Sounds very good. Just some problems though: you're not meant to help mankind, more like the "sentient races." Else you won't get many friends amongst the non-human races.
If you already have projects running, be sure to mention them in the first post. It's important for people to see what you are already doing... And I am also curious in investment chances and cooperative work. The Dark Empire enjoys projects like this one.
Some talk about how you usually organize yourselves to work on projects could add some more interesting information to the post as well. For instance referring if you follow enterprises from the members and how they can start/manage them or if you accept proposes from the exterior and how your members are placed on the job. Just makes it look a lot more practical.
