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Eathon

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Where Stories Begin
« on: December 05, 2008, 12:35:48 pm »
[This is an alternate story which I hope to continue at roughly the same rate as "A Path of Memories and MUsings". All criticism and comment is greatly appreciated!]

Prologue: Where Stories Begin

 I have been persuaded to write this story. To draw up emotion and memory upon the page in neat lines, as if a lifetime could be divided into chapters and poured out in black ink. It cannot. Nevertheless, it seems I must, and I will thus endeavour. Perhaps I am persuaded to build myself a tomb of words, as the more fanciful legends recount of our ancestors. Perhaps. But sometime, all “maybe”s must become reality, and somewhere, all stories are true. So I will tell this story, though as to its outcome, I am unsure. Or perhaps you would say wary. I absolve myself.

How hard it is, to say where stories truly begin. In a sense, this story began when Talad and Laanx shaped the stalactite in which we dwell, with power drawn from the Crystal, as the scriptures tell us. But I digress. That is another’s story to tell, and time is short. We will progress to the only story that I can with all certitude recount, the one tale that still has meaning to me. Mine.



I was young then, lacking the cultivated cynicism that the onset of age inevitably brings (a common defect among the young, I am given to understand). I was fourteen, or sixteen, or thereabouts - I am afraid I find myself muddled, even on this matter. I believe it is one of the great drawbacks of age. Again, I linger, and we must hurry in the telling - time is short and this story yet young. I was the son of one of the richer families of the area; my father, a –mildly eccentric- landowner, who was able to give me a better education than many of my fellows in the Nolthrir villages nearby. I was, I suppose, moderately good-looking, I can now say - having long since given up the last vestiges of modesty. However, I was hardly social (or even, I suppose, amiable) - I positively lived on the books of our house, of which, I can assure you, there were many. Perhaps you think that my solitary life showed a lack of interest in the outside world. Upon the contrary. I wished, as does every person of that age, to explore. Perhaps to travel to Hydlaa, the capital of Yliakum: the subject of much rumour (and occasional conjecture) in our village school. I must, however, confess that I possessed very little in the way of practical skills – I was hardly proficient in the more martial professions in which young people often indulge, nor in those culinary pursuits that others enjoy. All in all, I must admit to a certain impracticality.

 We lived, at that time, between the sixth and seventh levels; atop a rocky crag that jutted out alongside one of the many rivers feeding into the basin below. The house was well-furnished and spacious – although solitary, it possessed a view over a large part of the lake below (which, as I recall, I spent rather too much time gazing upon). Its precarious stone nest, from which it seemed perpetually prepared to tumble, suited perfectly my father’s air of incipient mortality. By which I mean… Well. A steep but well-paved path ascended the cliffs to the east, while to the west, a heavily rutted track led through the foothills below to the local Nolthrir village; a small settlement primarily engaged in fishing. Needless to say, there was a little difficulty in my schooling there. It was the year seven hundred when I left. Dated, of course, since the supposed date of creation.

Let us begin.

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Re: Where Stories Begin
« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2008, 02:08:57 pm »
Let us begin.

I cannot wait for you to begin!! You are so talented Eathon.
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« Reply #2 on: December 05, 2008, 03:13:47 pm »
Chapter One: Over the River

 It was early in the month of Azhord; snow not yet settled upon the crags of Lakeheight House. An unoriginal name, it would have to be said, but nonetheless descriptive – the house towered high above the lake that spanned the entirety of the seventh level, overlooking a large part of the level from its precarious perch. I was kneeling in the small, cushioned alcove, peering anxiously through the thick glass – if winter had set in, there was no possibility of my leaving. Thankfully, I could distinguish no sign of that happening – the lake below was a deep and sparkling blue, pinpricks of light darting to and fro in wide swathes across its expanse in a joyful, ephemeral dance of light. I have to say, it matched my mood exactly.

