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Mariana Xiechai

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #15 on: January 21, 2012, 08:02:53 pm »
* Mariana Xiechai nods her head in agreement.
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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #16 on: January 21, 2012, 09:21:57 pm »

Hope to see yall in one incarnation or another  :sorcerer:

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #17 on: January 23, 2012, 05:28:56 am »
III. A cold night in Hydlaa
It was the middle of the night, in Hydlaa. Most decent folk were in bed. However, at the bottom of the steps, outside the Red Crystal Den, a fenki stood alone. Her name was Thidin. As she read through the letters from her dead husband, she twisted her wedding ring absentmindedly. A tear trickled down her face. A cold wind blew through the streets of Hydlaa, causing her to shiver.

Curehan watched from the shadows, his face obscured. He hoists a small but heavy battle-ax in one paw. Although it isn't his weapon of choice, he decides it is the best weapon for the job. He sneaks up behind her, any small sound he might have made masked by the wind whistling through Hydlaa. Or perhaps Thidin is too absorbed in the letter to notice anything until it is much too late. He swung the side of the axe at Thidin's head. It connects with a large crunch. She crumpled to the ground, unconscious.

Curehan lashes out, raining blows over Thidin's body. He broke several ribs, and left some scars which would probably never heal. He hits her until she was black and blue, enjoying it thoroughly. Then, he takes out a single, perfect starphire, and opens Thidin's mouth. He shoves it into her mouth, kicks her one last time for good measure, and then disappeared into the night, without a single soul ever knowing he was there.

Sleep tight, Hydlaa.

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #18 on: January 23, 2012, 06:20:59 am »
He beat The Thidin. Is he mad?

Oh this is gonna get even better.
« Last Edit: January 23, 2012, 06:39:19 am by Mogweh »
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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #19 on: January 23, 2012, 06:48:23 am »
Nicely written!  :thumbup:

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #20 on: January 24, 2012, 08:25:18 am »
IV. A Fenki With Gold Rimmed Glasses

     Kada El's was somewhat empty, which was not uncommon during the day hours when most folks were hard at work. In need of something to settle his hands, Rigwyn entered - only to run into a slightly shorter and somewhat curvy fenki with a pair of gold trimmed glasses that strangely irritated him to his core. He looked her over with ill intentions in mind, figuring the glasses could come off, and was about to speak when she cut him off. She was quick with her tongue, and seemingly cold and resistant to his charm.

     Annoyed, he went to order a drink, but barely got that far. Within minutes they were hurling insults at one another. Their casual jests quickly escalated to escalated to racial slurs and vows of damage and before long, they found themselves just beyond the east gate with weapons drawn and a thirst for blood. As he stood there ready to slice her down the middle, he recalled her parting words at Kada El's, "I'll be right back; this should only take 15 minutes or so." His blood boiled at the thought of her thinking she could just off him like that.

     They stood off on the long, paved road, then slashed at one another - sword in hand, teeth clenched, each wanting to put the other down. Rigwyn had wanted to do this in a more quiet and controlled fashion, but had settled for fighting in the street as opposed to turning her down. He lunged at Mishka with determination, but was quickly cut. The sound of cold steel clanging was quickly replaced with painful groan and a dull metallic thud. Apparently she was far more skilled with a sword, than he.

     Laying on the warm cobblestone pavement, blood trickled from his body and pooled beneath him as Mishka casually walked back though the gates - cleaning his blood and fat off her sword. She notified the guards of his cut up corpse, but before they could arrive his body, it had slipped away - leaving only a bright red pool behind and a bitter memory that would not fade anywhere near as fast.

     The feeling of rough, cut stone in the the dimly lit chamber that he found himself traversing looked all too familiar. He wondered as he walked in the darkness, where he was. Slowly, Rigwyn began to remember his surroundings. It was as if his memories had been shut off, and then gradually back on. As he climbed and crept thought its many twisted paths, he came to the Citadel; he could almost feel the energy of the crystal, and smell the moldy, aged books to his right. After a visit with Oriven, he sought for a way out. Oddly he could not yet recall the way.



     Much time had passed since that day, but the burning resentment remained. He had been planning and rehearsing ways of setting her up and getting revenge as he stumbled out of an ally way when suddenly, he saw her. There she was, just standing there, reading a sign by the Red Crystal Den. The opportunity was wide open, but it was the worst place as the city was well guarded. Carefully, he looked up the street, then down into the plaza. He checked the windows above and the staircase behind him. There was nobody in sight.

     The temptation was overwhelming.  Palming a small black and red glyph, he approached as quietly as he could, then raised his hand and held it a hair above her shoulder. With one Quick touch, he grabbed her shoulder and hissed, "Weakness!" As those words left is lips, a could as dark as pitch surround her, and she fell to the ground. Knowing how risky a place it was he quickly dragged her around the side of the building, then over the ledge and on to the roof a of house. They slid and hit the ground with a thud.

