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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #105 on: March 28, 2014, 09:32:56 am »
A Deeper Shade of Pain

"So you're the source of the visions and dreams I've been having? The portal with the strange black glyphs, the alchemist, the quick silver, and some others?"

Rigwyn was terrified of this demon, but to show fear was to be defeated without a fight, to lose without dignity. Aside from that, he had no idea what else to say. He fantasized for so long about the feeling dominating and commanding something as powerful and vile as the demon, but now saw that he had summoned something far greater than he had ever dreamed.

"Yes, Yes I am. I thank you for your service"

"I'm not here to serve" Rigwyn snapped, "I'm here to take. What do you have for me?"

Baazel stepped closer with a smile that seems to admire his greed and defiance, yet with eyes that dripped with contempt for the inferior, fleshy being. He took Rigwyn's hand and lifted him high off the floor to helplessly dangle in mid air. Sending an excruciating rush of energy into Rigwyn's hand, he exclaimed as a strange shape burned into his skin. It was the same mark that appeared on wall by the stairs. 

"I give you my mark."

Rigwyn convulsed without control. He screamed and wailed as his mind was torn from the world around him, and forced to witness the imprinting of this this horrendously painful symbol. As his limbs violently shook without control, the bones in his fingers and wrist snapped, and his muscles bunched up into knots.

Baazel's voice was unmistakably clear despite the litany of painful cries.  "This is the Ja-uh. It means pain beyond words. The pain that makes any mortal scream for the release of death." Baazel took a few steps back. "Now, take me into the living realm"

Sweating profusely, the pain began to transform into a less intense burn while his head became dizzy and light. Confused, withdrawn, and not wanting to be jolted again, he nodded in forced submission and agreed to lead him back out of the portal as instructed.

Seeing how little pain it took to get his way,  Baazel said through a wicked little smile as he leaned close and stared into Rigwyn's lowered eyes, "And if you fail me, I will leave a small piece of me in the child. I have no fear that it will continue to go unnoticed. Vallaar however, is still a concern. We will have to find a way to deal with him when he returns. But your first task will be as my herald. You will announce my coming to the world, and introduce them to their new ruler!"

With slumped shoulders and his mud lined face tilted down, Rigwin dragged his feet as he progressed past the doorways to Allena's memories and towards the top of the stairway. He stopped and looked at the mark upon the wall once more.

Baazel gloated, "Maybe you would like to see your handy work thus far, hmm?" He waved his hand, creating an image upon the wall. It was one of Allena, huddled up in a ball, unclothed and shivering on the floor. Her exposed flesh was littered with glyph-like shapes and not one, but at least twenty of the horrendously painful Ja-uh marks that Rigwyn had received.  "You did well in choosing this one. She served our purposes well, though I hope you prove to be more resilient. We have preparations to make..."

Staring at the image of Allena and the shared Ja-uh marks that covered her body, Rigwyn somehow understood what she was suffering.  It was as if the shared mark had conveyed an understanding that he was otherwise incapable of perceiving. He was still hurting immensely from the mark, and so too was she. It was an understanding that a basic sense of empathy – if he had such capability, would have instantly conveyed.

With the demon's hand upon his shoulder, he stepped outside of the portal and into the Howling well no longer as a master, but as a slave. Behind him, Baazel vanished into the shadows as Allena's blood stained body lay helplessly upon the ground with two daggers sticking out of her chest. He placed his fingers upon her warm neck and let out a sigh as a pulse pressed against his finger tips. Knowing what had to be done next, he left her behind and walked away.

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #106 on: March 28, 2014, 03:55:20 pm »
 :love:  :love:  :love:  :love:  :love:  :love:

[You are so good at making RP's into stories. Thanks for the amazing read.]

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #107 on: March 30, 2014, 08:54:56 am »
[ Well, thank you for playing! The RP made the story. ]

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #108 on: April 07, 2014, 02:27:24 am »
A Healing Foiled, Allena Found but not Recovered


Two weeks, perhaps three, had passed as Roled searched on and off for Allena. His attempts to heal Allena when she had awoken after the experiment in natural magicks seemed to have made her worse off, not better. Guilt was Roled's nemisis. And so, he became more and more insistent in his search for the girl.

