[RP] A Glowing Wound?

[Sarras Volcae]

[so what caused the bloody cough]

[Fuflu]

[so what caused the bloody cough]

[He had some internal bleeding, which was caused by either something that was in his body to make him sick, or maybe his lungs had a problem. But my diagnostic was that he was poisoned.]

[Geoni]

I still cannot get onto Planeshift, im so eager to continue this RP too!   [Im back now, let the medical mystery unfold  ]

[Jaccas]

I was in PS again for a short time and look@  a book in Jeyarp's library..... I couldn't help but notice the similarities.....
(but thats all im gonna say about that.. ooc)  

[Geoni]

The Hopeful Ambling of Feonu, and his Sanitorium Blues

Feonu did not know what was to become of him, what was going to happen to him. None of the healers, even the best of them could cure his foot and disease. He is in despair, the only thing that drives him forward is the ability of some healers to numb his pain for a short period of time.

Wandering out of the sanitorium with a new sense of hope after his pain had been numbed, Feonu prances around Hydlaa, seeing all of the people that he knew and was friendly with, and as he wanders out into the plaza alone, he hears a dwarf screaming about the end of the world, and doom. Nothing could upset Feonu more, so what Feonu does  is stick his head underwater in the plaza's fountain to drown out the shouting of the dwarf.

When the dwarf stops his shouting and the people around him stop him from doing so, Feonu picks his head up out of the water and listens into what the people have to say. They seemed either upset or agreeable with what the dwarf had to say. Controversy. In the end everybody was tired, and when Feonu picked up that a Nolthrir woman wanted to go to the tavern, the word tavern rung through Feonu's ears. He wanted to be by that fireplace but could not get himself up the stairway towards the tavern with his foot and its painful wound. "M...Mellas t....take me t....t..to the t....t..tavern." Feonu exclaimed as he remembered the woman from long ago. The woman next to her whispers something in her ear, and Mellas nods, taking Feonu across the plaza. When Feonu notices that he is being taken back to the sanatorium, he pushes away from Mellas, falling upon the ground.

Feonu began to yell at her "I don't want to go there! I hate that place!" And Mellas responded in a calm voice that it was only for his health that she was bringing him there, and that the diaboli woman that was whispering to her wanted to help him, but he resisted, and Mellas attempted to knock him out so that she could get him to the sanatorium. With the hilt of a sabre he was hit in the head, but one hit did not do the job, and Feonu pulled out a weapon of his own, A falchon. Mellas gave up as the diaboli woman approached the situation, and she made her way somewhere else.

The diaboli lady calms Feonu down and explains things to him, and he sheaths his falchon feeling like she is trustworthy, and follows her into the sanitorium. In the sanitorium, she begins to get all sorts of herbs and medicines together to make a soupy potion that Feonu is to drink. Feonu lies down on the bed and struggles to even think about drinking another nasty potion, and he finds and absolution for bad taste in his bag: a third a loaf of bread. Comforted with this find, he drinks down the revulsion of a potion, and ate his bread down very quickly after the potion had been drunk.

After a while he felt a good bit better, and with this good feeling he sat up in the bed, and began to converse with the woman instead of ignore her. They began to talk about his health, this was what usual thing is for a healer to do, and things got deeper into Feonu's mystery of an illness. He explained to her that he was unconscious when he was wounded, so he couldn't have known who the person that gave him the glowing wound and sickness he thinks is the uncommons disease. The part of a cloak was also a clue that this wound was magically inflicted by a person, and a person that is skillful in the dark magics. In the conversation, numbing paste was put onto Feonu's wounded foot, and this could be known to sting, so the woman smeared it on quickly.

When the conversation was losing its interest, and both of them were running out of things to say, Feonu heard a scream coming from the plaza area. He put his boot onto his pasted foot, and stumbled his way out of the tent, and into the street.

He soon found out what all this screaming and hollering was when three figures approached the tent from a distance. It was a Ylian man, a Dermorian woman, and a seemingly wounded young menki. Feonu scurried back into the tent after being seen by these three figures, and mentioned to the woman that new patients were coming for her. She gathered supplies as they arrived, and arrived with much noise did the wounded Menki. His skull was damaged.

Explaining how this happened was the most interesting thing to Feonu when he heard that a cloaked figure had attacked him. The menki explained in a trembling and terrified voice as he described the figure and what it did. What the figure did was obvious; it blunted the menki in the head with some weapon of sorts, Feonu didn't catch what kind of weapon it was, for that did not interest him. What interested him was further description of the figure: It sounded like a man, but somehow the menki knew the figure was a female. He said that the female was somewhat short, so Ynnwn was out of the question in Feonu's mind as he listened in. The female figure also had the most intense of glares in her eyes, and then the Menki could say no more. He went unconscious.

