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A True Assassin.
« on: February 12, 2010, 08:50:20 pm »
One – There`s A Problem
“There`s a problem.” The voice was barely muffled by the door.
Not a phrase anyone relishes waking up to.
Kaisa yawned and stretched on the sponge mattress. Kada El`s lower room might turn into a fighting pit on occasion, and the miasma rising from the sewers made the back veranda less than pleasant, but the beds...oh the beds! She could sleep an eternity on them.
The rapping at the door again indicated that everlasting slumber would have to wait.
She slipped on her pants and tunic, then her bulky plate mail gloves and boots and splashed some cool water from a jug onto her face. Shaking the drops from her whiskers she clunked across to the door and opened to reveal the Akkaio menki who had woken her.
Stifling another yawn she rubbed sleep from her eyes, “What is it, Mog`?”
He peered wordlessly past her into the room. At first she thought he was checking the bed to see if she`d shared it with anyone -the fenki never having been associated with a male (or female for that matter)- then decided he wanted in so he could talk freely. She stepped aside and closed the door behind him after checking no one else was stood in the hallway.
“Ooh, still warm,” said the menki, reclining upon the bed and look down at it with a grin before the fenki coughed her irritation and he got to business. “I confirmed that the Quinx Mercantile Guild is to receive the shipment up from Nalvys via the winch in three days` time. The crate`ll be in it. Two members of the guild will receive it. Amani and Mesusa.”
Kaisa frowned and shook her head, “Their names don`t ring any bells.”
The menki, always in the know when it came to people and events in Hydlaa, continued, “Amani`s a junior trader in the Guild. Ylian woman. Young, upcoming and greedy with it. Snatched the bribe so fast she left scorch marks on my palm. She`ll make sure the crate disappears from the manifest and gets to us. Mesusa, ynnwn guy, is her senior...”
The trailing off of the menki`s words indicated that this Mesusa was the reason she had been woken.
“I take it his morals are not as flexible as his enterprising junior`s?”
“According to Amani: no, not at all, though it could be she just wants all of the bribe for herself. Want me to approach him?”
“Where is he?”
Mogweh chewed his lip, “Both are now in the winch area. Preparing their warehouse for the shipment.”
Kaisa withdrew a pack of cards from a pouch at her belt and rubbed her jaw with them, a habit she had when thinking. But these weren`t her playing cards for Crystal Facets. This was the smaller deck. The tarot deck.
After a few minutes she nodded to herself and flipped the top card from the deck onto the mattress next to the menki.
The sliver of hard parchment landed face up.
Dakkru.
Mogweh whistled when he saw the image on the card. “I`ll get Rigwyn or one of the merc`s onto it,” and he began to rise from the bed.
“No.”
“No?”
“No. I don`t mean to say that Rig` lacks compunction-“ this drew a grin from the menki, “but I`d rather use someone from outside the family on this one.”
The menki deferred to his superior, “Got someone in mind?”
She nodded, “I just hope he hasn`t worked for a while.”
Frowning, Mogweh followed Kaisa out of the tavern, beyond the city walls...and all the way across the countryside to a lake.

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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 08:41:32 am »
[Love the start of this! Especially since familiar characters are being used.
Keep up the great work Jarexia! Looking forward to reading more! ;D ]