With the help and fortitude of many honorable and brave friends, the search expanded to find the healing klyros, his Sister, Evirea. She had been kidnapped, hurt, tortured, hidden away. Again the name Rigwyn surfaced- connected to Allena's original injuries and those awful runes tattooed in black in her hand, and now seemingly part of Evirea's abduction, somehow. Rigwyn. The diaboli was a continuing, festering obstacle to returning Roled's world to balance, and peace, to the teachings of Xiosia.

Finally, a lead from an unlikely source, Sarras. How did this troublemaker seem to know so much about Rigwyn's involvements, and then, how did she know where Allena was eventually found? Questions for another day.  The young nolthir Allena was found in the howling Well, in a circle of stone and ashes. She had been tortured, her whole body blackened by the foul runes, and her mind was, well, empty. A shell. The Priestess of the Daughters of Xiosia offered protection and care for the dessicated elf. More attempts at healing, still fruitless.

Roled determined to find the cause, in his mind, of all this calamity. Rigwyn. Why had he given the destructive, dangerous Diaboli sight back?  Roled kicked himself for allowing his own guilt to overwhelm clearer thinking too many times recently. The Dermorian, a Son of Xiosia, had allowed his anger to steal his better judgement too many times. Roled had threatened the life of a young, troubled Dermorian, and, well, truth be told, kidnapped him. "I will make it up to him" Roled promised himself, and his Goddess. Yet, even after the wedding of his own son, Sarren to the lovely Sulaika, Roled had allowed his anger to blind his own judgement. He had made a scene, an angry scene, with two of the wedding guests. His face still stung from the slap he received, and perhaps had earned.  "Xiosia, stay with me, help me, teach me," Roled prayed fervently in the Secret Garden where he has gone to try to make amends.

Havoc at the Crossroads of Faith and Magick

Roled approached Levrus' cottage, and sent his rivnak into other grazing lands of energy. As he approaced the cottage door, a flicker of movement behind him set his neck hairs on end. Blades drawn, glyphs at ready, Roled searched behind the coal mine. There in the slag heap sat a shell of a creature whimpering. Rigwyn. Instantly Roled's anger arose. "What did ye do to that young nolthrir, Allena?" he demanded, the tip of his blade of clear thought ironically and rashly pricking the Diaboli's adam's apple. Rigwyn said incomprehensible things, words Roled couldn't and wouldn't listen too. "More lies as usual" Roled thought to himself as Rigwyn jabbered away about , well, who knows. Roled had just passed his low Master's tests for Azure Mastery, and he used his new skill to cast phantasmal voices, obscuring Rigwyn's ranting, and his own Perfection of the Dome, enclosing his thoughts to himself.

Just at the height of the vehemence between the Diaboli and the Dermorian, Aleeane arrived at Levrus' and came to Roled's side, her blade drawn and her magicks ready. As it was to be, to Roled's aide as well. A lifesaving arrival. A touch of the Goddess of Balance, even-ing the scale that was about to tilt. For then,

A hideous voice cracked like a whip lashing out behind him: a voice that left the elf's boots on the grass as his body elevated six feet above the ground before crashing back to earth. This, this, oh Xiosia, this is the ruler Rigwyn was going on about? This demon? Baazel?

Baazel screamed commands and sent plumes of tarry tainted foulness toward Aleeane and Roled. The ground shook with the demon's powerful attack.  Roled has automatically screamed out "Xiosia! Save us! Help us!" He began casting every Crystal Way spell he knew, starting with Ray of Faith, in an attempt to ward off the insidious slime and intense desecration emanating from the demon. Talad's gift of glyph spells blazed from both fighter's hands, and the skill of Aleeane's blade found its mark. Roled was struck to his knees by the demon's force, and a gulp of stench and living corruption swam toward his nostrils. "Xisioa! Stay with us! Protect us!" the two pleaded to the Azure sky. Another cast of the Dome, and healing flash, and Purification battled the demon on the aetheric plane, while Aleeane's spells and blade finished the demon. Roled crumpled, living but injured.

What happened then was unclear to the elf. He felt his friends, why were there two sets of arms supporting him? drag him into the magick shop. Potions were touched to his lips and he drank. Soothing waves of Crystal enveloped him. He heard voices, but the Azure spells in his fingers sent him into a deep, dreamless sleep.

