Weeeeelll i had a go at redoing me story and heres part one..might do part 2 when i get back online
*Smack!* Seperot flew down a fight of stairs landing on a table to break his fall. the small enki male had not a second to think before hes step father appeared at the top of there stairs. \" Jan\'s good table!\" his father remarked anger covering the Ylian\'s bearded face his fist dripping with blood from seperot\'s nose \" right! its the cellar for you\". the felines eyes opened wide with horror and without thinking bolted across the hall his step father yelling him to stop and chasing behind him. just as the father was about to grab him Seperot slid under a table sliding to the other end to see the Ylian running across the top of it. once again seperot bolted this time straight out a window falling down from the 3rd story down into a patch of muddy water his knee hitting his chest as he lands knocking the wind out of him. the Enkidukai looked up to see his adopted father holding a chain collar in one hand, seperot heaving for breath stood up and slowly moved to the near by forest gaining speed as he got closer knowing if he didn\'t make it his step father would soon be chasing him again. seperot entered the forest and climbed in to the trees finding his \"den\" hiding there for several hours. this was seperot\'s life as he knew it a family who hated him the rest of the town thinking of him as almost a pet ignorant to his race being a enki the violence was seen by most as deserved and no one helped him when he asked leaving seperot to turn to the forest to protect himself from all others.
later that day seperot walked home his tummy begging him for food. his eyes firmly shut as he walked inside dreading what would happen. as he closed the door and opened his eyes he saw the table had been thrown downstairs and knife marks made to look like claw marks put in them to set him up. the enki sighed he didn\'t know why they bothered setting him up anymore they just beat him anyway and no one cared anymore. as he walked in the kitchen he was greeted with a fist in the face by his oldest \"brother\" seperot rubbed his face and looked at the 14 year old Ylian who then said \" we wont be getting any treats for a week thanks to you breaking the table\" and with that 2 more blows to Seperot\'s chest where made the 3rd blow was blocked by seperot who held he\'s \"brothers\" hand his claws extending out and digging into the Ylian flesh. the child panicking pulled away but in doing so tore his skin around his hand. Seperot grinned but was short lived as a rolling pin smacked him across the face knocking him flying to the other end of the room. he looked up to see his adopted mother holding the pin \" we let you into this house after your mother abandoned you.. left you for DEAD! and this! this is how you repay us breaking my mother\'s table and then making an unprovoked attack against your brother\" she then called her husband who quite quickly after hearing her telling him about the cuts on there sons hand grabbed seperot by the neck lifted him up the wall and kept punching the enki in the chest till he passed out from the pain and lack of oxygen. Seperot awoke hanging by his hands in the cellar to the sounds of children giggling and sharp poking feelings. he opened his eyes to see all 3 of his brothers where stabbing him with sticks. he hung there acting calm then quickly snatching one of the sticks out of the younger of the 3\'s hand started to beat them around the head with it until they left then lifting his feet above his head pushing the stick inside the crude built lock system ...it took Sepeort little over an hour to unlock both his shackles and get to the floor. Sighing again he sneaked into the kitchen in search of food.
this lifestyle rolled on for the enki for 7 years the white furred blue eyed feline constantly getting abused but slowly getting stronger and faster slowly able to beat his \"brothers to every punch and soon his step father dared not fight him still not feeding him and locking away any food seperot became better and better at sneaking and lock picking. this when on until his 14th birthday in witch his adopted family had, had enough and put a rare kind of poison into his food that he usually steals. Seperot of course did take the bait and had soon collapse after checking his heart rate had stopped they called the priest from Talad\'s temple for a burial... they buried seperot the next day with a plain tombstone reading \" Seperot Carter loved by few \" and etched at the bottom \" if anyone \" the end...
or it would be the end if the family had made the small realization the poison was special because it only effects the body for 2 days putting them in a near death state. Seperot awoke in the coffin his eyes unable to see anything in the total darkness panicking his hands shot upwards feeling the cheap velvet lid of the coffin causing him to panic even more his mind becoming more conscious of what has happened and rage taking over fear. years and years of rage and abuse building up uncontrollably. breaking free of his own grave seperot felt rage holding over his body making every muscle feel stronger looking down to see his fur tips his whole life had been a pure soft white, had turned black as the night, his eyes losing focus all he was able to see was red. he felt his conscious mind fall silent. Seperot\'s body started running it ran all the way to his house smashing the door in he walked in to she family all looking at him in shock there shock was short lived as the enraged enki\'s paw lunged out at his step father his claws extended as he digs deep into the Ylian\'s throat seperot\'s paw closing around his windpipe and pulling it out in one brutal pull. the rest of the family running away in horror and the step father twitched as blood rained from his neck. then seperot jumped at his eldest brother as he started to run. as the Evenki stood on his brothers back his foot started kicking the Ylian\'s head until he stopped moving seperot lifted him up and shoved a fire poker into his heart sticking the lifeless corpse against the wall. grabbing the 2 other fire side tools and chasing after his mother beating her to death with them. walking into the basement and finding the 2 younger brother\'s hiding in the corner each one getting the fire tools he had killed there mother with jammed into there chests.
Seperot had killed his adopted family but still lusted for blood of those he felt betrayed him leaping from house to house slaughtering family after family until the town he had spent his life in was almost devoid of life all together houses burning to the ground, blood flowing into the streets. standing at the edge of the forest seperot regained consciousness looking at what he had done gasping in horror at first but then almost a pleased look came over him his fur had now turned jet black looking in a small pool of water as he started to trek into the forest he saw his eyes where now as red as blood as he walked into the darkness the flames behind him becoming smaller as he lived in the woods. striping away the name carter and calling himself by her real motheres name \" Darkstorm\"
