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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #15 on: November 04, 2009, 11:03:23 pm »
Wow, that image scares the DR out of me with those fierce colors! xD
It's great to see you back in business, Jac! It was fun to RP with you once again, I really missed it :)


Shangshi and Rigwyn are going to make Mellas very, very angry if she finds out what they're up to.
So far Shangshi is hiding it extremely well though, kudos there.
Looking forward to see how this progresses!  ;D


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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #16 on: November 06, 2009, 02:28:08 am »
"Nightmare"
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(23:55:29) Jacula tilts his head, resting on the pillow. As he appears to have fallen asleep.
 (23:56:35) Mellas leans over Jacula to place a soft kiss on his lips. 'You'll be okay,' she whispers once again, resting by his side.
[WARNING: This post contains graphic material that might be disturbing to read - if you are easily offended, please skip this post, thank you.]

*A deep blood-red sky. The crystal is black, releasing a chaotic glow instead of normal light. A black mist rides low over Hydlaas filthy streets. A small ynnwn boy stands in the middle of the darkness, his small stiff hands are covered in blood. agonizing screams slowly fill the air, the boy covers his ears yet a familiar voice cuts through the deafening cries of torment. "Jacula.. Help me". He runs in direction of the soft call for help, panting heavily, nostrils flailing. as fast as his small legs can carry him. A nolthrir stands in the middle of the decay, her gaze hollow and lifeless. Jacula approaches, realizing it's Mellas he throws himself in her arms, holding her tightly. She does not react, nor respond. 'Mellas?' he whimpers. She looks at him with hollow eyes. A thunderous roar suddenly fills the air, its echo jumping between the demolished buildings, what appears to be a black smog looms from the filthy street closing in on them fast.

Jacula grabs Mellas hand, pulling her from her petrified state. Dead bodies lay in heaping mounds. they run endlessly over the decaying corpses. Mellas then trips and the force of the fall rips her hand away from Jaculas. He stops in his tracks, watching the smog as it closes in, he reaches for her when he realizes he cannot move, bound to his predicament by forces unknown he screams to her "Run! save yourself" his eyes lock with hers, As she finally manages to stand. A wave of tears streams down her face, yet her hazel eyes remain hollow. The thick black smog engulfs her completely. She lets out torturous screams of terror as her tiny body is instantly overwhelmed by excruciating pain. Her screaming cuts a hole through Jaculas heart, with every muscle in his body he tries to save her, yet he is too weak. Left to watch helplessly. The acid-like smog eats relentlessly through her flesh, blood pouring down her face, disfiguring it beyond recognition. Her skin has all but disappeared, leaving only vulnerable muscle exposed against the merciless smog. Her bare skull is visible, and yet she continues to shriek in torment. The boy watches until her bones crumple and are finally gone all together. The smog fades.. Jacula is left standing, frozen, doomed to destroy everything he touches.

Jacula awakes, soaking in cold sweat. The room is dark and quiet, his heart pounds wildly as he sits up in the soft bed. He notices Mellas laying beside him, peacefully sleeping. He softly caresses her cheek 'I thought I had lost you..' he whispers. He slowly gets to his feet, making his way down the spiral staircase and up to narrow stairs to the tavern roof. The cool night air caresses the the sweat from his chest. He sits on the ledge, gazing out over the sleepy streets of Hydlaa. He is weary.. Something is not right, yet he can't put his finger on it. He watches the azure sun rise wondering what the coming day will hold for him.


"He sits on the ledge, gazing out over the sleepy streets of Hydlaa."
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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #17 on: November 06, 2009, 09:07:35 am »
nice fanservice, Jacula  :P

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #18 on: November 06, 2009, 01:02:24 pm »
Shangshi and Rigwyn are going to make Mellas very, very angry if she finds out what they're up to.

So far i dont actually remember doing anything wrong??

*Shangshi thinks things are backwards*

This does look very interesting Jacula, I look forward to seeing where the whole RP leads.

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2009, 02:48:35 pm »
Wow, just wow. I was watching Sweeney Todd when I got home with the server being down.
Jac, the way you described that nightmare gave me the shivers! Love the image you added too <3


So far i dont actually remember doing anything wrong??

You didn't yet, keep it that way ;)
I have this funny feeling you're going to twist something again, really.