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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 09:56:31 pm »
Two – The Right Fish-Elf For The Job
Feeoh sprawled across a boulder that was half-submerged at the edge of the lake, the great wall of Yliakum`s edge rising up behind him. It would have been like an image from an ancient ylian legend of half-fish half-women temptresses...were it not for the nolthrir being male and looking quite decidedly disheveled. His dark blue-green hair was matted with weeds, as was his thick, long beard. Leather armour -the tanned hide of a greater maunderer- clothed his body, though it looked like it had seen better days. In fact, the only thing that didn`t appear to be in a state of disrepair was a gleaming dagger at his belt.
Mogweh looked from the sprawling elf to Kaisa and frowned before speaking in a low voice, “Are you sure about this guy?”
Kaisa nodded and smiled as she made her way round the edge of the small lake toward the nolthrir. “Good to see you again, Feeoh.”
The nolthrir lazily rolled from his back onto his stomach, still atop the rock, and brushed his hair from his eyes with one hand. Kaisa had stopped as soon as the elf began to move and now cocked her head to one side, “It`s me, Feeoh. No need for the dagger.”
The elf`s face broke into a mischievous grin and he slid his other hand out from under his belly, the hand empty.
“Grrensholo, tabei. Jhur si?”
Kaisa waved off the enkien, “good enough. I-“
“Who`s this?” Feeoh`s eyes had darted from Kaisa to the darkly-dressed menki at her side.
“A friend, Feeoh. A friend. Listen; you been working recently?”
The nolthrir kept his eyes on Mogweh but shook his head, dislodging detritus from his locks.
“Good. Got a job for you.” If he hadn`t done a job in a while that meant there wouldn`t be anyone looking for him. No heat that he might bring down on the job or the Outlaws.
He brought his eyes back to hers.
“Aces, I really don`t think this fish-elf is the answer. Let`s get some of the mercs onto it,” Mogweh said, half to get the nolthrir riled and see how he reacted, half because he honestly thought it.
Feeoh scowled, “What kinda job?”
“An assassination.”
This caused the elf to sit up, sliding his legs round so that he was sat atop the rock facing the two enkidukai. “Same as last time?”
Kaisa nodded, “It`s got to be an accident. Nothing suspicious.”
“Well then, menki,” Feeoh now looked to Mogweh, “How would you and your mercenary buddies handle it, eh? A vial of arangma blood dripped over a dagger? Hard to get your hands on, that stuff, and very hard not to notice in the corpse.” He hopped off the rock and began to casually stride round the two as he continued.
“Or perhaps butcher this poor fellow? Hack off his limbs, tear out his tongue and cauterize the stumps then send him to Dakkru looking like a consumer larva? Butcher`s work,” he spat. “Messy, noisy, butcher`s work only an animal would do.”
Kaisa held her tongue and gave Mogweh a look that told him he should do likewise.
“Or how about just stick a knife in him? You could get some fool who calls himself an assassin to do that real cheap. Ten-a-tria, thugs like that in Hydlaa. `Cept the victim`ll most likely see their faces or at least enough for the guards to track `em down when he does make it back to the land of the living. Track `em down, squeeze `em and get your names out of the amateurs you were foolish enough to hire.”
Mogweh tapped his finger on the hilt of his saber with irritation. “And just how would you do it?”
The nolthrir broke into a toothy grin and spread his hands out to his sides, pirouetting, “Trade secrets, tabei, trade secrets.”
Kaisa put a reassuring hand on Mogweh`s shoulder and threw a pouch of tria at Feeoh`s feet.
“Trust me. He`s the right fish-elf for the job.”

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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2010, 08:54:45 pm »
Three – Spiked Drinks At Kada El`s
Feeoh hadn`t cleaned himself up in the slightest before arriving in Hydlaa. The guards at the gate stifled coughs and looked away as he strode between them, head down. His first port of call was the tavern to buy a drink. He chose a fine Stonebreaker whiskey, not for it`s undoubtedly exquisite flavor but for the fact that the bottle was large and opaque. He sighed resignedly as he made his way round the back of the tavern with his expensive purchase and proceeded to pour the fine malt liquor, product of Delving`s famous distilleries, into the city`s flow of effluent. There would be some particularly dizzy rats wandering the tunnels before long, he thought as he rinsed the bottle at a well and refilled it with clean water.
When he stepped back out onto Octarch`s Way it was with a well-practiced drunken stagger, the bottle in one hand, his other stretched out to trace the wall to his right, seemingly ever-ready to catch himself if should he stumble. Finally he eased himself down with his back to one of the large stone blocks that formed the base of the plaza`s fountain, facing the short path to the winch.
He sipped the water slowly, outwardly a destitute soak, as he gazed through his lank hair at the large doorway and the armoured guard before it, wondering just how in Dakkru`s Black Crack he was going to get in.
He could get himself a permit: he knew a few ways but none of which he could do without drawing attention to himself or leaving a trail. Even if he did manage to pull off the job and do in this Mesusa-character making it look like an accident, the guards would likely want to talk to everyone who`d been in the area at the time. And he was pretty sure the guard made a note of who came and went.
He could always try to fly a drifter over the wall from either the high hill behind the smithy or from one of the nearby rooftops, but if he was spotted he`d likely be blasted from the sky with magic and security on the gates doubled.
He needed someone to open the gates for him. A trader. Someone who got stuff from the lower levels.
Feeoh almost dropped the bottle as an idea struck him and, chuckling as he went, he wandered back to the tavern and an old acquaintance.