Feonu wants more description, so he begins to keep eye on the unconscious fellow patient of his, waiting for him to wake.

[Geoni]

Feonu Refuses Hope

Feonu finds himself waking up to see his friend Trogdar visiting him in the sanitorium, whom does not know of his illness, and Feonu gives his repetitive speech to another person, expressing all of the details of his illness, and whom inflicted it upon him. They hear footsteps from behind the tent, and Trogdar left to talk to the stranger whom was doing no harm and only getting some fresh air. Feonu kept himself inside of the tent, worried sick, he hears the voice to be female, and with his new discovery that the person who inflicted him with illness was female, he hides under his blanket. Extreme fear engulfs him. He falls half asleep, not hearing anymore of the conversation between the woman and Trogdar. He comes out of his dreary muse to find that the woman has stepped into the tent. A fenki.

(23:56:57) Morila sighs and slowly walks towards the tent entrance
(23:57:57) Feonu hears footsteps behind the blanket and begins to pray silently to himself, as he shivers.
(23:58:30) Morila speaks in a soft, quiet voice "Im sorry for scaring you, are you okay?"
(23:59:08) Feonu quiets his prayer, but does not emerge from the blanket.
(00:00:02) Morila sighs and simply watches the blanket
(00:00:47) Feonu keeps his eyes shut, and clamps down on his lip to keep himself silent, scared to be known.
(00:02:21) Morila sighs again and sits down on her knees in the doorway "Why are you so scared?"
(00:03:06) Feonu mutters from under the blanket, as if to himself "Shes going to kill me."
(00:04:38) Morila frowns deeply "Me? I have no intentions of killing anyone, yet alone a child."
(00:05:36) Feonu stays silent, and begins to quiver as he realizes that his assumption was responded, and heard.
(00:06:04) Morila sighs "How old are you?"
(00:06:47) Feonu keeps silent, until he breaks it with a groan of pain.
(00:07:36) Morila says: Are you hurt?
(00:09:11) Feonu slides and then forces himself to stay still, biting down on his lip to bide the pain.
(00:10:33) Morila says: I know you're there... Is there any way I can prove that I'm not going to hurt you?
(00:11:45) Feonu mutters "S...s....stay away from me."
(00:12:37) Morila stands and takes a slow step forwards.
(00:13:22) Feonu keeps still and silent under the blanket, only making the most minute of quivers.
(00:15:17) Morila says: You sound and act like you are hurt, I might be able to help you..
(00:16:12) Feonu peeks out of one of the holes of the blanket, looking at Morila's expression.
(00:16:41) Morila looks sincere and worried, but also a little nervous
(00:17:55) Feonu notices how her expression expresses an expression of worry and sincerity, and very slowly lifts his head out of the blanket. "You c...c...can h...help me?"
(00:19:56) Morila says: I might be able to.. I'm not sure. What's wrong?
(00:20:18) Feonu mutters "Its m...m...my foot."
(00:21:38) Morila says: What happened to it?
(00:22:17) Feonu sticks his foot out, and lets the glowing scar face the fenki.
(00:24:16) Morila's eyes widen and she raises her eyebrows "What the-"
(00:24:54) Feonu looks away and bellows a blood curdling cough into the blanket.
(00:25:56) Morila says: What happened?
(00:27:32) Feonu shivers, and looks over at the fenki "It w...w...was a cloaked wo...wo...woman."
(00:28:21) Morila says: Did she stab you?
(00:29:20) Feonu coughs into the blanket "I d...d...dont know i w..w...wasnt c..c..conscious."
(00:29:30) Morila frowns "Im sorry..."
(00:30:54) Feonu lets out something that sounds like either a cough or a sneeze "I d...d...dont want p...p...pity."
(00:31:59) Morila sighs "Im not sure what I can do.. I can do some basic healing.."
(00:32:28) Feonu shakes his head "G....good luck w...w..with that."
(00:33:48) Morila sighs, stepping closer and dropping to her knees "I wonder why it is glowing..."
(00:34:21) Feonu watches the fenki with unease.
(00:35:42) Morila looks at the ground, trying to think of what to do
(00:36:33) Morila says: It almost looks like there's a bit of magic in there... and it definitely is infected.. but i've never healed anything that looks quite like that
(00:37:13) Feonu looks at Morila "N....n....nobody c...c...could."
(00:37:32) Morila continues to ponder
(00:38:16) Feonu sighs and coughs "Now t...t...they are w..w....waiting for me to d..die i s..s...suppose."
(00:41:05) Morila shakes her head "I doubt that..."
(00:43:04) Feonu mutters "Dou...doubt is disbel....disbelief, but b.....b....believe me, an...anyone w...with the unco...uncommons, t....they j...j...just gi...give sympathy and w...w...watch you d..d....die." Feonu coughs into his hands, letting it bellow with all its strength.
(00:44:54) Morila says: I'm sorry.. I just don't know what I can do
(00:45:45) Feonu sneezes and then looks at Morila with soggy eyes "You c...cant d..do anyt...anything."
(00:46:21) Morila's eyes start to tear up slightly "I don't know..."
(00:47:31) Feonu says: Ex...exactly, n..nobody knows...they just k...know how t...to watch p....p....people d...d...die and t..t...take pity.
(00:48:08) Morila sighs, looking down
(00:49:47) Feonu says: I notice your t...t...tears, t...t...the pity I'm s...s..speaking of.
(00:51:45) Morila shakes her head "Would you like me to leave?"
(00:52:29) Feonu looks at Morila after turning away to let out a bloody cough "T...that is your ch...choice."
(00:53:43) Feonu says: take ad..advantage of c...c...choice. I h...have none.
(00:55:41) Morila sits, watching Feonu rather sadly
(00:57:31) Feonu sighs "I'm s...s...sick of f...f..frowns." Feonu smiles with struggle.
(00:59:12) Morila makes no response.
(01:00:35) Feonu looks down at the blanket feeling a cough coming, though it lingers in his lungs instead, causing Feonu to gasp for air.
(01:02:41) Morila whispers "Im sorry" before she stands and leaves.

