Xolani's Art

[Xolani]

Hi there

I have looked around the art forum and have really been amazed at the talent. I myself do a bit of 3d modeling and drawing so I make this thread to display my pitifull creations. I know I may be asking alot out you when I say don't laugh to hard but when your done it would be nice to get some constructive comments.


Heres a drawing I did some time ago that I call Mouse for obvious reasons

[LigH]

Well done. Good proportions, credible pose; just possibly a slight lack of structure and details (fur lines, tail skin).

[Kieve]

Nice. And it even has the one eye! Hm... I smell 30xp...

Heheh, kidding. Looks pretty good, and I really like the shading.

[Baldur]

I agree with Ligh. Variations in/between shadows, darker and lighter, would be a good tip aswell. Also, go wild if you like There's nothing stopping you from adding a bit of details: thinning whiskers... Bling bling, you know what I mean?

[zorbels]

Wow, I am really impressed with the shading of your mouse. I think the tail needs a little work though. It seems like it doesn't fit quite right because it is so dark. Great work!