     Grabbing her limp body, he dragged her beneath the roof and into a corner. With a grin that reeked of revenge and satisfaction, he stuffed a starphire into her belt, then jumped on top of her and pulled out a long, sharp dagger. Holding her head, he placed the blade to her neck as the thought of shaving her unevenly from head to toe entered his mind. Of course, that would only be the beginning... The lack of hair would reveal the cuts and bruises that he was about to adorn her with.

     As he pressed the blade to her throat, she awoke and screamed - causing the blade to cut her throat. He slapped his hand against her muzzle to shut her up, then punched her in the face - once, then again as she shouted and tried to fight him off. His pulse quickened, knowing that his time was shortening and his chances for inflicting harm were withering by the second. Hearing Monala's voice behind him, he felt Mishka's foot stamp against his groin. He leaped off and hopped as he felt the breath knocked out of him. Not liking the number he saw, he shoved Monala to the side and fled.

     Seconds passed as he ran towards the Laanx temple to take refuge in the dungeon, then a thought sunk in. That mere punch to the face and cut to the throat was nowhere near enough. He turned back around, and ran under the roof for a second shot - casting a dark, shadowy spell that raced towards Mishka from his hands. Quickly, she managed to cast Diamond Shield - deflecting the spell as Monala sent forth a crystal bolt that struck him in the nuts. Again, he hopped, feeling the blunt, striking force of the spell less what his plate armor had absorbed.  As he raised his hand to cast again, he was met with a blast of fire that seared his flesh from head to toe.  Reeling in pain, he ran to the water fountain in the center of the plaza and jumped in. Quickly the metal armor cooled, but the burns beneath remained as he fled the city, knowing that it was no longer safe.

Edit: Made a correction to Mishka's description and to the last fight scene in the last three paragraphs.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2012, 01:36:27 am by Rigwyn »

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #21 on: January 24, 2012, 01:22:08 pm »
Damn. Pretty soon Geriah's gonna have to pick up the pieces. :P

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #22 on: January 24, 2012, 03:59:22 pm »
[Good one, Riggy, quite concise. But I've sent you a PM with some details you mistook and omitted. Other than that, I can't wait for the second part of the RP.]

"It's all fun and games until someone stabs someone else in the eye."

Mariana Xiechai

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #23 on: January 24, 2012, 07:51:21 pm »
 \\o// Wonderful entry as always, Rigwyn. I'm eager to see what the goal is behind these dastardly ne'r-do-wells!

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #24 on: January 25, 2012, 01:03:44 am »
[
Thanks Mishka, I think it looks more accurate now.
@Mariana, this is the tip of the iceberg...  ;)

For anyone interested in getting involved, the event is open to anyone who wants to jump in... likewise, if you wish to post your own encounters, feel free; its always nice to see everyone else's IC perspective on the event. The story is being told in two layers, one is Zalloh's encounter by the well which takes place a little bit in the future - I'll flip back to it progressively, the other layer would contain the events that are taking place in real time .(such as the starphire crimes etc..)  Being that the thread is open to everyone to post to, I don't expect it to flow exactly as a controlled single author story would. Enjoy \o/
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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #25 on: January 25, 2012, 10:52:27 am »
     The figure lowered himself onto the grass with all his glyphs and wand within arm's reach. Sitting with his back straight and legs crossed, he looked though his wand towards Zalloh. His hands rested on his knees and he began concentrating. For the longest of moments nothing seemed to be happening. As the Azure Sun warmed his glyphs they caught the sun and began glowing. With open eyes looking directly at Zalloh, she suddenly seemed to grow larger is his vision as if the distance between them had suddenly begun to diminish.
 
     With increasing speed he got Closer and closer. He felt as if he was colliding with her, the Azure glyphs began glowing and energies flowed off them wrapping themselves round the wand and breaching the gap to his head wrapping round it.
 
     Still dreaming, Zalloh held her hand closer to the rivnak's snout - smiling as she admired its dark, shiny hair and deep brown eyes. Gazing at them, she could see her reflection in them; something was wrong. Suddenly she felt awkward, exposed, watched. As she looked at her distorted reflection, a feeling of nakedness and inadequacy became to grow and fester.
 
     Breaching someone's mind was never simple when they either didn't know about it, even more so when they didn't want it, but sleep was the great door knocker. He began to get a sensation of the thoughts flowing though Zalloh's mind, it felt as if he could smell the flowers and feel the sugar in her hand. Sensing someone's thoughts in dream was simple but changing one was not. He had to be accepted as part of the dream or she would wake.
 
     He began to bring up his own memories and push them towards her, ones of feeling happy, the closeness of a beloved child. To give the impression something was there but you couldn't see where, like catching a glimpse of something out of the corner of her eye but when you look its gone. He tried to give the impression of someone at a door, to get her to open it, to let him in.
 
