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The Shrine
« on: November 14, 2009, 04:43:43 am »
Prologue
Lightning rent the firmament, silhouetting the small village momentarily before the black of night took it once more. The traveler pushed on toward the hamlet, the torrential downpour turning the road into slurry that came up to the ankles of his worn leather boots. His thick cloak - proof against the cold and moderate rain - was, like the rest of his clothes, soaked through and clinging to his muscular frame. Falling in sheets, the rain battered at the wide brim of his hat drooping it down to obscure his view. Every dozen or so paces he pushed up the brim with a gloved hand, dislodging collected water, to check he had not wandered off the road, which was being rapidly dissolved into the adjacent farmer`s fields.
Another flash of actinic white light illuminated the low thatched roofs and toward the center of the town a towering steeple capped with a statue. As thunder boomed not far off he trudged on past the town signboard and an abandoned guard hut; the sentinel having sought more substantial shelter probably not anticipating visitors in such inclement weather. And in truth, the traveler would not have been there had he had the choice, but duty called. He gently patted the leather satchel under his cloak, thinking of the fine vellum scroll kept within and half suspecting that the storm raging overhead had been summoned by some god hostile to his mission in attempt to ruin his fragile burden.
He anticipated that like most such small settlements a tavern could be found not far from the entrance to the village and it was not long till he craned his head back, rain hammering his hand as he shielded his eyes, to squint in the darkness at the signboard of the Sword and Prayer. It was a half-timbered structure of typical ylian construction, the upper floor jutting out over the lower. Dirty, crumbling white plaster covered the stonework between the stout beams of black wood. With the shutters closed and only a little light bleeding out between the slats over the windows of the upper floor the traveler approached the door and hammered upon it with his fist. But his efforts, even shouting out, were to no avail as the storm swallowed all sound.
He moved from house to house, peering at windows and knocking at doors but never was he answered by anything more than the extinguishing of what light he could discern within. His hopes of successfully finding shelter failing, he was about to return to the tavern and check behind, hoping to find a stable. A bed of damp straw shared with reeking goujahs would suffice...but it was then that another fork was cast down from above, this time striking the statue atop the temple spire itself. The traveler nodded to himself and forged onward toward the middle of the village, crossing a small arch bridge with a river raging below. He soon had a better view of the temple spire itself, though the rest of the building was hidden from sight by a stone wall at least twice his own height. This brought a frown to his face, but his journey - still unfinished - had been long and the constant downpour sapped his strength. He began to circumnavigate the wall keeping under the eaves of buildings opposite when he could, noting that while he had seen candle light from within some houses earlier, those here in the middle of the town seemed devoid of all signs of occupancy. Were he not an honourable man he might have forced entry. Continuing round he found a wooden staircase leading up the stone wall that surrounded the temple to a small platform level with the top of the wall. The inhabitants of small hamlets were, he knew, given to strange customs and local ways, so he dismissed the curiosity as such and darted out from under the eaves of the house opposite, almost slipping in the muddy road, to clamber up the rickety stairs. Stood atop the platform he could see the rooftops of the village stretching out to all sides as lightning struck the tower yet again. He could also see the temple grounds, stretching from the base of the wall to the baroque colonnades of the house of worship itself. High hedgerows lined pale gravel paths toward the arched portico, a maw of impenetrable darkness.
On the other side of the wall he found neither accompanying platform nor staircase and so lowered himself down into the shadowy grounds. For a moment he thought he heard a shout from somewhere in the village, but a roar of thunder overhead obliterated all other sound. Checking his satchel once more and resolving to question the temple`s priest about the queer staircase and platform he dashed between the shadowy hedges, his boots crunching the gravel underfoot, and entered the temple.