[Thanks Rigwyn, Aleeane, Cwyndeth and Baazel for this rp! I think Rig the dice roll to determine damage taken was really helpful. No one escaped unscathed. More rp happened the next day, thanks to all the mages that came to Roled's healing- Anysu, Caraick, Aleeane, Kaerli, and the lurker in the corner.. heheheh. ]
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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #109 on: April 07, 2014, 02:43:12 am »
[ Nice writeup, Roled. I'm left wondering about 'ole Baazel's fate. Surely, the sudden breeze that swept the fog away and stampede of wild animals that dragged the demon into the wilderness in response to Roled's fervent prayer must suggest that Xiosia had him destroyed... Hmmm ... why might a goddess *not* destroy such a beast...? :detective: I would say it's definitely a victory on the part of good... for now.   :innocent:   ]
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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #110 on: April 10, 2014, 03:36:47 am »
Baazel is coming and it will poison your heart.

Children’s stories. That had been the consensus among everyone in Hydlaa Cwyn had dared ask to about it. At best: bedtime stories that mothers tell children to scare them into behaving. At worst: vague references to the dark parts of religion and the sewer fanatics. And even then these boiled down to: ‘Children’s tales, Cwyn, surely you’re old enough not to believe in any old yarn some madman in a tavern spins you?’

Actually, it had happened just outside of the Kada-Els. A fellow Dermorian, clearly in distress, and Cwyn not sensible enough to make a wide berth around the crazy elf. The man had a hand full of circles; said they were talking to him; pleaded for someone to make them stop. One misguided attempt at heroics later, Cwyn could only remember about half of the man’s muddled babbling: something about Dakkru’s dark machinations, something about demons coming through the cracks and fissures of the realm. The only clear words, the words that Cwyn couldn’t forget – Baazel is coming and it will poison your heart…

A couple of weeks of petrifying paranoia followed when Cwyn doubted even his own sanity. But when nothing else happened, he eventually put the whole encounter out of his mind. Until he heard that name again.

It should’ve been just a quick trip through the forest to Levrus, nothing worse than dodging arangmas. But then he saw Roled, standing a little ways off at the edge of the clearing around the magic shop. Even though Cwyn knew he should avoid the other elf, an opportunity presented itself that was too good to pass up. So he snuck closer to see what the disarming Dermorian was up to – realising too late that the opportunity was in fact somewhat of a worst case scenario. Because there, hidden from Cwyn’s line of sight behind a rock, was someone he’d hoped he wouldn’t run into any time soon: Rigwyn.

Roled was busy confronting Rigwyn. About Allena. While Cwyn would’ve dearly liked to know what Roled thought he knew about the Rigwyn-Allena complication, his survival instinct told him to get away before he could become collateral damage in a fight between two powerful mages. Rigwyn alone was bad enough. Rigwyn and Roled with the latter about to lose his temper, well, that was pretty high on Cwyn’s list of things to run away from as fast he could.

But then the Diaboli said that name: Baazel.

From his hiding spot, Cwyn listened first in disbelief and then in growing terror to Rigwyn’s ranting: To hear his name is to be tainted with it. The name has power. The name turns your mind to him.
This alone should’ve been enough to make Cwyn obey Roled’s frantic order to run once the younger elf was discovered. But common sense only took Cwyn as far as Levrus’s shop, where he ran into someone else without any apparent sense of self-preservation. Instead of running or hiding, the Ynnwn, Aleeane, dressed in crystal mage robes, joined the fray.

And somehow Cwyn found himself creeping towards the fight as well. (If anyone should ever ask him at bladespoint why he did this, well, depending on who is doing the asking, he had a number of lies ready. The real reason wasn’t something Cwyn would admit to for all the tria in Yliakum.)

Thankfully, he never got a good look at the vile creature that Rigwyn had apparently summoned. Its presence alone was terrifying. The fight, too, was mostly obscured from where Cwyn was hiding, although the fog and the flashes of magic and the stench and the sounds of fighting and howling and the shaking of the ground painted a picture horrifying enough. Heart hammering, cursing himself for a coward and a fool, he heard Roled’s prayers; Rigwyn’s cries; Aleeane’s shout of battle. Also the demon’s foul words as he tried to force or entice Roled into letting him possess the elf. Coupled with Rigwyn’s attempts to trick Roled into saying the words that would allow the demon access.