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #20 on: November 06, 2009, 02:52:58 pm »
nice fanservice, Jacula  :P

To be honest I didn't realize i had fans  ::) the event as a whole is part of Jacula's development as a character, though if you enjoy it feel free to comment and let me know what you think. Peoples opinions is great motivation to me, it fuels my evil plots so to speak  :devil:

This does look very interesting Jacula, I look forward to seeing where the whole RP leads.

I agree, there is a good mixture of role-players contributing to this event, I think it has a good chance of being something truly special.  :thumbup:

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #21 on: November 06, 2009, 11:15:18 pm »
I enjoy your RPs Jacula! :D It is nice to see one character develop through his decisions and other variables. ^_^ I look forward to your next one.

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #22 on: November 07, 2009, 02:59:25 am »
Havn't had a chance to RP with you Jac but you seem to put these things together real nicely  :)
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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #23 on: November 07, 2009, 03:38:35 am »
The nightmare post was chilling Jac! You write very well :]  \\o//

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #24 on: November 07, 2009, 10:44:24 am »
"Paranoia"
[WARNING: This post contains graphic material that might be disturbing to read - if you are easily offended, please skip this post, thank you.]
"wondering what the coming day will hold for him."


Jacula made his way out of the tavern, rays of the azure sun seeped through the narrow streets of Hydlaa. The Artisans and hawkers had once again gathered in the plazaa, looking to earn a honest tria or two from the purses of newly awaken commoners. Jacula however was not one of them, he made his way towards gurgontid, on light feet he walked the path in the enchanted forest. He perked up his ears at the sound of unknown footsteps behind him, weary of being followed he looked over his shoulder the footsteps gradually terminated into soft slight thuds which seemed to linger on the dusty path before giving away to a stillness that seemed almost melancholy. Jacula kept a dagger hidden in his sleeve, the idea of people following him and deceptive tongues passing his secrets onto others had grown to a obsession on his part.

Gurgontid had not changed, the kra architecture and the endless toil at the mines remained,  as if time had been standing still. Jacula made his way up the ramp and into the stonehead tavern, in search of something to quench his thirst. A Ynnwn female approaches as he enters..


(19:51:08) >Kauwela Marsuina greets Jacula Pundactum.
(19:51:22) Kauwela says: Hello there sir.
(19:51:37) Jacula nods slightly in Kauwelas direction 'Greetings miss, what brings you here?'
(19:51:53) Kauwela says: Oh...I kind of stay here...
(19:52:49) Jacula raises an eyebrow suspiciously 'what do you mean?'
(19:55:25) Jacula looks around the tavern, he smirks as he realizes him and Kauwela are the only ones present.
(19:55:38) Kauwela says: Well...this is where I meet people, entertain, you know?
(19:55:45) Kauwela smiles back to Jacula.
(19:56:39) Jacula tilts his head and shoots her an interested look 'Entertain you say, are you some sort of artist?'
(19:56:55) Kauwela says: Ah, I dance...
(19:58:12) Kauwela whispers into Jacula's ear.
(19:58:39) [Tell] Kauwela tells you: "I can provide more...intimate forms of entertainment as well."
(19:59:16) Jacula frowns and takes a step back.
(20:00:10) Jacula shakes his head, as if disappointed 'I think you have misjudged me.. miss'
(20:01:04) Kauwela looks disappointed as well "I take it you are not interested in such entertainment?"
(20:03:45) Jacula shoots her a manipulative smile 'I did not say that, did I?'
(20:04:24) Kauwela says: What did you mean when you said I misjudged you?
(20:06:07) Jacula scratches the back of his head 'Let's just say I prefer treating a woman right'
(20:06:22) Kauwela says: Oh.
(20:06:45) Kauwela smiles "Alright."
(20:07:05) Jacula continues to manipulate Kauwela 'Care to come with me? I'd like to show you something'
(20:07:53) Kauwela says: Sure.
(20:08:03) Jacula casualy looks around the tavern with a calming demeanor before walking towards the exit.
(20:08:14) Jacula gestures to Kauwela to follow him.

The two Ynnwns make their way up one of the gurgontid towers where they are met by a stunning view, Jaculas intentions however is fueled by his paranoia.