Feonu watches the stranger leave, and does not think upon how he made her feel. He does not think about anything, his mind couldn't be in more clarity if he was meditating. He was tired. Sleep was welcoming for him. It has been four days of being infected, and his illness seems to have neither toned down, or intensified.

[Liquify]

((This roleplay has deffinatly added some twists, and interest into PS, I'm glad i can be a part of it Good job!  ))

[Sarras Volcae]

[can someone summarize in a couple sentences those logs there pleeeeeease? sorry]

[Geoni]

[can someone summarize in a couple sentences those logs there pleeeeeease? sorry]

 In the logs Feonu loses hope, and thinks that he is going to die, and this rubs off on people. He is spreading the disease of despair [and if you touch him the mysterious disease that he actually has.]

[Sarras Volcae]

[thanks. so it's like contagious deprrssion? o.O]

[Geoni]

The Final Attempt To Cure: The Impure Way

     Feonu wakes up to find a new visitor for him in the sanatorium. Feonu finds that the new face is a fenki, white with black stripes, and around his own height. He does not see enough to make good judgment. She begins to talk to him in a sweet voice, making introductions, as Feonu responds in his usual stutter. She seats herself in a chair near the bed and asks Feonu what is wrong with him, watching him cough as if he is gasping for air. "Im s..s...s...sick, wh..what else does it look l..l..like?" She wonders what it is, and asks "Sick with what?" Feonu shrugs "I d..d...don't know m..m...might be u..u..uncommons." She then asks a question that strikes Feonu as odd, and sickeningly depressing.

     "So you know you are already going to die then, huh?"

     Feonu looks away from the fenki with a sad face, and feel angry that she could revive the thought that was hiding deep within his mind; that he might be dying. He feels angry that she revived such a though, angry that he has to face a possibility. He accepts with his absence of any hope. The Fenki might have caught this despair, she might have grabbed it, having implied, "I can help you." This grasp was not noticed by Feonu. The word "help" brings back hope. Feonu coughs, and asks the Fenki, "W...w...well w..w...what is it?" What came next out of the fenki's answer changed everything Feonu had hoped for as she looks around the room and whispers, "Death!"

     The word opens every possibility of true suspicion, fear, and anger toward the fenki. He could see her in a way that he never saw her before. In this moment he thought he was going to be murdered by her, in this moment he thought she was the one who infected him, in this moment he knew she did not want to look at her in any other way. There were other ways, shrouded by one word. Feonu responds in the only way he knows how, being slightly religious "T...t...that is im...impure!" The fenki snickers at him "Do i look impure?" Feonu begins to grow with suspicion, and more so with fear, pulling out one of his falcons, crawling back toward the bedpost, and pointing the falcon in the fenki's direction with shaky hands. "S..s...stay away!" The fenki makes a quick response, creating a black orb in her hands "I advise you to put that down." Feonu sneezes and lets the particles fly into the air. "G..g...go ahead, sho..shoot me with that orb..y..you witch! I'm g..g...going to d..d..die anyways." Feonu cracks his neck in an insane manner, shaking his falcon, pointing it at the fenki.

    Unnoticed behind the tent, there are footsteps pattering about.