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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #1 on: November 14, 2009, 08:31:45 am »
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As was common in the days after a storm, the air was clear and the Azure sun shone bright and hot overhead. Insects, those that had escaped drowning in the downpour, chirped and droned in the fields of battered and wind-whipped crops. The road was strewn with fallen trees, uprooted crops and as he neared the village, smashed tiles which had been torn from roofs. Even now days later farmers still roamed the fields assessing the damage and doing what they could to salvage their livelihoods. He spotted one couple erecting a humanoid effigy of braided straw and propping it against a tree in one of their fields before bowing their heads toward it in entreaty.
The guard hut was empty but he could see villagers moving about, doing their best to repair the damage dealt by the storm. The cadence of carpenters` hammers and saws accompanied him as he made his way up the road to peer up at the tavern sign, the hood of his habit shading his eyes against the bright sunlight. The heavy oak door creaked as he pulled it open and stepped inside, the cool shadows of the interior pushed back by the scented candle burning atop his staff. The bar itself was deserted; the locals too busy for drinking. Making his way across the sawdust-strewn wooden floorboards he perched himself atop a stool at the bar and leaned across it, looked past the rack of large barrels against the back wall, to a doorway that lead into the back and presumably the tavern-keeper`s home. No one was in sight. In fact, but for the now subdued sound of carpentry outside in the street, the only sound was the trickle of water into a simple yet functional clay clepsydra on the mantelpiece. He took in the room, the oaken bar-top polished by decades of elbows resting upon it, the rustic wooden furniture no doubt made by one of the carpenters now working outside or one of their sires. Upon the wall above the fireplace and the water-clock was an age-browned tapestry of a pearly-skinned maiden with a head of silky hair and penetrating red eyes, a silver anklet her sole adornment. His own deep violet eyes settled upon it and he left the stool to appraise it closer, his candle illuminating the fine threads, not noticing when the stocky Kore bartender entered the room.
“An original Hythoret, that is,” he said, thick forearms crossed over his stained apron and a proud smile upon his face.
The other jumped somewhat, having become lost in his study of the needlework and turned to face the enkidukai with raised eyebrows. His pale skin and light purple hair denoted him as lemur, his candle-topped staff and his garb of a habit embroidered with a snaking pattern on his back indicated both his faith and his occupation.
The enkidukai nodded, “the master weaver himself stayed here when my pa was but a cub, on his way up to the Dome. A pilgrimage. Stopped to give worship at our temple and decided to stay the night.” He nodded his head toward the far corner, “Didn`t have a single tria on him but sat there all night weaving and stitching and gave my grandpa that there tapestry in payment.”
The lemur smiled at the story. He was somewhat of a student of folklore and loved to hear such tales. As he made his way back to the bar, sparing the humble work of art one more glance, he withdrew a pipe and a bag of smoking-weed from his satchel.
“Actually, it is similar circumstances which bring me here now,” he said as he packed the long-stemmed pipe, accepting a lit taper from the barkeep with a grateful smile.
“Oh? We get a lot passing through here, little stopover on the way up to the Dome. I`m guessing you`re bound for the Iron Temple too then?”
The young lemur let smoke curl from his mouth and shook his head a fraction. “Actually I`m in search of one who was. A ylian male by the name of Lybethi, about your height, just into manhood. Always wears a wide-brimmed hat. He should have passed through the Jillian swamp, came this way and arrived at Nalvys and the Winch yestreen but didn`t.”
The enkidukai frowned, “Then he`d`ve been here about two days ago?”
The lemur nodded and asked, “When did the storm hit?” but he could guess from the enkidukai`s expression.
“Don`t know that we had any visitors that day,” the menki admitted with a shrug, “had the doors and windows locked, shutters down almost two days straight while the sky tore itself apart. I can`t say as you`ll find anyone, but you can always ask the other townspeople. P`raps he got lucky and some kind soul let him in.”
“Could he have stayed at the temple?”
The menki looked down, “Ain`t no shelter to be had there.”
The lemur nodded sensing he would get little more, left a hexa upon the bar-top and bowing once to the tapestry above the fireplace he headed back out into the bright sunlight and heat.

