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Kiern

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« on: February 13, 2002, 03:08:22 am »
I have recently been writing a story and have gotten pretty far in it.....but then i decided it sucked, so i threw it away and decided to make another one with the same plot

the reason the story sucked is because i am not very good at character development and i would appreciate some help......

If you want to help me out PM me with your description of a good character here is what i need:

ALL HUMAN:
Warrior
Mage
Mage
Governer
King
Thief
And some others if you think a good story can not do without them

(Note: I know this doesnt have much to do with Planeshift but once i finish the story i will post it on the rpg board, and this is a REAL story, not just some thing im going to throw together)

thanks for your time...... :D  8)  8o

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« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2002, 12:50:56 pm »
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Originally posted by Kiern
If you want to help me out PM me with your description of a good character here is what i need:

ALL HUMAN:
Warrior
Mage
Mage
Governer
King
Thief



whats the difference between a mage and a mage?

due to a rough childhood i have no imagination...but im plum full of smartass remarks...:evil:


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« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2002, 03:57:03 am »
ok wolfman lets add

mage + mage= 2 mages


that better?  :D  8) 8o

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« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2002, 09:43:00 am »
But if the mage and mage if ones male and the other female wont you get three mages ?