(20:09:20) Jacula looks out over Gurgontid, 'beautiful, isn't it?'
(20:09:28) Kauwela says: Yes...it is indeed.
(20:10:08) Jacula suddenly moves to Kauwelas back, blocking her exit. Leaving her standing on the edge of the tower
(20:10:50) Kauwela faces Jacula, looking him up and down.
(20:11:30) Jacula unsheats a dagger strapped to his hip, pointing it at her throat 'I see through you miss.. You are no different from the other rats in the sewer'
(20:11:57) Kauwela says: What rats in the sewer?
(20:12:03) Jacula seems paranoid, on the edge of a violent outburst
(20:12:38) Kauwela looks confused.
(20:12:58) Jacula growls 'the tables are turned now however.. Tell me, who sent you?'
(20:13:25) Kauwela says: Nobody sent me...what is this you speak of?
(20:14:47) Jacula sneers, he lets the dagger travel down her throat, pointed to her chest 'Don't play games with me, I'll make you talk. Last chance, who sent you?'
(20:15:36) Kauwela says: I still don't know what you speak of.
(20:16:16) Jacula growls as he tries to push Kauwela backwards, closer to the edge.
(20:16:22) Kauwela looks baffled by the questions "And what do you mean, someone sent me?"
(20:16:42) Kauwela takes one small step back as her hand slips into a slit-pocket in her skirt.
(20:17:33) Jacula seems paranoid, his hands trembling 'Why did you approach me in the tavern?'
(20:17:54) Kauwela says: Oh...business has been slow for me...I thought you might be interested.
(20:18:11) Kauwela says: I haven't seen someone in the Stonehead in a little while.
(20:18:17) Jacula grimaces, he seems unstable as his eyes widen.
(20:19:15) Kauwela says: What did you think I was? Sent to kill you?
(20:20:02) Jacula draws a axe strapped on his back 'You stink of lies you rotten wench, they will never get me.. You can tell her that.' he exclaims as he suddenly swings the axe, aiming for Kauwelas thigh 'After you die!' he roars
(20:20:41) Kauwela quickly steps back and slips out a dagger.
(20:21:12) Jacula charges forward, slashing wildly after Kauwela.
(20:22:21) Kauwela ducks a slash, and then steps in, going for a stab at the underside of his left armpit.
(20:23:47) Jacula grunts as the blade cuts into his armpit, his left arm rendered useless. He tries to grasp a handful of her hair with his other hand instinctively.
(20:24:28) Kauwela has her hair grabbed as she pulls the dagger free.
(20:26:43) Kauwela then goes for a stab at his right armpit as she steps to her left slightly.
(20:27:31) Jacula grits his teeth as the blade is pulled from his armpit, as blood stream down his side violently rips her closer to the edge as she tries to stab him again.
(20:28:45) Kauwela is thrown off balance and partially falls off the edge, her left hand clawing for a grip on the stone.
(20:29:57) Jacula puts his foot on Kauwelas exposed fingers 'Tell her.. that they will never get me!' he pants, before trying to crush her fingers under his foot
(20:31:10) Kauwela manages to get her right hand up on the ledge before her left hand is stepped on and tries to vault herself up onto the ledge, attempting to clamber back on.
(20:32:44) Jacula grunts, aiming a kick for Kauwelas face as she tries to vault herself up onto the ledge.
(20:33:30) Kauwela is kicked in the face and loses her grip on the ledge, falling down.
(20:34:13) Kauwela tumbles off the lip and lands on the ramp awkwardly, injuring both legs and her right shoulder and arm in the process.
Jacula watches as the Ynnwn falls to the hard ground below, she lands with a backbreaking thud. The contrast of her red skin and the white stone ground keeps Jacula standing on the ledge of the tower for a few minutes, he cloaks himself in his filthy robe and makes his way down, checking on her seemingly lifeless body.

"The contrast of her red skin and the white stone ground keeps Jacula standing on the ledge of the tower for a few minutes"

(20:34:30) Jacula walks up to Kauwelas body, to check if she is still alive.
(20:34:57) Kauwela lays there, breathing hard.
(20:36:05) Jacula puts his foot on Kauwelas throat, slowly increasing the weight put on it 'Now.. Who sent you wench?'
(20:36:38) Kauwela tries to scream, but isn't able to get much out "Nobody...."
(20:37:31) Jacula leaves her as there is a crowd approaching 'they will never get me..' he whispers to her, before walking away swiftly. 'Maybe she didn't know' his conscience reminds him. He justifies his own means to himself 'One can never be too careful'..