Most of the locals ignored him as he passed, too engrossed in their work to pay attention to travelers and he made his way up the road toward the center of the village, the path underfoot still sticky with mud in the gutters and dusty where the sun had already dried out the filth washed into the streets. He could see the temple`s tower, rising high above the other buildings of the village, but the bright light prevented him from seeing its peak clearly.
A commotion surrounded the small stone bridge before the village square, peasants in muck-splattered clothing struggling with ropes and leaning over the side of the structure while others labored in the brown waist-high water. Approaching them he received brief glances but was quickly dismissed as `an outsider` and the villagers continued their work until he too peered over the stonework to find those in the mire struggling to free something from the mud and debris blocking the waterway. He was about to continue on his way toward the temple when he noticed what it was they were trying to extract. One of them held a long, pale object one end of which vanished into the mass under the bridge, the other end of which terminated in five wrinkled fingers.
He looked on in horror as the bloated corpse was dragged from the morass, skin the pale white of fish bellies and covered in livid purple bruises. The villagers struggled to get the slippery body up out of the water and onto the bank, the lemur pulling himself out of his shock to help lay the burden upon the muddy ground. The storm and flood had evidently swept the individual - a ylian male, he noted with concern - into the river and trapped them under the bridge, drowning them in slurry. Clothes, torn and coloured a uniform brown by the river, stuck to the body and its face was badly swollen. He brushed long, matted hair from the face for a better look, fearing it would reveal Lybethi`s honourable countenance only for a woman at his side to emit a piercing wail and collapse over the body in tears, relatives rushing to comfort her.
He rose from his knees, shaking his head at the needless loss to find the villagers nodding their thanks to him. One, a dwarven male thrust a tough, calloused hand into his and shook it. His thick black beard was flecked with crusting mud and his chest heaved with exertion.
“I thank you, stranger. Don`t know what brings you here but I`m sorry you find us in this state. Our town doesn`t exactly have the best of luck.”
The lemur introduced himself, receiving the villager`s name in return. Nimra Reddcairn.
“I am actually here looking for a companion of mine. A ylian man by the name of Lybethi. He should have passed through here two days ago...during the storm.” The Lemur`s eyes moved back to the drowned villager and those grieving around him.
Nimra shook his head, “Haven`t heard of anyone coming here during the storm, friend. If he didn`t find shelter at the tavern...well...I doubt anyone would`ve opened their doors. Ain`t safe at night, never mind the storm.”
The lemur frowned and asked the other to explain.
The dwarf took a moment to compose his thoughts, “There aren`t enough of us who know how to wield a blade, or not well enough to guard against the beasts that roam at night, you see?”
The lemur`s head bobbed in understanding. Yliakum was a land full of dangers and though the Octarchal council did it`s best to protect the levels with their guards, there were only so many soldiers and the threats were great. Remote or small settlements often had to fend for themselves. In some cases this meant civilian militias or brigades. In others it meant locking your doors and shutters tight when the darkness came.
“He must`ve pushed on, tried to make it to the Winch by daybreak,” the dwarf suggested but the lemur felt that there was something more to what he was being told. Almost as if it was being suggested that he too should move on in his search. That Lybethi would have crossed the Gillian swamp, the countryside outside the village during the storm and then pushed on through the town into the countryside beyond was all but unbelievable. His eyes were drawn to the sun-silhouetted temple spire again and the dwarf followed his gaze before shaking his head.
“Ain`t no one in there, of that you can be sure.”
“Oh, why is that?”
The dwarf sighed, “Used to be quite a congregation, I`m told. Lot of pilgrims too, on their way up to Hydlaa and Tarbius` Iron Temple. But there were rumours.” He said the word as if it had a bitter taste. “The priest died, a lovely old xacha she was, and the new one just wasn`t the same. You know how folks gossip and tales grow tall.” He waved his hand dismissively, “Well, numbers dwindled till almost no one was showing up, none of the good an` upstanding folks leastways. Parents told fairytales to their children. Said they`d leave them in the temple grounds if they didn`t behave.”
He stopped at the expression on the lemur`s face and seemingly for the first time noticed the stranger`s raiment. Nimra coughed uncomfortably, “I moved here no more than ten years ago and everyone just told me that the place was abandoned and that I should keep my doors locked at night. I do, and all`s well.”
The lemur thanked the dwarf for the information, offering his condolences to the family of the lost, and headed across the village square. He studied the high wall surrounding the temple as he made his way across the square. Never had he seen such a barrier surrounding a temple of Laanx. Aware that the villagers from the river bank might be watching him, and wanting to give them the impression that he had indeed decided to head on toward the Winch in his search for the missing courier, he walked briskly down the road alongside the wall glancing not once at the dark temple spire protruding over the stacked stones. The road turned a corner on its route toward the edge of the village and continued to follow the wall, bringing him to a small wooden door. It did not share the lemur architecture of the temple and was constructed of heavy wood, left unpainted and badly finished, hanging from large iron hinges imbedded in the granite rocks of the wall. He immediately noticed the large, heavy lock hanging on a thick chain on the outside of the door.
Glancing left and right he checked that no one was in sight and proceeded to snuff out the candle atop his staff and remove it. He then carefully braced the strong oaken pole between the ground and the wall, resting his feet upon it so that he could lift himself up onto the top of the wall. He then leaned down to retrieve his staff and lay flat atop the roughly hewn stones for a moment listening both for disturbances and, if he was honest with himself, to catch his breath. He spent much of his days hunched over tomes and sat in prayer. Such physical exertion was a rarity.
He then lowered himself down from the top of the wall to the grounds of the temple and turned to gaze upon the building itself fully for the first time.