Before the flooding of the lake in the early months of spring –naturally, this did not always occur, but was common enough-, my family would leave for the first, or Dome level of Yliakum, as the Nolthrir who we relied on for sustenance could hardly support us through the long months of winter. Generally, we would leave in the last months of the year; doubtlessly a relief for the Nolthrir who refused to accept more than a pittance for their produce. We –by the pronoun I refer to myself and my father- would stay with some of our numerous relations in the agricultural lands of Ojaveda. This year, the quarantine had forced my father to reconcile himself with the idea of a journey to Hydlaa: naturally, I myself could not have been more delighted. I smiled, of course, when I heard the news - which was, as he reminded me, with a tone carrying a little of reproach, a rare occurrence. And this time, I was finally permitted to stay behind until Azhord, while my father travelled ahead to arrange things in Hydlaa - which also, as you can imagine, proved a source of no little anticipation for me.

 Naturally, I stayed overlong. You may, if you like, blame the library. But today, I would finally seal the house, and leave for the first level: as the rumours told, a place of no little excitement! Grinning at the thought, I scrambled from the alcove, pausing only to grab my bags, which were resting alongside me. My room was sparsely furnished (by my own choice), a small, snug enclosure of square stone slabs fitted neatly together without so much as a crack. The walls, however, were covered in hangings, of the type I liked best – the more stylised art typical of the Dome level. My bed was neatly made (uncommon), a blocky construction of polished wood that seemed more akin to a vaguely bed-shaped boulder than conventional furnishing. Giving my room one last, cursory glance, I swung myself through the doorway in one, exuberant bound, before closing the dark, wooden door, and clicking the metal latch into place with a quiet “snick”. The grey stone staircase below was spartan, untypical of our house, though the enclosing walls were lined with a number of small –and excruciatingly detailed- examples of Nolthrir portraiture. At the thought of those lined, weathered faces being relatives of mine I quirked a small smile. My father and I could not have been more unlike them.

 The hall was equally empty, but in this case panelled with a rich, dark-coloured wood, finely shaped into whorls and branches. The small door that led to my father’s room, devoted entirely to experimentation, was slightly ajar, exposing a small sliver of darkness. I smiled as I closed the door – my father had always been fond of his prisms. The four other doors were firmly closed and unyielding to my tentative push, while the fireplace alone showed any sign of life, as the fire leapt and crackled in bursts and insidious crackles of light and sound, roaring quietly away in its stone alcove. I left the fire; soon enough it would turn to ashes. The remainder of the room was quiet and still, what few pets could stand the chaos of Lakeheight House having been removed by my father in his preparations for journeying to Hydlaa – as I soon would. I turned to the inconspicuous-looking doorway, concealed in a small nook of the panelling- I would be taking the less commonly-travelled route upwards, to the sixth level, rather than our regular journey to the village below. The bulky structure swung open easily on well-oiled hinges with my soft touch, and I stepped outside.

 The way ahead was clear: a path of dizzyingly tiny proportions, strung across a mass of boulders and crags – and below, the coldly-illuminated lake. Far, far below. Giving myself a quick grin -I was trying to avoid what I’d wished for-, I stepped out onto the well-cobbled path. The road was remarkably easy, even myself, burdened with a large number of saddlebags (my father had also taken our rivnaks), finding it a smooth path. Below my feet, the river burbled through a mass of piled boulders on its way to the lake level, cascading in sheets of chill water across the path, while above, I could vaguely make out the shape of the ridges of the sixth level. Bracing myself against the cold, I dashed hurriedly across the bridge, under which the river ran, my feet scrambling madly for purchase on the slippery stone. Finally, I reached the opposite side, my clothing soaked with the chilling water of the river, and resumed my former walk, pacing up the flight of steps carved deeply into one massive boulder. I glanced over my shoulder for a moment- and gasped. The house was so distant now, the home in which I had resided during my whole life seeming a mere, insignificant speck compared to the massive ridges above – which I had yet to reach. Stifling a sigh, I began to scramble upwards.
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Re: Where Stories Begin
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2008, 07:01:36 pm »
Yet another wonderful picture painted in words.
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« Reply #4 on: December 14, 2008, 09:15:20 pm »
Chapter Two: Spread Wings

