Prison Letters (18th letter)

[theirah]

"As you yourself were foolish enough to point, out the boy has forgotten everthing; this was not my intent, you have failed your contract. A word of advice: Run."

Just pointing out the comma after "point" should be after  "out"

Great Job! Can't wait for the next letters 

[Huget]

Thanks Theirah for pointing that out, it's changed. Also what is the PS method of measurement, I believe I mentioned yards in one of the previous letters but nobody seems to have caught it. What would be a significant unit of measurement in PS (while being realistic)

  great work Lieutenant Atterson,
  Next phase: Sign a petition to make all Tim Horton's carry cream scones.
Since I'm not quite sure how to set up a petition in 5 minutes span the wiki http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Scone_%28bread%29

  Mordraugion; the scone is of Scotish origen, you British copycats!

[Duraza]

I really do like the story. Its intresting the way you wrote it, us seeing whats happening through the letters of others. Wish I would have thought of it 

[Huget]

Oh my, Oh, Oh, Oh my goodness, Oh my! Duraza likes it!    Now that's a compliment coming from you, thanks!

2 more letters up, oh, and Duraza, as for coming from the perspective of the letters, it's hard to convey an interesting story. I can't really write an action scene as nobody really stops to write a letter in the middle of an fight, so all I can really do with the letters are interesting characters and twists. Not sure how much farther I can go with this. I have counted it out as 5 more left, unless I come up with a revolutionary idea (or you do and you PM me?!? ), that's it.

Any more comments, (the opal-encrusted claymore was just kind of an off the cuff thing I heard someone mention on the auction)
  Uhhh..... I got nothing  except maybe this: 42 (if you don't get it, don't worry, you ARE ssstoopid)

[Attersson]

Thanks Theirah for pointing that out, it's changed. Also what is the PS method of measurement, I believe I mentioned yards in one of the previous letters but nobody seems to have caught it. What would be a significant unit of measurement in PS (while being realistic)

  great work Lieutenant Atterson,
  Next phase: Sign a petition to make all Tim Horton's carry cream scones.
Since I'm not quite sure how to set up a petition in 5 minutes span the wiki http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Scone_%28bread%29

  Mordraugion; the scone is of Scotish origen, you British copycats!

Dude this is a commercial idea. It's against law I believe to force someone to do something. Should instead go and tell Tim Horton's directors about this idea and they'll just do it. With a petition they'd be pissed off methinks.
So I'd go for the "tell them" plan, what do you think? I could be persuasive

[Huget]

2 more letters up, and with that, I am almost caught up to the current events of my character, Arcov. So I will regretfully need to refrain from posting my last  (highly anticipated (at least by me)) letter from "a friend" 

  I am afraid I will have to discontinue any further posting of:
  This
 
  Because all random ideas cease to be random after awhile, and must be stopped.
  Don't worry because: [voice=terminator] I'll be back [/voice]
  No you won't.
  Ahhhhhh, OK people lets move out everyone, lets go. 
  I want my money back
  Yeah, well, we can't hand out money to every McDonalds customer, move along 

[Huget]

Last letter up for a little while, at least until the events unfold in game

[Huget]

2 more letters up. From now on the letters will follow the events in-game. Let us see how things play out.

[Anumesa]

wow...totally just realized Arcov was you...LOL

Hehehe now i am riveted!!! 

[Velh Krome]

Well said, Anumesa, can only second that!=P
Very original idea there, and reads quite interesting - keep it up!

Hm..

How can I ever truely defeat... him... if I cannot win this small battle

Who is that "him"?! Or maybe I.. am just thinking of the wrong battle..

[Huget]

Velh: whenever I refer to ...him... I'm talking about this: "He killed Sarha" and the "small batte" I refer to is the massacre at the gaurd tower (near Harnqusit), with me, you, Anumesa, Desot, Noriin, Malkari, Armanos, Roberet, Nixe, Anarkia. Not really a small battle, but that is how Arcov perceives it.

[Duraza]

Still so very intresting, can't wait for the next letter 

[Suno_Regin]

I like it, I got a mention in someone else's story...sorta.

[Huget]

Another letter up, hopefully I'll soon get my memories back, then the real drama begins.

Also note that in this letter Arcov's talking as if this is the first time he's died, it's actually his second, he just doesn't remember the first.

Suno: /me scratches his head "A mention? Where? Who? What?"