Thorian looked as shifty and untrustworthy as ever. The dwarf initially scoffed at Feeoh`s request and laughed, believing it to be a joke by the drunken nolthrir until he slipped a stack of circles and a scribbled recipe into the dwarf`s grubby hand.
“Dates, dandelions, red alox. Just make sure it`s damned strong and get it into everyone`s drinks.” He almost warned the dwarf to seek alternative accommodations for that night, but the little rogue had cheated him on their last deal and so Feeoh turned and left, leaving the dwarf scratching his head.

By morning Allelia was writing out an order for new sponge mattresses to be imported up from the lower levels to replace those ruined in an unexplained bout of debilitating -near paralyzing- diarrhea that had struck her guests the night before. Feeoh watched from a corner of the room, sipping at his bottle of water as the dermorian barmaid handed the order and a sizeable purse to the kran representative of the Quinx Mercantile Guild. Unfortunately it wasn`t Mesusa, that would`ve been all too easy if the tavern`s order had lured him out of the winch area. Nevertheless he tailed the trader as gemma made his way to a cart and rivnak. The wooden cart creaked and strained as the stoneman climbed aboard and the nolthrir took the chance to slide under and lift himself up, hanging between the front and rear axles. Soon enough it was making its rickety way over the cobblestones toward the winch gate. Feeoh prayed to any god who was listening that the cart would not give way under the kran`s considerable weight and crush him.
It stopped briefly by the guard outside the gate as the merchant`s papers were checked and kra`s name logged. The nolthrir hardly dared breath lest he be discovered, and held on tight to the woodwork above him. He watched the tarnished plate boots of the guard as they made their way round the cart, stopping once more to hand the pass back to the kran and then the great reinforced doors were drawn back and the cart clattered on through.
As soon as the doors closed behind the cart, Feeoh dropped down to the road, choking back a cry as the rear axle clipped his chin. Shaking the stars from his vision he rolled off to one side and behind a stack of crates in front of a building. Uttering hushed curses he checked his chin and mouth only to find he had bitten his lip. He sucked at the salty blood and looked about. Thankfully due to the early hour no one seemed to be about. If he remembered correctly the winch brought up shipments twice a day. Perhaps the kran was hoping to head down on the first platform that day. He idly wondered what the tavern staff had done with the soiled mattresses...probably pitched them over the back into the sewers. He peeked over the crates once more before darting off into an alleyway, heading down toward the mercantile guild`s warehouse and his target.

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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #4 on: February 22, 2010, 03:53:26 pm »
[An excellent read, can we have some more please?]
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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2010, 02:59:53 am »
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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2010, 11:59:03 am »
Four – The Big Fat Kill
The idea was to send the target to Dakkru`s dark embrace so that not only others -colleagues, family and perhaps most importantly the authorities- thought it had been an accident, but also that the target him, her or kraself thought it had been an accident. The nature of death was that unless the target was particularly old there was a good chance that sooner or later they would find their way back from the Death Realm. It could be days, it could be years, but people had a nasty habit of coming back. And if they knew they`d been done in by someone then they usually came back with a burning grudge. But if they died accidentally they`d have no one to hunt down...and they`d have the embarrassment and confusion of having died in an accident. Feeoh fondly remembered a xacha priest he`d gotten drunk, set up and killed down on the Stronghold. No priest would come back and want to talk about dying dressed in a fenki courtesan`s garb and a ball-gag, crushed to death by a rampant rivnak stallion in his personal quarters.
Death, as opposed to True Death, was so much less likely to be investigated. Of course, it meant that he only got his target out of the way temporarily, but more often than not that was all that was really needed.

