Much better than the original post. I hope you don't mind if I continue to make comments.
I love that you keep making comments!
The ranks do need to be a bit more descriptive rp wise.
when it comes to the gods, we know there are glyphs and such (and we are crazy esque) but we dont think talad made them, we think in the eternal ebbs and flows of chaos and order, things are created.
the crafts seem way too high in hindsight thanks, i think ill make the lower ranks try to work on crafting, also the crafting rank can still exist but be lower ranked, maybe a rank for armorers? for lower level members.
drudge shouldnt be first, check the dictionary entry on slunk, id rather be a drudge than a slunk!
thanks so much, for now i cant make these edits, but i think tara will take what you said and edit.
THanks so much

that got messed up, w.e
also the gp system should be added, is simple and tara has a copy!
tara didnt add the system

but here it is
recruiting gets someone 1 GP, when the recruit ranks to initiate, the recruiter gets 4 additional GP
donations [increments of 5k only]:
amount - GP
first donation - 1
25k - 1
50k - 2
75 - 2
100 - 2
each additional 100k - 3
limit is at 1.5 mil right now
other ways:
helping, at talons discretion
missions, at talons discretion based on the mission