     As she continued to gaze at her reflection, she felt a tap on her back. She turned, and there before her stood a little diaboli. Her face softened as she knelt down to his level and reached for his face to caress it. She cooed, "Goodness, how did you get there?" As she touched his face, he turned and ran away - laughing and skipping. She followed him as he ran, and dodged between the trees and bushes.
 
     For a second he was lost, then reappeared - turning and laughing each time he was caught. Finally, the little diaboli opened a large door and ran in -shutting it behind him. She approached, then paused. She placed her hand on the door and noticed it felt warm and soothing. With a smile, she opened it but he was not there.
 
     He felt accepted, a close warm tingling spread over him as he followed everything that Zalloh was doing and feeling. Pleased he smiled, and as he did, he tried to manipulate the scene within the dream to make the small Diaboli give Zalloh a small white flower. Zalloh let the Diaboli reappear and he made him run up to her holding a Snowdrop. He waited for her to take it before hugging tightly to her leg saying, "Hi mummy." He let Zalloh fill in the blanks having him do whatever a loving small child would do to get her connection to him stronger.
 
     Tears of joy streamed from her eyes as she held her child and the flower that he gave her. She could feel the sensation of his tiny fingers and palms on her back as he held him tight. Her fingers slowly weaved though his hair - massaging his scalp as she began to sing.
 
     He made the imaginary child run round Zalloh, in and out of bushes and after insects. Making the Diaboli bring back a few things he found while playing to show her, proud of his finds. He then began reinforcing the feelings again, senses of 'everything will be alright' and 'how could things not be'. Those stemmed from an empty relationship he once had and how supportive a friend was and how amazing she had been with him. She had made everything feel better.
 
     Taking a tiny insect that he had given her, she held it in her hand and gazed at it with the same child-like wonder that he had. It looked just like a tiny little clacker, except it was the size of a thumb nail. As she poked at it, she noticed a tiny strand of green fibre stuck in its pinchers. She laughed at the sight, then let set it free.



     The man began taking greater control over the images playing in Zalloh's head. Now that she was immersed in the feelings and had accepted them, it would become easier for him to manipulate. He changed the direction of the breeze in the dream, adding to it, aromas of fresh cooking and homely baking. He made the small Diaboli run out of a bush directly at Zalloh and as they collided the scene whipped up and they were suddenly, unexpectedly, but completely normally somewhere else.
 
     As she grasped the child, Zalloh closed her eyes tightly, then opened them to find herself in her kitchen. On the stove, was a large kettle of bubbling stew, and in the oven, a large, overstuffed apple pie - bubbling with sugary juices.
 
     He then removed the small boy from vision and began filling the images with projected feelings of home and warmth, to prompt Zalloh into imagining how she would have wanted this small boy to grow up.  Grown, happy, a family whatever it was. Knowing what had really happened with the boy He had to block his own memories from polluting the new images. Those niceties would be saved for later.
 
     Pinching the edges of a second pie, Zalloh noticed that her child was no longer a toddler, but instead a grown man - clean shaven, and dressed in neat, well matched clothes. She smiled almost teary eyed as he offered to help her clean up. The word "Mum" melted in her mind as it spilled from his lips.
 
     Shangshi sat silently on his small grass patch while the Azure energies continued flowing all round him as he felt and absorbed everything that Zalloh was imagining. Finding nothing needed to be done he let her continue as he began cementing the link they had.
 
     In her mind, a slow, melodic song began to play as her surroundings filled with color - slightly more vibrant than normal.  She couldn't help laughing as waves of pleasure rippled though her soul. It was almost too good to be true, such a high was unlike anything she had ever experienced.
 
"Rigwyn", she chuckled, "I'm so proud of you!"
 
     He was ready to move on now, and so he did. Moving his hands towards the glyphs in the darkness, he began to draw energies from them. In their shady little spots near to where he sat, the glyphs seemed to extrude a think almost impossible, not darkness, but absence of light which smothered the grass near them.

     As the glyphs became active, their darkness expanded around the base of his wand much as the Azure energies already were. The energies seemed not to mix running over and round one another as they made their way up his staff before breaching the gap between the wand and its owner. The exact moment the Dark energies reached him the feelings and impressions of the dream began to change.

Mariana Xiechai

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #26 on: January 25, 2012, 02:52:55 pm »
Shangshi, you devious dastardly elf <.<
D'awwww. Little Rigwyn's a cutie  ;D
 \\o// Very entertaining reading as always, I'm eager to see what happens next.

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #27 on: January 25, 2012, 03:17:56 pm »
Now that's a twist!

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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #28 on: January 25, 2012, 08:42:17 pm »
Riggie is many things, but he ain't cute!  ;D
Hey look kids, it's the antichrist Marsuveus!
What? Doesn't he just look huggable? Aw, c'mon, give him a hug.


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Re: [RP] Black and Blue
« Reply #29 on: January 25, 2012, 09:35:57 pm »
I beg to differ. Little Riggie is adorabible  :love:
Grown up Riggie's the one that's scary as hell :D