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #25 on: November 07, 2009, 10:58:29 am »
I knew you were crazy....... but then I've always known that. Can't wait to get directly invovled and find out whats going on, but i have my ideas..

*Makes a note to follow Jacula to make him more paranoid and then waits for laanx*

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #26 on: November 07, 2009, 03:22:35 pm »
I enjoy your RPs Jacula! :D It is nice to see one character develop through his decisions and other variables. ^_^ I look forward to your next one.
Thanks  :) it's nice to know that people are enjoying it.
Havn't had a chance to RP with you Jac but you seem to put these things together real nicely  :)
I don't know much about your character IC, though as anybody you are welcome to join. Send me a PM and we can work something out, same goes for anybody wishing to join.
The nightmare post was chilling Jac! You write very well :]  \\o//
Thanks, I have worked hard on my English, it's nice to know that it paid off.  8)
I knew you were crazy....... but then I've always known that. Can't wait to get directly involved and find out whats going on, but i have my ideas..

Rping a crazy person Is fun, though I have come to find that it's tricky to react as lets say a person who is paranoid would. And for the record to all the players out there, I'm not acctually crazy IRL  :D

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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #27 on: November 07, 2009, 07:22:08 pm »
The two Ynnwns make their way up one of the gurgontid towers where they are met by a stunning view, Jaculas intentions however is fueled by his paranoia.

I believe Kauwela is a 'drop-dead gorgeous Diabolo girl'.

<3 male players playing their idealistic girlfriends.


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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #28 on: November 09, 2009, 07:41:01 pm »
"Drunk and weary"
[WARNING: This post contains graphic material that might be disturbing to read - if you are easily offended, please skip this post, thank you.]
(20:37:31) Jacula leaves her as there is a crowd approaching 'they will never get me..' he whispers to her, before walking away swiftly. 'Maybe she didn't know' his conscience reminds him. He justifies his own means to himself 'One can never be too careful'..

Jacula found himself sulking in Kada-els tavern. "Had the paranoid thoughts gone to his head?" he had asked himself numerous times. He was indeed a devious man, hardened through battle and a broken childhood. Yet beneath his exterior there was guilt and regret. He choked down another mug of red liquor, it's fierce taste soothing his conscience, if only for a while.  
Drunken and weary, Jacula found himself in a argument with another man who was no doubt searching for answers in the bottom of his mug as well. Intoxication may have been a factor, yet Jacula had noticed the presence of a certain eavesdropper..


(12:15:22) Mogweh stands on the stairs silently listening to the conversation below
(12:15:23) Jacula glances over at Sillamon and then back at Corakek 'how about you buy me another ale and we forget all about this?' he scoffs mockingly
(12:15:36) Sillamon inches away from the bar slowly
(12:16:22) Corakek sizes up the battle hardened fighter before him and contemplates for a moment
(12:17:35) Corakek says: to show your good faith i suggest that you buy a round for us both.
(12:18:39) Corakek says: we wouldn't want any ill will between three gentlemen on such a night as this now would we?
(12:18:50) Sillamon grins and intersects "I do like beer .."
(12:19:52) Mogweh nods to the diaboli as they pass, but says nothing.
(12:20:23) Jacula frowns, tempted to punch Corakek in the face. yet instead he shoots him a disturbing smile 'Very well elf, let's forget about this incident' before he throws an octa before his feet 'There is a sign of my good faith' he sneers
(12:20:31) >Jacula Pundactum dropped an Octa.
(12:21:19) Jacula takes a seat, seeming somewhat weary as he looks around the room.
(12:21:35) Corakek says: i will assume you mean for me to humble myself and buy us all a round...very well ynnwn, for civility.
(12:23:20) Corakek says: do you want anything in particular then my good sir?
(12:23:29) Sillamon says: Beer
(12:23:36) Sillamon smiles happily.
(12:23:39) Corakek says: good man
(12:23:44) Jacula glares over at Corakek 'Make with a beer elf'

A discussion follows, yet Jacula's focus remains on Mogweh. He decides to leave, with his balance slightly off he staggers down the steep steps leading to the red crystal den. He supports himself against a building nearby, carefully listening and waiting. Sure enough a Menki rushes down the stairs, surprisingly Mogweh walks up the post by the read crystal den, ready a sign nailed to it. In Jacula's mind however, it's a mere diversion..