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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #2 on: November 14, 2009, 09:16:23 pm »
Very nice! Now we have a second person in the temple grounds  :o. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2009, 02:31:14 am »
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The baroque lemur architecture was there, yet masses of creepers had wormed their way up the walls, constricting round marble columns in a warped attempt to swamp the building. As if the earth were trying to consume the house of worship. The stained glass windows in the wall facing him, seven-sided affairs of what was clearly once fine craftsmanship, were patchy and broken. Not one was complete, with several panes missing and sections leaning inward precariously. As he crossed the greensward he gazed up at the damaged images, a cold feeling seeping into his bones despite the hot light of the Crystal Sun overhead. The feeling worsened as his eyes settled upon the statue atop the temple`s spire. Where once a fine image of the masquerade lord had stood wrought in iron: hands, one grasping a vane-topped staff, held up to the sky, now knelt a melted and sorry figure. Its features had run, rending it faceless and pitiful.
The gravel ground noisily under his boots as he rounded a corner of the edifice to find the yawning entrance flanked by cracked and lichen-covered pillars. Iron spikes protruded from the pillars closest to the doorway though none held the candles they were designed for, rather all were rusted and bare but for a strip of weathered hide dangling on one.
The doorway itself comprised a pair of large doors made of a dark, heavy wood. There was enough peeling crimson paintwork remaining to show that the doors had once been decorated with metal filigree. The holes where nails once held the ornate pieces to the doors too spoke of their looting. But the lemur`s attention was fixed more on the space between the doors, for the left one was slightly ajar with just enough space for a humanoid to slip through, back and chest brushing the ends of the doors. He entered.
Though his studies had not yet extended far into the magical ways, he knew the occasional spell to make his life and duties a little easier. Palming a glyph from the pouch at his belt he summoned a flame small enough to relight the candle atop his staff though the resulting light did not penetrate far into the gloomy narthex.
Stepping into the village tavern had been a cool, pleasant respite from the midday sun, but the chill within the temple was startling and caused him to draw his robes closer. He looked down when his boot disturbed some debris. The thin slice of daylight let in between the doors illuminated a section of mosaic work on the ground in dark purple and grey chips. The light fell across a couple of letters.
hy pa
He knelt, lowering his staff so that the candle lit the ground better and he could see the tiles. It had clearly been the valediction uttered by Laanx worshippers throughout Yliakum, bidding the other a safe journey, except that the middle words of the phrase here upon the temple floor had clearly been chipped up to leave only
May Laanx frighten... ...thy path.
The loose chips his foot had caught comprised the remains of the shadows from and as he traced the edge of the mosaic work he could tell that it had not been common wear and tear that had displaced the stones. They had been forcefully removed as if by a pick and then left as evidence of the vandalism.
A pair of cast-iron sconces flanked the door into the nave and though neither was lit there remained a bundle of pitch-soaked fuel in each cage-like cup. He again summoned small flames and soon both hosted flames that writhed and beat back the shadows. Wasting no time he moved on to the inner doors, noting that these too appeared to have been almost totally stripped of their former decorations, only a twisted sliver of gold wiring hung by a loose nail at one corner. Strange that someone would steal so much and yet leave this one piece. His mind also strayed to speculating on the identity of the looters: the dwarven villager had commented that the last priest of the temple had not been welcomed by the locals...had he aroused their anger such that they would ravage the temple so?
The doors opened with a loud creak that echoed through the expansive nave and he heard small creatures shift far above in the rafters. The main chamber of the temple was lit better than the antechamber behind him due to the windows on both sides. From the outside the damaged, patchy coloured glass images had been dark and foreboding and now lit with the sunlight from outside they were no less disturbing. Their imperfectness turned once-august icons into gaudy mockeries. Immediately to his right were the remains of an depiction of Eonoch: the hero of Laanx who fought a horde of beasts in the Stone Labyrinths before perishing in True Death. The great warrior`s head was missing and his sword was absent: the single, exquisite shard of crystal lying broken in two upon the pews before the window amid other debris. Next was an abstract image of the three eyes of Vooreva. Unified Vigilance. Not a Laanx-symbol per se, but often held with reverence. The trilopean window had been smeared with something dark, pitch or thick mud, blinding it.
He trod carefully up the central aisle through detritus clearly disturbed by someone`s passage not long ago. Following the trail he gazed with despair upon the broken images, passing from shadow to tainted light to shadow again as he made his way forward. The pews were in equal disarray, with threadbare seats and scratch marks presumably from the rats which were sure to have taken up home in the abandoned building. He tightened his grip on his staff in anticipation of a cyclopean rodent scuttling from the shadows in search of fresh meat.
He refrained from looking up at the stained glass window at the very end of the temple, the sacrilegious ruin done to the image of his lord and creator too foul to behold. He found the words of an old prayer, the first his strict patriarch had taught him, coming to his lips in a low whisper, “Forged over the hard hearts of the spurners, with the molten metal of the faithful, and the skilled hammer strikes of the soulful...”
Reaching the chancel he was unsurprised to find the magical brazier dead. There was no mistaking the fact that Laanx had forsaken this house.
“...tend now to the chaos in the Crystal...”
He looked about with remorse, half wondering if he should call out Lybethi`s name yet something stopped him. Desecrated thought it was he could not bring himself to raise his voice here.
A door off to one side lead to a staircase climbing up into the spire of the temple. He peered up to find the tower awash with arangma webs. Surmising that Lybethi could not have come this way he instead turned to the opposite door, though which he found a similar spiral staircase yet this lead down under the thick flagstones and again his candle shed the only illumination. The wooden stairs creaked noisily underfoot and the chamber they lead down to reeked of mould and damp. Evidently a sanctum and room for preparation there was an old wardrobe, its doors open to display parasite-eaten vestments in a similar style to his own robes. Upon a low table to one side stood a bronze candlestick with a landas candle, rivulets of old wax having dried standing out like throbbing veins frozen in time on its sides. About the tabletop were pages from a prayer book, evidently having been torn out and blobs of encrusted wax obscured much of the fine calligraphy.
“...Let his mighty name ring forth in echoes...”
From the room a single wooden door lead off under the temple above. As the lemur pushed at the door the study`s musty odour was replaced by the fetid stench of decay.

