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PS Webcomic!
« on: July 24, 2008, 10:39:05 am »
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Well, it all began when my internet went wonky. I had just got .401 working, so I was pretty disapointed. But I only wept for a few moments before I got a great idea. "Let's start a webcomic!" I've read a few before, so I had a basic idea of what I was doing. Of course, a few things got in the way. I found time, and even a medium to do it on! MS Paint! But then, what subject to do it on?

I mean, I could have done great, brilliant roleplays, and epic storylines that capture the essence and spirit of PlaneShift. But there were a few things wrong with that. First, I had no idea how to do epic. Second, there was no way I could capture the spirit of PS, the optimism, the hope, without feeling let down by my work. I'm heavily biased, which you will understand soon enough. So, I decided to drop epic, and pick up my other option. Not all roleplay goes to plan. In fact, most of it can really suck if not done correctly. So I decided to draw rps gone wrong, storylines in ruins, players at their worst. In a light tone, of course.

Now, let's get this straight too. These people will never be glorified. We are simply observing, and maybe even learning a few lessons on how not to play. I pulled many lines directly from rps I've heard in game,  and a few quotes from things I've heard about. Some lines will even come from my experiences watching my 10 year old brother playing RuneScape. In reality, repeating these 'rps' depicted here, you will probably be pretty unpopular in game. I would not recomend repeating them. :P

This comic is in the same spirit as XilliX's nooby song. It's not an attack on PLers. it's not an attack on bad RP'ers. Because it notes everyone. PLers will be shown as they are in game. And RPers will be shown as they are in game. Sometimes for the good. And sometimes not... The names are those of my ALTs, if they aren't made up.People take these things too seriously. I've notived that silly topics get a lot of hits. Maybe you'll like a silly story with pictures...

I will edit this disclaimer as I need to. Because I've seen much of the good on this forum, and many bad sides. In reality, I expect several, if not many, flaming posts and PMs. I know that this will need to be dynamic. And I know that this may not make a load of sense, but I am poor at orginising long posts. I made a new account for the comic, simply so that, if it tanks, the reputation of my real account will be untarnished.

Yes, I know, the strips may look bad, but Paint can take a hell of a lot of time to work. In fact, the first story arc, the one here, I did in the wrong file. As a result, the pictures are pixelated and bad. Oops. I fixed it later. A story arc will contain around 30 strips, by the way. I'll try to post them whole, but It takes around 4 hours to do an arc. So sometimes you'll see just a bit of an arc at a time. Today I'll post the first arc, and in a few hours the second one will be posted, no matter what opinions I hear. After that, I will pay attention to what is said, and continue from there. I have about 20 arcs in my head, so the only matter is finding the time. The first 2 arcs will be the worst. I promise. These two will introduce the 6 main characters, their emotions and plans, and their quirks. After the silly and forced introductions, the real thing will start.

Well, good luck, and hopefully enjoy my efforts.

Arc 1
« Last Edit: August 08, 2008, 06:52:31 am by Toox »

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2008, 10:48:16 am »
Heh, wow. When I first saw this is it's MS Paint-ness I didn't think it would be very good. But it actually amused me. Good on ya.


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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2008, 10:54:18 am »
Awesome comic! Its actually something funny for a change and the graphic style fits the theme perfectly.  \\o//
Love the look on Harnquists face  ;D
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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2008, 12:12:17 pm »
Great comic. I like those furball Enkidukai ;)

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2008, 12:57:42 pm »
The drawing style makes it twice as funny - nice teaser!  ;D

(And uhm.. Eldemar, huh? xD)

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #5 on: July 24, 2008, 02:31:01 pm »
The Enkidukai thief is very depressing, and very funny.
But there's something odd about the mage, looks kinda like the Devil.
Harnquist looks either possessed, drunk or dizzy.

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #6 on: July 24, 2008, 03:48:33 pm »
Nice work, made me smile  :)

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #7 on: July 24, 2008, 05:26:10 pm »
Funny, funny... I notice you're using the names of actual characters/players there. I hope you got their OK. If not, I'd suggest you change the names.


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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2008, 06:37:49 pm »
 :oops: All but 3 are my ALTs. When I was in Hydlaa, a Ballser shouted obceneties. I never saw him again. I figured he was banned.Gweedol is an inside joke. I know someone named Guiniviere, and for some reason I always accidentally call him Gweedol. It doesn't make him happu. But his personality is similar to this Gweedol. Eldemar, well, I saw him, and met him, and he said a lot of innapropriate things. I never saw him again. If you guys are upset by your depiction, just PM me and I'll change the names for you.

Glad to see some positive remarks! Here is the Godmodder's Guild second arc. No URLs unless they are requested. They are a pain to insert...

Arc 2

The third arc is completely unwritten, allow about a week for it, because I'm very busy now. Sorry!
« Last Edit: August 10, 2008, 09:48:12 pm by Toox »

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #9 on: July 24, 2008, 07:58:33 pm »
Too funny... keep them coming. ;D

But you should still change the names since they did not authorize to be portrayed in your comic in the first place.


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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #10 on: July 24, 2008, 09:11:30 pm »
Keep it going, i love it :D

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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #11 on: July 24, 2008, 09:29:19 pm »
But you should still change the names since they did not authorize to be portrayed in your comic in the first place.
Send him to DR ;P



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Re: PS Webcomic!
« Reply #12 on: July 24, 2008, 11:08:05 pm »
I heard Eldemar was on earlier today, so I'll see if he's on tonight. If he declines he use of his name, I will switch it. If I can't find him, I will change his name on all of the strips that mention his name when I post the next arc. The problem is that I just like the name Eldemar.  ;)

Is there a Gweedol in game? If there is, I will change it.

Ballser is no longer a name in the game. I guess the real one really was banned.
« Last Edit: July 25, 2008, 12:47:30 am by Toox »

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« Reply #13 on: July 25, 2008, 12:56:28 am »
You even topped the first storyline - I had a good laugh! Dont let us wait for too long!  \\o//

(And.. again seeing their faces when walking through DR.. awesome!xD)

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« Reply #14 on: July 25, 2008, 01:14:04 am »
I have to go out of town this weekend. Hopefully I can at least get halfway through the arc while I'm gone. Until then, I'll appease you with this preview of story arc 3. And remember from the discliamer, those first 2 are probably gonna be the worst ones.  :P
« Last Edit: August 10, 2008, 09:48:28 pm by Toox »