(12:47:08) Mogweh reads the sign on the post shifting uneasily
(12:47:38) Jacula watches Mogaweh, attempting not to get noticed.
(12:48:40) Jacula studies the menki, weary of his intentions.
(12:49:09) Mogweh turns round to leave, seeing Jacula looking over at him he says pointing at the sign,'just looking for job'
(12:50:14) Jacula narrows his eyes and takes a step back, his right hand resting on the dagger hidden in his sleeve.
(12:51:52) Mogweh hold up his hands in peace and stammers,'I - I mean you no harm sir. I was just passing through looking for a friend of mine when I saw this sign. '
(12:52:55) Jacula sneers at Mogweh and heads into the dark alley behind him 'Don't follow me rat, if you value your life'

Maybe the Menki is just another commoner he thought to himself. Maybe his mind was playing tricks on him again. The light thuds of Careful steps can be heard behind him, was the Menki following him after all? he leaned into the wall lurking in the shadows, holding his breath. Knowing that he had to act fast, ruthless and most importantly, keep his follower alive long enough to get some answers.

(12:55:53) Mogweh stops and look around not seeing Jacula.
(12:57:53) Jacula holds his breath as Mogweh walks past him, he sneaks up behind him. putting his arm around his neck, he squeezes with all his strength trying to put him to sleep.
(12:58:50) Mogweh hears the approach with a well trained ear and as he feels the arms go around his throat he attempts to step back and to the side twisting his neck free.
(13:00:04) Jacula grunts as Mogweh squirms out of his grip, he pivots to the side and unsheats the dagger hidden in his sleeve, aiming it towards Mogwehs spine in a violent stab.
(13:01:35) Mogweh says: seeing the dagger fly towards him he jumps back and to the side attempting to grab the dagger hand as he does and manages to cut his arm in the process.
(13:03:02) Jacula sneers as Mogweh grabs his wrist. He drops the dagger to the ground as he charges forwards, trying to tackle Mogweh into the wall behind them.
(13:04:39) Mogweh hits his head and the breath is knocked out of him as the force of Jacula pins him to the wall. Desperately he tries to push the man aside.
(13:07:24) Jacula keeps Mogweh pinned against the wall with his weight, locking his eyes with his. 'Filth from the sewers like you should know better' he exclaims. He seems paranoid as he quickly looks around for onlookers. He tries to grab Mogwehs throat and sneers through gritted teeth 'Who sent you?'
(13:08:54) Mogweh stammers,'s-sent me nobody s-sent me. I was looking for a f-friend of mine -a dwarf, he's very sick.'

A dwarf, very sick.. Sillamon the elderly dwarf. There was no way Mogweh could have mistaken his presence in the tavern earlier, if he was indeed a friend of his as he claimed, a clever alibi.. Yet Jacula could see through it. At this point Jacula was convinced that the Menki was sent by people wishing him harm.

(13:11:19) Jacula growls, as he squeezes Mogwehs throat. Unsheating a curved, razor sharp dagger strapped to his thigh with his other hand 'you will talk sooner or later, how about you save yourself a lot of pain. And stop playing stupid' a intense anger burns in his eyes, who knows what he might be capable of.
(13:13:53) Mogweh grabs at the hand at his throat and the dagger, making a gagged exclaim,'it's the truth! he's old and blind and really needs my help - please!'

He is good Jacula thought to himself, he had really captured the essence of being helpless. He knew that even the toughest had their breaking point, now it was just the matter of finding it. Be it by persuasion or brute force.

