story and now that it is done it brings tears to my eyes because it is done. Thank you again for allowing me to take this journey. It was wonderful. Honestly I cannot say enough great things about it. When you do get published I certainly want to read the book because I am sure it will be excellant. You have a great talent.

I hope to see you in game soon.

May you and your family be blessed during this holiday season and thoughout the year to come.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #139 on: December 25, 2007, 02:47:16 pm »
Thanks to Aerianna, Suvok and Tuathanach, Erelenga cured his foot after they brought him from the crushed cave in a far west corner of the rock wall back to the abandoned village. Stubborn and in a confusing concern as he was, with the potion from the scouts of Print, he climbed in there again, to look if Arka returned here where he showed her once the signs of a great exodus. But she must have walked in a slightly different direction from the tree where he was found.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #140 on: December 25, 2007, 08:04:56 pm »
Deep in darkness hidden from the eyes above, a black-cloaked figure crouches unmoving. His eyes stare upwards, filled with anger and hate. They are up there, he knows. They are waiting. They will suffer. The Temple had not protected him. Laanx had abandoned him. They would all suffer. His new master would assure that. Oh yes... they would all suffer.

His hands clench, bringing forth the clink and grind of small stones being rubbed together. His gaze drops down to his scared fingers and what they hold. Five stones. Five useless, black stones. Another thing for those above to suffer for. They would scream in agony. As if cued by that thought, a spasm of pain seizes him. Not a whimper escapes his mouth as his body writhes in pain. In his mind, he no longer feels it. The spasm stops, and for a single brief moment, he is no longer the black-cloaked figure. For that tiny fraction of a moment, a very pretty Diabloia with red hair crouches in his place... then is gone. He is once again himself. With the sound of burning parchment, the black cloak begins to crumble away from his hunger-thin body. In a few more moments, the fabric becomes only a pile of dust at his feet. Pure shock paints his face as he stands nearly naked on the cold stone. His clothing under the cloak had long since rotted into shreds. A slow smile spreads across his face as he looks down the tunnel.

"The time comes swift, my master. The old powers weaken," he speaks to what he sees at the end. He looks down at the five black stones again. "Even the gods shall weep."

[[Most of you who read this will not know what it means. For those that do... Enjoy.]]
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #141 on: January 05, 2008, 07:59:43 pm »
Finally I made it to the end!  :love: I LOVE every word you wrote, every scene you set and every emotion I went though reading this! I hope that your writing stories hasn't come to an end. I just love the way you write. Thanks for allowing me to be apart of your wonderful stories Arka and I do hope there will be more in the future!
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #142 on: January 08, 2008, 12:09:59 am »
[Yay UtM!]

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #143 on: January 17, 2008, 01:54:28 pm »
I finished a PDF version of the whole story. When approved, I might publish it at some filehoster, or on my own webspace...

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #144 on: January 17, 2008, 02:02:25 pm »
Please let me know when it is approved, I want a copy.

Thank you LigH for all your hard work in doing this.

I still think this is the best story I ever read here on the forums. My hat is off to you Arka. I hope to see you in game again.


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