One important factor in his work was that, depending on the target`s lifestyle and the locale, a great many situations could be explained as `accidental death`. A farmer crushed by his livestock or farm implements? Happens all the time. A knife through the ribs? High crime in Hydlaa plaza but not quite so shocking in the dark alleys of Ojaveda`s more shady Dsars. Also so much easier to disguise as a simple mugging by also looting the body, rather than murder and its true motives. So usually he took some time to get to know his target: both their daily routine if any, and their interests. Usually one of the two lead to something he could exploit, be it a bizarre and depraved penchant for eroticism as with the xacha priest down on the Stronghold, or a habit of going out hunting alone on a rivnak into the wilderness every morning. Routines bred predictability. Hence he`d asked a lot of questions of Kaisa. The controlled environment of the winch, and its security though...they didn`t leave him with many options or much time. He knew he had at least twenty four hours to dispatch Mesusa. Plenty of time to learn the lay of the land...though not really enough to learn the target`s routine and find a vulnerable point.  At worst it might have to be a spontaneous act when he saw the opportunity.

He slipped his boots off in case they made any noise and scampered between the shadows cast by buildings, the Azure Sun overhead still a fair few hours from full brightness.
The winch area comprised four tiers of land decorated with offices, warehouses, a few houses for officials and paddocks for livestock, with roads curving down to the left and right toward the main building itself. To each side cliff-faces rose up as natural barriers and with the wall segregating the area from the rest of Hydlaa at the back, the only open side was that which dropped away down to the Barn and other levels. On a good day, when the weather was clear, one could see across to the city of Donton on the far side of the Dome where the second winch was.
He had been told the Quinx Mercantile Guild had a small warehouse with quarters on the left side of the second tier down, identified easily enough by the sign hanging over the door, decorated with the image of a quinx: an iron-bodied mute creature said to be one of Laanx`s creations. This one was painted hefting a pair of crates with great ease. Clearly the merchants either had links to the Iron Temple or simply sought the masquerade lord`s blessing.
As he mused this over, a ylian woman perhaps in her early twenties and dressed in travelling clothes with the rusty-red cloak of her guild stepped out of the building. Amani, he thought. The Outlaws hadn`t told the woman what they planned to do to Mesusa, only that he`d be removed so she could complete her half of the bargain, so he thought it best if she remained ignorant of his presence. Apparently the Outlaws had offered her money to do this job for them, so clearly she could be bought. He didn`t want anyone buying her as a witness either. Killing her superior without her knowing about it beforehand would also serve to scare her into secrecy.
The woman came out with a wooden bucket and crossed the road to a small pool in the middle of a clearing. Gathering water for morning ablutions and breakfast, no doubt.
Rather than rushing into the building while her back was turned and potentially running straight into his target unprepared, he sprinted low across from his hiding place to the wooden fence encircling the warehouse and its small compound. He wanted a closer look at the building itself.
Two stories, it appeared a good two-thirds of the building was storage space. He peeked through windows to see nothing but crates stacked to the rafters. The final third was accommodation: the ground floor living space and a small kitchen and pantry. A chimney spouted from the tiled roof and vented grey smoke. He didn`t risk climbing the gutter pipe but assumed the upper area had to be bedrooms. Probably not more than one or two.