(13:16:43) Jacula frowns at Mogwehs pleads 'Wrong answer!' he exclaims before pointing the curved dagger towards the menki's stomach 'Last chance, who sent you?. make with a name before i gut you like a trepor! he roars, nostrils flailing wildly.
(13:18:45) Mogweh in a desperate attempt to escape the knife aims a heavy blow at Jacula's groin with his knee.
(13:21:27) Jacula is caught off guard and steps back as Mogweh knees him in the groin, his platemail greaves luckily absorbs the most of the blow. He tries to stab the knife into Mogwehs gut as he is pushed back, forcefully ripping it upwards.
(13:24:13) Mogweh sees the hand move upwards but moves too late as the dagger rips through the upper part of his arm. He steps to the side trying to get some distance from Jacular.
(13:26:26) Jacula squints his eyes as Mogwehs blood splatters into them, the charges towards the menki. Trying the kick his supporting leg with the intent of tripping him.
(13:30:16) Mogweh surprised by the move but still agile despite his wounded arm,attempts to dive to the side of jacula forcing him to crash into the wall.
(13:34:17) Jacula bumps into the wall due to his violent attack, he turns around and shoots Mogwehs an icy glare 'You are skilled at avoiding your fate rat, you can run.. But you cannot hide' he reaches for his glypth sack, fidgeting one of them as he points it in Mogweh's direction 'Weakness' he sneers as a dark smog exudes from the glypth
(13:37:17) Mogweh steps back trying to out run the spell. As the smog bears down on him he shouts,'you crazy mad man, I'm just looking for the dwarf, I just want to help the dwarf!!'
(13:38:53) Jacula watches the smog weaken Mogweh, he rushes forward leaning into a punch aimed at his jaw, with the intention of knocking him out.
(13:42:04) Mogweh weakened by the smog, his limbs heavy and unresponsive he takes the full force of the blow and falls to the ground. As his vision dims and black spots form before his eyes, he murmurs,'Mellas' then passes out.
(13:42:33) >Mogweh Parduu takes a seat.
(13:46:36) Jacula regrets knocking him out upon hearing Mellas name, he quickly searches his body. Realizing he has mistaken the menki for a assassin. 'Impossible!' he think to himself as He cloaks himself in his filthy robe and kneels down next to him, putting his curved dagger to his throat. Hesitant about ending his life.
(13:46:48) >Jacula Pundactum takes a seat.
(13:51:44) Jacula closes his eyes, what has he become.. A murderer without the sense of right and wrong? a paranoid madman who shed the blood of innocents? he opens his eyes, his dagger still pressed against Mogwehs throat
(13:53:27) Mogweh begins to come round mumbling,'Mellas, must find..Mellas.'. Slowly his eyes open and flinches, shocked at his situation and at his fate staring down on him.
(13:55:16) Jacula stares into Mogwehs eyes from inside the darkness of his hood. He keeps the dagger pressed against his throat and whispers 'Who is this.. Mellas, and why must you find her?'
(13:58:29) Mogweh gags as the dagger presses into his throat and replies weakly,'I've never met her, but I think she can help me with Sillamon. She's good see, a good person... if you can imagine such a thing in this city.''
(14:02:24) Jacula whispers 'You where at the wrong place at the wrong time.. Don't be afraid. It will all be over soon' With a swift slash he cuts into Mogwehs throat with his eyes closed. Ravished by guilt, yet knowing that he cannot leave any loose ends behind.
(14:07:43) Mogweh flinches as the dagger cuts through his throat. Blood spews out and he gurgles pitiful but indecipherable words. Holding on to Jacula's arm as he looks into his eyes in one final desperate attempt at mercy.'
(14:10:29) Jacula pins Mogwehs hand on his chest, sheating the knife as he puts his other hand on his forehead 'Shh.. Close your eyes.' he whispers.
(14:13:00) Mogweh subcomes to the blood loss and slowly his life slips away.
(14:13:39) Jacula watches as the stone ground beneath them turns red, he closes Mogwehs eyes with his fingers before slowly getting to his feet.
(14:13:42) >Jacula Pundactum stands up.
(14:15:41) Jacula shoots Mogweh a final glance, before he heads out of the dark alley. not knowing what to believe anymore, failed by his instincts and tortured by his guilty conscience.

"Jacula shoots Mogweh a final glance, before he heads out of the dark alley."
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Re: [RP] The Guilt Of Jacula
« Reply #29 on: November 10, 2009, 06:44:13 am »
This RP was really amazing! A fantastic read, I could visualize it happening in my mind so easily!
Congrats to both of you ;D


The realism of the fight was great, both parties evading and taking hits, keep it up. I can't wait to be reading more! ;)