Finally: a howl of agony from Baazel as Aleeane dealt him the death blow. A rustle of leaves as a fresh wind blew the filth from the battle away. The sounds of the wildlife who dragged off Baazel’s lifeless body.

Aleeane came away more or less uninjured. Roled escaped with his life, although narrowly. Cwyn had no idea what had happened to Rigwyn. For a few moments, Cwyn had itched to slide a dagger between the Diaboli’s ribs while he was apparently incapacitated, but he was glad that he didn’t. Publicly making an attempt on Rigwyn’s life would burn bridges that might be useful later.

In the end, survival was about priorities. Baazel, if – or rather, when – he returns, would be the problem of someone significantly stronger, more powerful and better equipped than Cwyn. No. His first priority lay injured and sick in the second floor of Levrus’s shop and, to be honest, didn’t have anything to do with survival in the strict sense of the word.

The second priority was to do something he should’ve done long ago: get rid of the circles the madman had given him. He would’ve done it straight away the moment he got it (any thief knows that the best way to hide ill-gotten money was by spending it, discreetly) but a sensible, beautiful fenki had persuaded him not to. After all, if the circles did drive people mad, Cwyn wouldn’t want to be the one that spread insanity through the whole of Hydlaa. But then, the circles had never talked to Cwyn. The most plausible explanation was that they were truly harmless and spoke only in the deranged fantasies of the lunatic who gave it to him. Or perhaps Cwyn’s mind simply wasn’t of the right shape to hear them. Or maybe Dakkru protected him. Whatever the case, now that it seemed there was some truth in the lunatic’s words, it would be best to cover any traces that Cwyn had ever been involved.

His third priority was in direct opposition to the first, but nonetheless urgent. Cwyn had to reconstruct the smokescreen of half-lies, half-truths and blatant misdirection he has spent weeks weaving and a few unthinking moments nearly destroying.

Otherwise it was more than possible that someone else would slit his throat long before Baazel could return.

[Long post, I know. I try never to use 3 words when 30 will do... :whistling: ]

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #111 on: April 10, 2014, 01:32:55 pm »
 [Loved the read Cwyn  :thumbup:]

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #112 on: April 10, 2014, 01:58:41 pm »
[ Same here :) ]

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #113 on: April 15, 2014, 04:59:01 am »
Ebony Skies, Bright Eyes

Now broken once more, and littered with leaves and twigs beneath the cover of a moldy, fallen tree, Rigwyn stared up through the twisted branches at the ebony sky through eyes bright with evening’s    phosphorescent light. He shunned the thought of moving to a warmer, more comfortable spot at the expense of rustling the leaves in which he hid. There were enemies in the woods, vile wolves in the wool of sheep, demons and gods – none of which would likely offer refuge or turn a blind eye to his presence. Perhaps they would just forget about it time...

He quickly shut his eyes, then blinked again as tiredness began to set in. His head slipped to the dank, muddy ground, and his eyes closed as the last of the greenish light faded from view. There, in the theater of his mind, he recalled the visions that lead him so wildly astray – the cross with the triangle on top, which he came to know as the symbol for brimstone, the spectacular purple crystal known as cinnabar, and quicksilver - the brilliant metallic blood that it spills when heated with fire. The doors, the alchemist, and the portal through which he would pass and change.

As he pondered over the symbols, a voice echoed softly in his head. She spoke with authority, and a firm yet gentle, scholarly tone:

The heart, my sweet acolyte,  is like cinnabar. It is a prison with faceted windows, crimson carpets, and oddly, tainted light. To love is to suffer, and through the passion of fire, the prison is melted and the shimmery blood of demons pours out upon the ground– transforming the heart into a putrid yellow stone that burns with a fire more pure than gold.

Troubled by her words, he muttered in his mind, “But I don’t love; I can't.”

Without hesitation, the voice spoke, and as she did, he could feel her answer deep down inside. It was as if her voice was both within and beyond, it was both hers and his - both separate and the same. He wondered if the voice was what made him experience her answer, or if was merely a side effect of what had happened deep inside the recesses of his soul. 