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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #4 on: November 15, 2009, 10:35:00 am »
Ok! Where did Lybethi go? Why would he need to get in so deep into this godforsaken place? It was just rain after all!  X-/

More pwease?  :innocent:

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« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2009, 09:26:37 am »
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The original purpose of the next room had been lost to the ages; perhaps it had been a vault beneath the temple for the storage of religious artifacts or a meditative chamber. What the lemur found as he pushed the portal open were rows of cages.
The shadows cast by the iron bars danced across walls crusted with grime and dirt as he carefully moved into the chamber. The far walls were enveloped in darkness; the candle`s light not reaching far. He had not trod more than half a dozen paces before he spotted the cause of the infernal odour: there were several cages nearby, he could see that they appeared to be arranged in rows along the wall and similarly across the room, three of which contained skeletons, withered hunks of rotten meat upon one, taught sheets of emaciated and torn skin stretched over others. He flinched at the sight and brought up his sleeve to cover his mouth and nose in a futile attempt to protect himself from the reek. It had long been the custom for the dead to be disposed of in burial wells: bottomless or exceedingly deep fissures, referred to by some as `Holes in the World`. He had never seen mortal remains in such a state of decay and was turning to flee when something off to his left caught the light of the candle atop his staff and caused him to pause for a second, peering into the darkness at the reflection of the flame upon metal.
He tentatively crept forward until he could see it for what it was: a short, wide blade half-concealed by a dark form on the ground. Moving closer it appeared to be a pile of drapes or other cloth bundled haphazardly on the floor until he noticed the boot extending from under one end and realized he was looking at a crumpled, prone figure, lying half-over a dropped short sword. But for the fact that there was no stench of decay emanating from the body before him he would have turned and left, cursing the temple as the villagers did. But he was here in search of his companion and though he prayed he would not find the body was Lybethi`s, he could not leave without confirming it. And there was the matter of the courier`s burden.
Gingerly he extended a hand toward a fold of the robes on the ground before him and pulled it back to reveal a sight so frightful he recoiled, falling onto his behind and dropping his staff. He was plunged into darkness, the image of Lybethi`s savaged face burned into his mind.
He groped about in a panic, with one hand searching for his staff while trying to remove his Fire glyph once more from his glyph sack with his other. It was then that he heard another sound, between his own rapid breaths. The sound of something moving some distance off to his right, deeper in the chamber. A couple of glyphs clattered to the stone floor from his sack as he hurried even more. His left hand brushed cold, wet flesh but quickly settled round the dry, hard shaft of his quarterstaff. Abandoning his glyphs he instead grabbed the cloth robes swathing the ylian`s body and, pushing himself to his feet with the staff he began to pull the stiff corpse back the way he had come. As he did so he heard movement again, still off deeper in the black chamber. A sound like bare feet being dragged across the stone floor, his mind illustrating the mental picture with bones and scraps of desiccated flesh being brushed aside or trampled underfoot. He heaved at the body even more and dragged it through the doorway into the abandoned study as the lopping footsteps quickened their pace. He would not leave his old friend`s remains in such a place. The top of the short spiral staircase was lit and even that small break in the darkness was enough to raise his spirits.
“... And scatter his enemies in death throes...While awaiting converts at each portal...”
He stepped onto the lowest of the stairs, the old wood creaking under the load but he could not afford to slow his pace; expecting some hideous beast from the depths of the Stone Labyrinths to burst from the shadowy charnel-room at any moment.
He cried out, in surprise as much as pain as the fourth step gave way under him, the jagged edge stabbing into his calf. Summoning all his strength he pulled his leg from the hole, already feeling the trickle of blood from a cut in it, and continued to move up the staircase, his labored breathing drowning out any sound of his mysterious stalker.
Stepping out into the tinted light of the chancel again he slammed the wooden door shut behind him, hoping to trap whatever dwelt below. Lowering Lybethi`s body to the flagstones he heaved at the heavy wooden lectern, dragging it across to the side door and propping it against the portal. Returning to his late comrade`s body he hooked his arm through the strap of the ylian`s satchel and lifted him so as to carry the man on his back. He then set off up the aisle, his left leg throbbing with pain and his eyes fixed on the two burning sconces between the nave and the narthex, the light of day a bright white sliver beyond.
It was as he passed under the blinded gaze of Vooreva that he heard the scrapping of wood being forced across stone and a loud bang that echoed through the cavernous temple as the lectern toppled, followed by the door slamming open against the chancel wall. The lemur lengthened his stride and did not dare look back.
“...for Laanx, highest lord of Yliakum...”
His own gait, weighted down and injured, echoed that of his pursuer and he pushed himself onward with desperation, Lybethi`s cold skin pressing against the back of his neck as he moved though the multiple hues cast from the image of Eonoch.
“...hath made a home of this cold lifeless stone...”
His breathing became eclipsed by the loud, ragged panting from behind and as he darted through the doorway into the narthex, the sconces burning overhead, his flight was suddenly arrested. He stopped dead in his tracks as something held Lybethi with an iron grip. Straining against it he gripped the stone doorframe with his free hand, determined not to let the strap of the ylian`s satchel slip from his shoulder, and thrust his staff against the wall as a lever. It looked as if he would prevail, his boots advancing across the threshold, until he trod upon the loose mosaic chips and his feet slipped from under him. With a cry of shock and pain he collapsed to the floor, landing hard on his injured leg. He still would not look back and scrabbled toward the outer door, the strap securing his friend`s body now held tight in his right hand.
His staff and left hand were first into the Azure Sun`s bright light, his head awash with sweat next as he crawled on his belly and fought the mighty pull of the being still within.
“...and brought souls from the Azure Sun...”
With a final, harsh cry of exertion he heaved once more only to be greeted by a loud snapping sound and he lurched out into the light, the retarding force suddenly lifted. He spun as he struggled to his feet only to see the corpse of the Laanx courier be dragged back into the temple`s shadowy maw and find the satchel, strap broken, remaining in his hand.