    "I like you, you know what is coming for you." The fenki says as she keeps her dark orb steady between her hands. Feonu slaps his falcon down onto the bed, tired of holding it. "I wou...wou...wouldn't touch me if i w..w..were you!" Feonu takes his boot off, revealing the glowing wound on his foot. The fenki laughs again, and shrugs "Who said i was going to touch you?" Feonu lets his grip off off his falcon and coughs a pleura of mucus into his hand. "I c...c...can t..t..touch you." Feonu begins to rebel against the fenki, with his own illness. A resort he would only use out of fear. The Fenki spots a green figure running toward the sanatorium in the distance, and makes the dark orbs dissipate into the air. "I just want to help you, you just do not like the way i help." Feonu becomes infuriated, he loses himself in the argument, lost against optimism. All he does not is blame, conspire, and shout without being taken seriously.

    Tinwei steps into the sanatorium tent and is greeted by Feonu shouting at the fenki. "I do..do..don't t..t..think you even w..w..want to help me! I t..t..think you want to k..k..k...kill me! I b..b..bet you are t..t..the one who g..g...gave me this g..g...glowing nightmare!"

    A malicious cackle is unheard, coming from the outside of the tent.

    Tinwei waves at Feonu, and then lets her hand fall down as her face beams a frown. Tinwei can only speculate from her previous experiences with Feonu that he is afraid of something. Feonu looks at Tinwei and puts his mucus filled hand back onto the falchon handle. "S..s..she wants t..t..to kill me Tinwei! G..g..go call f..f..for help!" The fenki shakes her head at Feonu "Oh, but i am only trying to help him, he seems a bit afraid of strangers though." Tinwei tilts her head "Are you sure ya' not doin' an'ything wrong? Fwo-Feonu can get scared silly though!" The fenki stands up out of the seat and walks Tinwei out of the tent, out of Feonu's hearing range. The only thing that he heard from the two was that the fenki told Tinwei "Your friend is in good hands, i am going to help him." And Tinwei scurried away into the city. The fenki walks back into the tent. Feonu can only shake his head at the fenki, bursting into tears "S..s...stay away f..f..from me lady! J..j..just go aw..aw...away!"

     The fenki narrows her eyes. "Listen klyros, i can help you. It will get rid of your disease as soon as you get through the death realm, pure or not, you should not suffer. I can even kill myself and lead you through." The fenki smirks, and glares at Feonu, "However, i won't do this for free." Feonu looks down at his foot, grabs his boot, and slides it back on, no longer being able to look at the wound any longer. He looks up at the fenki with the wonder of the use of the word 'free', being of the poorest of the poor. "Wh..what do you w..want?" The fenki grins, looking out toward the city. "Well wouldn't you owe me your life for saving it?" Feonu shakes his head silently and mutters "N..no." The fenki responds "Then you will die a slow, agonizing, and painful death. Me helping you through the realm would be better than a burial well."

    "Why w..w..would i e..end up in a b..b..burial well?" The question is unanswered. Feonu turns around, hearing a strange noise of a raspy voice. "W...what was that n..noise?" The fenki shrugs "I didn't hear any noise." Feonu holds onto his stomach as it growls. "I am h..h..hungry." The fenki rolls her eyes and growls, "Focus! What do you want? Do you want to die painfully or would you rather die so that you can feel better?" Thinking about the question, Feonu can hear footsteps, and the next thing he knows a sack is thrown at the entrance of the sanatorium. "W..what is in that s..s..sack?" Feonu points his claw at the entrance, where the sack lies. The fenki grows impatient, and raises her voice, "Well answer the question! I don't have any food for you, so you either take my offer or you don't! Be cured, or die painfully!" Feonu begins to think frantically, and yells out, "I don't w..want to d..die! I t..t..take your offer!"

    Feonu grabs his falcon, and raises it up to his neck, slitting it forcefully until he has no more breath. His soul drifts into the Death Realm, as his body refills his soul.

  

    

[bloodedIrishman]

Why do enkiduai seem to dislike Feonu so much?

[Geoni]

Enkiduai are not the only ones, but for all of the bad Enkiduai's Feonu knows, he knows good Enkiduai that are friends with him.

[Liquify]

You messed up a lot of the conversations.  Like, the Fenki didn't know Tinwei's name, and that's not at all what she said to her xD

[Geoni]

You messed up a lot of the conversations.  Like, the Fenki didn't know Tinwei's name, and that's not at all what she said to her xD

Feonu shouted Tinwei's name in dialogue when he told her to go call for help being all crazy and what-not, right before the fenki said her name, and Feonu did not hear everything that the fenki said to Tinwei. [for some mystery--not knowing what she said to Tinwei]