As he examined the building another possibility came to mind: species. This Mesusa was a ynnwn: a diaboli-elf halfbreed, and that meant he had a serious allergy to precious metals. Feeoh had once managed to poison a ynnwn to death, over a protracted length of time, by inserting small amounts of silver dust into his food. It had steadily built up and killed him. Not quick, not cheap and most certainly not painless. The buildup of silver in the corpse hadn`t escaped the local sawbones` attention, but by that time Feeoh had been long gone, moving to one of the other levels. Again, there wasn`t enough time for that, but still...precious metals might be the key...

Still studying the rear of the warehouse he heard the door close on the other side. Amani must have gone back in. Sneaking along the wall, his knees and back bent to keep him under the level of the windows, he stopped outside what he judged to be the kitchen window.
“Ah, there you are at last!” came a male voice punctuated with a yawn.
“`morning Mesusa,” Amani replied in a weary tone.
“Come on, come on, I`m hungry,” said the ynnwn bossily and Feeoh heard the ylian woman`s footsteps as she moved toward the window he crouched under. He held his breath. There came a chopping sound from within: evidently Amani had started to make breakfast for the two merchants. There was a creaking of wood from within as someone climbed stairs. Mesusa must be big. Or fat.
“Lard-arsed bastard son of a rivnak,” Amani muttered to herself as she chopped veg and put it into the pot which was slowly starting to boil.
Fat it is, then.
It would be so easy to knife Mesusa in the night and plant the weapon on Amani, Feeoh knew, but he was being paid specifically to keep Amani clean. In a way he was being paid to do what she`d probably love very much to do herself.
As Mesusa came back down stairs the sounds within changed to those of the two merchants eating, the domineering ynnwn reminding his junior of all the duties she was to perform that day in preparation for the next morning`s shipment and other deals. He conspicuously left out detailing what he would be up to, if anything.
Feeoh left the sound of spoons scraping on plates, drinking and Mesusa`s belching, and made his way back round to the rear wall and the windows to the warehouse. Fortunately one of them had been cracked, evidently some time in the past a crate had toppled inside and broke it, the splintered panes still held precariously by the wooden frame. He took a good look to memorise how the window looked before he set to work. Fortunately nothing was resting against it anymore and he carefully slid a naked finger into a gap where a chip had fallen away. The edges looked sharp but he knew if he wore his gloves then his finger would never fit. The elf tested the shards of glass, finding them loose and with extreme care proceeded to work them loose, starting with the topmost one lest it fall noisily. Freeing it he placed it flat on the ground, taking a moment to look around and listen before rising again to work on the rest of the glass.
It took far longer than he had anticipated and twice he cut his fingers on the edge of the glass shards, careful to remove any blood from them before stacking them on the ground. Eventually he had removed one window and peered into the interior of the warehouse. Stacks of crates and barrels, as he had seen on his brief check earlier. He leaned in and placed the stack of broken glass on a crate to one side of the window before hauling himself inside. With as much care, if not more, he placed the broken window panes back into the window frame, cutting a finger a further time and uttering a curse under his breath as he pulled on his leather gloves, not wanting to leave nolthrir bloodstains everywhere.
Iron-bound wooden crates and chests formed a labyrinth within the warehouse, and an ill-lit one at that, for the outer stacks blocked much of the light that did get in through the windows and he soon found himself navigating almost by touch. Thankfully, being a nolthrir, he had an excellent sense of direction. After some fifteen minutes of carefully inspecting the labels nailed to various crates in case he could find something of use he eventually found that most of them were locked and those that weren`t had their lids nailed down. He`d need more than his dagger to pry them open and set about searching for a pry-bar. It was as he reached for such a tool that he heard the large wooden doors on the front of the building side open. Snatching up the bar he snuck through the shadowy maze toward the front. He didn`t want to have to brain the ynnwn to death with the iron club but if it was that or be discovered then he`d do it and figure out a way to make it look accidental afterward. And quickly: bodies didn`t tend to stick around once they`d expired.