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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #6 on: November 18, 2009, 05:44:26 pm »

Ok, so you got me on the edge of my seat leaning into the screen now  :sweatdrop:
Keep it commin  :thumbup:

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« Reply #7 on: November 18, 2009, 05:56:42 pm »
That was crazy great!  :woot: The greatest terror is in our heads! Awwwwwesomeness!!!

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« Reply #8 on: November 19, 2009, 08:47:35 am »
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“I told you not to go in there!” spittle flew from the enraged dwarf`s mouth, flecking his beard as he paced before the lemur; now sat in the tavern, shaking.
“Bloody outsiders!” Nimra continued as the menki bartender slipped past him to set a clay mug before the shaken traveler. He tried to pick it up with one hand but the contents threatened to spill due to his trembling, and he ended up lifting it with both hands. The powerful smell of alcohol struck his nose but it was welcome after the stench he had discovered under the abandoned temple. Only it wasn`t quite abandoned.
“Y-you told me there wasn`t anyone in there,” he stammered. He took a sip of the drink and winced as it burned his throat.
The dwarf, eyes bulging, ceased his pacing and rounded on him, “Aye, I did, and I was bloody right, wasn`t I? If your friend was in there, then it was already too late. Best if you`d just took my ruddy advice and gone on.”
The lemur swallowed another mouthful and managed to meet the dwarf`s gaze. “But there is something alive in there. It chased me out.”
The dwarf turned away and resumed pacing, “Nothing you need worry about. That`s why we have the wall. That`s why we keep our bloody doors shut at night. What is in there doesn`t like the light.” He pointed to the window where a dozen faces outside were pushed up against the glass, watching.
“More`n half of them want my hide for opening the door and getting you out!”
The lemur glanced from the dwarf to the menki and back, “What is living in the temple?”
The bartender looked to the dwarf but Nimra`s eyes were fixed on the lemur and he ignored the question, “Your friend is dead. You have my sympathies, but he`s gone and it`s best you move on.” He nodded toward Lybethi`s satchel on the table between them. “Take heart in the fact you can finish what he started.”
“Laanx does not forgive easily.” The lemur was now looking at the tapestry above the fireplace. “And I could never forgive myself if I did not inter Lybethi properly...nor should you forgive yourselves for what has happened to your temple.” He looked back to the other two at this and the menki averted his eyes.
“I`m no warrior, but I will not leave this village while a house of Laanx is desecrated so. Tell me what I must face.”
The dwarf gave a weary sigh and motioned resignedly to the menki, who pulled up a chair and sat opposite the lemur. He took several minutes to compose his thoughts before raising his head and beginning to tell of the village`s secret.

“That place is naught but a shrine to evil now but for as long as I can remember, the temple here was the heart of the village. Vitandi was a kind old soul but rigid as iron in her doctrine. She made sure the festivities of Ogan were held and enjoyed by all, she held classes in accordance with Noctar every day, Vestru ceremonies when it came to weddings...the full five branches contained within one stooped old xacha.” He smiled as he recalled the priest. “The pews creaked with backsides while she lived...and when she died.”
“Wasn`t long until the Diats saw fit to send a new priest. A young lemur he was, like yourself. Child of Laanx and full of energy. A smile as bright as cut diamonds. Quite a change for all of us, compared to Vitandi, I can tell you. At first a lot of the older folks didn`t like him. Too young...too different...not experienced enough, and it was only the younger ones who went. But as time went by some started listening to what he preached...and liking it. He told tales of Laanx the likes of which none had heard before. Legends of the ten towns of ancient Kadaikos and the masked god`s prosperous rule there. How Laanx had called upon the faithful to cull the unworthy there. It was closer to Vitandi`s old teachings, though with a difference that was,” the enkidukai frowned and struggled to find a word, “elusive...the more you tried to think about it, the harder it was. For most it was a welcome return...`cept for a few of the farmers. Y`see, this Goia - that was the lemur`s name - he didn`t hold with their worship of Xiosia. Effigies in their fields and suchlike. Told them to stop if they knew what was best for them, and some of his flock saw things the same way.”
The menki leaned forward to rest his elbows on the table before continuing. “I remember the night they lit the fields. Bright as daylight it was and hot as Goreld`s Great Forge. A ring of fire encircling the village. The temple`s windows shone blood red in the firelight, and Goia and his closest followers dancing like they`d lost their minds.”
The menki shook his head and stared into the crackling fire under the image of the lunar goddess, “Just as he`d been starting to win round some of the old congregation...he threw it away. The farmers, most of other villagers too, were at the temple doors with torches and pitchforks while their livelihoods burned. It wasn`t just the fields aflame...everyone`s blood was up that night. My pa told me to hide in the attic but soon as he`d gone to join everyone I was at the window. Couldn`t see much what with the smoke blowing in from the fires but it took half the village to hold the other half back. They`dve torn that place down with their bare hands, I reckon. But cool heads, and there weren`t many of those, kept them back.”
“By morning the wall was built, and as they`d worked; as every rock was put in place, they`d been able to hear Goia and his bunch chanting away within the temple, door barred fast.”
“And they didn`t stop. For weeks we heard it. A few of the hunters perched themselves atop nearby houses, arrows notched in case anyone dared come out but none did. And the chanting lessened...day by day...till it was naught but a whisper on the wind. That was a little over ten years back now.”
The menki finished and glanced at the Stone Breaker, receiving a reassuring nod and the room was silent for several moments.
The quiet was finally broken by the lemur setting the clay mug down on the tabletop.
“Thank you for telling me this. Whatever is alive in there is Goia or one of his followers?”
The menki and dwarf nodded.
“Then explain one last thing to me-“
Nimra`s face darkened and he raised his voice, “For Laanx`s sake! We`ve told you the truth, we`ve told you what`s in there. It`s a secret none of us would rather face. Now go! Just get-“
But he was interrupted as the lemur too raised his own voice, “Tell me about the bodies in there. The fresh ones!”