Wanting to quell his intimate thirst for knowledge, she whispered a magical word into his soul. It immediately paralyzed his body and heightened his senses a thousand fold.

He could hear the buds at the top of the trees opening in response to the warmth of the azure sun, and feel the thousands of footsteps that ever so gently shook the ground with each step. He could taste a thousand different scents in the air as they blew past his lips, and feel each and every hair on his body rise and straighten as the name of the demon, "Baazel" flashed in his mind.

But then it all changed. The soul crushing pain of the Ja-Uh exploded throughout his body as it flared without mercy and burned like wild fire. He so desperately wanted to flail, jerk and scream, but his body was crippled and magically bound, his mouth was too numb to let out so much as a whimper.  He laid upon the ground for the next two days in unfathomable agony with only her closing words to repeat to himself for fear of losing his mind, or going insane.

“Love is pain, and to love is to suffer.”

End




I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who participated and made this story happen. It's been a lot of fun and is definitely something that I'll seek to repeat again so long as there are others who are interested in playing along. ( My head is soaked with all sorts of ideas as I write. )

As I understand, the role play extended well outside of the story presented here. The story that I and others have written here is just a brief summary of lots of smaller interactions that steered the story along its path.  The story took a number of unexpected turns as a result of fellow players who simply acted in character and did things that their characters would do.

This is what I treasure about decentralized, multi-player role play. The feeling of not knowing what will happen next and the surprises and consequences that follow.

If you wish to comment, ask questions, discuss or share a perspective on the story that was not covered, please feel free to do so. I've only seen one side of the story through my character's (squishy) eyes, so alternate perspectives are always welcome.

Whisper Bless!
« Last Edit: April 15, 2014, 05:18:05 am by Rigwyn »

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #114 on: April 15, 2014, 11:25:27 pm »
[Top notch, Rigwyn. I'm glad other players got involved, and this was adaptable as a result. That's all i've got for you - just some praise :)  :flowers:]
I regret to announce that this is the end.

I bid you all a very fond farewell

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #115 on: April 24, 2014, 01:45:06 am »
For clarity, I'm only ending the forum story which is based on the in-game RP.

I'm not ending the RP itself - that's something that I "cannot" and "would not" do. I decided to end writing the story because the story seems to have come to a natural end (or break.) I did not want the story to drift into limbo or the Planeshift equivalent.

This does not mean that the RP itself is over.

If you have something to post then by all means, do. If something should happen icly where the RP spontaneously necros itself and resumes with some strength then hell, I'll probably resume writing the story as it happens or perhaps start a sequel to it.

Whisper Bless.

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #116 on: April 24, 2014, 03:25:51 am »
AH!!! I am glad you posted this clarification (well clarification for me at least!) - yeah, I think the many threads of your saga have started and intersected with many other stories into a fascinating web. Phew!

For example, where the heck is Allena and has her mind returned?? Inquiring elves want to know! :o
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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #117 on: April 26, 2014, 07:38:32 am »

Allena's player is live and well, but as for her character, I have no idea. The last I saw her was in the well as Rigwyn departed. He's was a bit too consumed with his own state of affairs to be concerned about Allena. He was in pain, you know...  :-\

Between you and me Roled, I think more is in store. I just don't yet know if it will get tacked onto this story or if it will be the beginning of the next. I kind of thought that perhaps an explanation of what happened after the little fiasco at the magic shop, and perhaps the re-entry of Allena might be an interesting way to open the next story. Then again, maybe its better to make this more of a blog and worry less about trying to have proper structure ( ie. Intro, climax, resolution, ending ). This is very had to do with an RP since everything just happens as it does. Blog format might make more sense going forward...

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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #118 on: April 26, 2014, 07:43:41 am »
I like the blog format idea..

I know Rigwyn IC doesn't know this, but you know allena's empty minded body was rescued and when last heard of was being protected and cared for in a safe house... while others tried to figure out 1) where she lost her mind and 2) how to find it and put it back and 3) will it work???
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Re: [RP] Brimstone and Fire
« Reply #119 on: April 26, 2014, 08:13:27 am »

Heh heh..  yeah, I just wasn't sure if that was the last of it or not. Blog format it is going forward. \o/