 After two days of travelling, I was exhausted. My thick – or perhaps I should say once-so- boots, lined with a thick coat of long, white fur, were now little more than tattered rags, subjected to the rudely-quarried cobbles of the path for too lengthy a journey. I looked down at the tattered scraps of leather and dirt-etched fur –now a worn shade of mud-brown, flecked with grit- and sighed. Evidently I wasn’t going to be continuing with those. My other possessions were equally worn by the trials of the journey: my fine blue clothing, which I had never much valued –plain but well made- was soaked with the chill rain, pressing coldly against my skin as if I was wearing some sort of excruciating coat of ice. The long –but hardly thick- sleeves of my abused garment were ripped and torn in sections, where stray threads had been snagged on protruding spurs of rock, exposing my shivering flesh to the chill wind. Shivering, I drew my arms in to preserve what remaining warmth I had from the wind - that howled and blew in buffets and errant gusts across the narrow ridge, before passing out once more into the storm that hung over the lake below in towering, billowing clouds and sheets of blue-tinged lightning that flashed periodically from the dark clouds. My ridge, meagre though it was, provided some comfort from the driving rain – it was overhung by one of the ridges that signalled the beginning of the sixth level, proving an unwelcome reminder of the journey to come.

 Lacking the conventional skills that so become the typical traveller, I had managed to live off the food in my bags – a meagre assortment of haphazardly-packed victuals, the majority either rotting, useless, or –by this time- decidedly unpleasant. I had staggered through the rain, clutching my bags (the majority laden with my rather large collection of writings) for the most part of the two-day journey, finally managing to gain this ridge in a last fit of desperation. From my current vantage-point, the ridges of the sixth level still seemed as far from me as ever – mere vaguely-defined blurs in the dark, rain-streaked sky above. Cautiously, I stretched out one leg, still shivering uncontrollably, and stirred the dully-hissing embers of my meagre campfire, hoping to evoke some heat from the heap of embers. Sighing – a painfully-brief hiss of air, expelled through teeth, to greet an answering plume of mist in the cold air- I drew in my limbs and curled into a ball. Scant protection from the onrushing wind, but it was all I could think of in the frenzy of the storm-driven rain that lashed on, unabated, from the mass of dark clouds that towered far above the lake.

 After a few haggard minutes of the torture of maintaining my technically-challenging position and the driving rain that still seemed to lash in silvery, flailing strands at my unprotected body –no matter how I squirmed. I stood once more, shivering, as I gave the lake a brief, cursory glance. It sufficed to confirm my worries as abject –unwelcome- truth. I was going to have to go on. I clutched my sodden garments closer around myself to preserve what precious heat I could, and set out into the storm, clutching my heavily-laden bag with a fervent, desperate grip that remained only by reflex. I trudged along the steep path, scrambling upwards, scrabbling frenziedly against the movement of the fallen scree and rubble that marred at regular intervals the otherwise-serviceable path. My breath came fast, in wheezing hisses of indrawn air, expelled hastily. My bare feet, numb to the biting cold, trod the piles of jagged rubble with uncaring regularity; my weary, exhausted mind barely registering the runnels of blood that must have drenched them.

 I can barely remember the remainder of that night - perhaps because I have no wish to. Recollection is often unwanted. A familiar visitor you dislike but who nevertheless continues to intrude upon the peaceful –empty-silence of your mind. I suppose that is why I write this, reader. Perhaps if I pour out my memories onto paper; preserve them in ink for common sight, drive them from me, I will be able to forget. Yes. Even I have something to forget.

I mislead you, reader, as my mind wonders. Forgive me my paltry ramblings. I refer, reader, to what happened after that meagre storm. I suppose I can take a certain haggard comfort in that inadequate comparison.