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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #9 on: November 19, 2009, 07:16:42 pm »
Ah, sheeeeeeez! It keeps getting better!  ;D

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« Reply #10 on: November 20, 2009, 12:58:54 pm »
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Silence descended upon the tavern again until the lemur, his voice hoarse from shouting down the stout dwarf, broke it once more.
“Besides my friend, I saw bodies in there which were not a decade old. Clearly that...that thing in there...is eating whatever it can get its hands on.”
Nimra ran a calloused hand over his wrinkled brow and replied in a low voice, “We tell you this and you promise to go? To never speak of what you have discovered here?”
The lemur nodded curtly.
“Your word?” for the second time that day the dwarf extended his hand to him, but this time it was not in greeting.
“You have it.” And he shook the Stone Breaker`s hand again.
The dwarf nodded with a sigh and motioned to the menki, “Esca, let`s show him. Get it over and done with.”

The two lead the lemur up the street, a crowd of villagers watching from a dozen paces behind. He could feel their eyes boring into him, particularly into his priestly garb and he felt their discomfort radiating in waves of suspicion. Dark memories resurfacing, old wounds reopened.
The three and their entourage crossed the stone bridge once more and entered the village square, the facades of empty and abandoned houses lining its perimeter.
“A few years after that night, there was a spate of burglaries. Word was that a thief from the Dome had come down thinking the Barn would be rich pickings. He`d worked over several houses in Nalvys and decided to move on before getting collared...and came here,” Esca explained, holding up a furry hand to shade his eyes from the Crystal`s glare.
Nimra nodded, “I`d just moved here and the bugger hit four houses before he tried mine. I`m no Hammer` but I sleep lightly and with an axe to hand. Found him with his hand in my lockbox and chased him out. Damned longshanks was too quick for me to split him but we chased him here to the square.”
The menki ran his hand over the smooth stones of the wall, “Never seen anyone climb so quickly as he did.”
“Ran up the wall like it was the floor and disappeared in there,” Nimra finished, nodded toward the wall. “Heard his screams the next morning. Whatever was in there, it was still alive. And it still is.”
Where he had gone left around the great wall sealing in the despoiled temple the dwarf and menki lead him to the right and as they rounded a corner a wooden structure came into sight: a set of mud-stained stairs leading up to a platform atop the wall. It creaked as the climbed it and as the lemur looked at the temple again, Nimra continued.
“I told you that we don`t see patrols through here often. Someone commits a crime: usually we have to keep them tied up in a warehouse for months until someone comes through with enough authority.” The dwarf`s voice hardened: he was clearly speaking through gritted teeth, “so when one young girl got ravaged, it was suggested we deal with the monster who did it immediately. No waiting. Let one monster,” he jerked his chin toward the temple, “deal with another.” And he turned to look up at the lemur, “And that`s how things`ve been ever since.”
Esca, the menki, looked pleadingly at the visitor, “Now you know everything. Please, please just go.”
The lemur looked from Nimra to the temple, his violet eyes resting on it for a long time before he turned to the menki and nodded.
“I will...”
He then turned and jumped from the platform down into the temple grounds again, wincing as pain shot through his leg.
“I will go. As soon as this is ended.”