The door slid noisily closed again and Feeoh frowned. If the merchants were going to be either taking stock out or moving stuff in, they`d need the doors open. The heavy footfalls on the stone floor indicated that Mesusa, and Mesusa alone, was still within the warehouse...an inspection?
Trying to remember the layout of the stacks without having to run his hand along the walls, the nolthrir assassin worked his way toward the sound of the merchant`s steps, trying to come round behind him.
After less than a minute the footsteps stopped, Feeoh too freezing momentarily until there came a jangling of metal: keys, and a huff as the corpulent half-breed bent over. Feeoh peeked out from behind one wall of crates to find Mesusa unlocking a crate, lit by a thin beam of light penetrating between two stacks. He was no more than seven paces away. Seven quick strides, a strong swing, and the ynnwn would be on his way to Dakkru`s cold embrace.
But something stopped the nolthrir.
What was in the crate?
The hinges squeaked as the lid was drawn back and Mesusa`s crimson face was illuminated as the scant light reflected off something gleaming brightly within. The merchant gave a hoarse cough and pulled a pair of gloves from his pocket along with a small bag. Feeoh could hear the other`s childlike giggle, everything else as silent as the grave. The merchant straightened, holding up a small, shining disc between gloved fingers, his other hand over his mouth as he coughed again. His beady eyes were fixed upon the platinum coin. With another greedy chuckle he slipped it into the small bag and bent back over the crate to scoop up more.
Feeoh saw his chance and carefully crept across to the stack of crates between the merchant`s back and the wall. In time with the clinking of coins he climbed atop the bottom crate, his chest and face pressed against the two above. Three more towered atop those.
The lid squeaked again as Mesusa began to close it and Feeoh almost spat a curse. He`d taken too much time! But the lid squeaked again as Mesusa changed his mind, deciding to pilfer a few more coins after all.
The nolthrir held his breath and turned, balancing on the edge of the crate with his bare feet, so that he now faced the wall. He put his webbed feet against it and pushed as hard as he could. He bit his lip rather than let out the grunt of exertion which his lungs begged to release. And soon enough the stack toppled, smashing into the ynnwn merchant`s back and hammering him face-down into the crate of platinum coins.
Quickly rolling off the scattered chests, Feeoh spared a quick but critical glance at his victim: three heavy boxes were resting on his torso and head, from the back of which blood was trickling and the hands lay limb at the sides. What he could see of Mesusa`s  face was already swelling up and turning a foul green with allergic reaction to the platinum.
Thinking quickly Feeoh tugged the purse of coins from the corpse`s hand. He noticed the large `M` embroidered on it and chuckled to himself as he pocketed all but two of the coins, leaving the purse on the ground as evidence. As he did this Mesusa`s corpse faded away, taken by Dakkru, and the crates fell noisily again.
Time to be out of here.

Epilogue
The next day the accidental death of the Quinx Mercantile Guild`s trader Mesusa was reported in the Hydlaa Post, the fact that his body disappeared noted and prayers directed to Dakkru for his safe passage through the goddess` land. Both the Hydlaa Guard and his own Guild were waiting with large clubs and very difficult questions for him should he make it back to Yliakum.
Feeoh looked remarkably different the next time he strode into Hydlaa. Clean shaven and clad in fine clothes -a considerable portion of his payment from the job- he met Kaisa and Mogweh in Kada El`s. The nolthrir never asked the full details why they had wanted Mesusa temporarily removing...something about a shipment they wanted diverting, the smiles on their faces sufficient proof that events had gone according to plan. The less he knew: the safer for all parties.
Kaisa set a beer in front of each of them and they raised their drinks in a silent toast before downing them.
It was only as Feeoh lowered his mug back to the table that he saw Thorian wink maliciously at him from across the room, and a strange feeling spread through his stomach...
The End

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Re: A True Assassin.
« Reply #7 on: February 23, 2010, 06:37:33 pm »

LOL !!! I had forgotten about Thorian !
Nicely done !

This should be added to the library ! I wonder if the knowledge seekers would consider it ? :)