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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2009, 04:10:28 pm »
Just....wow! This is a great read! Keep it up!
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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #12 on: November 20, 2009, 05:21:07 pm »
Yay! I was starting to worry the priest might keep his word and leave. If the villagers want to keep him safe, they'll have to catch him first  ;D

Nice, very nice!  :love:

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« Reply #13 on: December 11, 2009, 08:18:06 am »
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The great temple doors were still open, as he had left them while scrabbling for his life only hours earlier. With the candle from atop his staff gone, smashed against the wall as he had used the pole to help push his way from the nave to the narthex in flight, there remained a slender iron spike fitted to the top. He held out this makeshift spear before him as he stepped over the threshold and into the antechamber again. The sconces still burned to the sides of the next doorway, illuminating the debris on the floor: scattered mosaic chips, the remains of the landas candle and other assorted bric-a-brac, now all swept aside as something had clearly been dragged back into the nave. Lybethi`s body.
His pulse hammering loudly like gobble tribal drums, he peered through the gap in the inner doors to the nave. Aside from the obvious trail up the aisle between the ranks of pews, the inside of the temple was as it had been hours earlier. He stepped through the portal into the cavernous chamber, his eyes darting about, checking the shadowy corners and peering into the rafters lest some nameless horror drop down upon him.
But all was quiet. He made his way up the aisle, his calf throbbing. Before setting out from the tavern he had tended to his injury where the step had broken and splinters of wood had driven into his leg. He discovered that during his panic in the lower room he must have dropped most of his glyphs... Energy amongst them, thus he had had to make do with bandaging the wound.
A sight beyond the end of the rows of pews made him stop in his tracks. The lectern had been set upright in the chancel, the slanted top facing the aisle to display a small object placed upon it which shined in the red-tinted light coming through the window overlooking it. The lemur, not daring to lower his staff, approached the front of the temple, his attention all but fixed upon that which rested atop the bookstand. As he set his right foot on the lowermost step his suspicions were confirmed: it was a small effigy of a humanoid swathed in all-concealing robes, a mask upon their face and a staff clutched to their chest, cast in finest platinum. His eyes checking the tower door to the left and the door down to the lower chambers at his right, he moved closer and gingerly reached out to run his fingers over the icon of precious metal, finally closing his slender fingers about it and plucking it from where it had clearly been purposefully placed. He studied the fine workmanship, it being almost an exact copy of the one that hung around his own neck under his robes.
That whatever fell beast that had chased him from the temple earlier had returned, righted the lectern and proceeded to set a symbol of Laanx upon it seemed impossible...but then was there another occupying the forsaken building? If so then why had they not shown themselves earlier and assisted him? What did they mean by placing the figurine of Laanx there, clear for any who entered to see? Unless he was mistaken, it was probably the very icon that had hung about Lybethi`s neck.

There then came a creaking of wood from the door to the lemur`s left. The door to the temple spire. Looping the cord of the platinum symbol over his neck he took it with him and readying his staff once more, turned to face the iron-shod door as the sound of strained wood came once more. The sound was not quite that of feet climbing or descending the wooden stairs that he knew lay within the tower, but whatever was causing the sound was evidently heavier than the arangmas whose webs he had seen upon peering within before.
The creaking came once more, as if a great weight were being pounded upon timber, culminating in a rending, splintering crash and a cloud of dust coughed out through the gap in the doorway.
Steeling himself he brought up his left arm over his mouth and nose to protect against the dirty cloud, squinted his eyes and raised his staff as a spear to stab whatever abomination he found within. Nudging the door open wider with the point of his weapon he took two quick strides into the cloudy bottom of the tower, barely able to see more than a couple of feet in any direction and coughing despite his best efforts not to. Almost instantaneously disorientated he turned left and right, spear-point searching and eyes watering. A sound from the corner behind him caused him to spin round, reflexively thrusting out his staff, only for an arangma to scuttle forth from the murky shadows. It`s four slender, chitin-covered legs carried the arthropod with shocking speed. He quickly back-peddled, remembering with frightful clarity that the creatures possessed a fatal poison. Swinging the point of his staff back and forth he tried to swat the advancing critter, only for his heels to suddenly collide with something on the ground, toppling him backward. He landed hard on the fallen ladder: the source of the breaking sound, but had no time to consider how it might have broken and fallen for he quickly sat upright, eyes and steel point searching the billowing dust swathing the floor for the arangma. As soon as a twig-like leg extended out of the cloud he quickly thrust the point of his spear to one side of it, his heart leaping as it met resistance and he felt it give as the spike sank in and the creature emitted a high squeal as it expired.
Shakily he stood and raised his spear, examining with morbid curiosity the four-legged animal: its swollen abdomen and gossamer spinneret, compound eyes like polished onyx, and needle-like fangs dripping a thick ichor. His lip curled in disgust he was about to cast the body into a dark corner when a voice came from above and behind him...
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Re: The Shrine
« Reply #14 on: December 12, 2009, 02:15:01 pm »
Voice?  ::| Btw venturing into the cloud of dust without even knowing what exactly he's going to face is more reckless than hunting riverlings in muddy waters you can barely see in  >:( He wants to die? *pokes him with a stick*

More please?  :D

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