The Poetry Thread

[Yarulion]

Post all your creative comments here
And you\'ll always have a list\'ning ear
As long as in verse does your post appear.

[Yarulion]

Instead of posting spams or flames,
let\'s quit the fighting and calling of names.

Let\'s make the Hydlaa what it should be,
a place where we can all be free.

Let\'s post our nonsense, play our games,
Let pointless posts have poetic frames!

For to write in verse one has to think,
and edit so it doesn\'t stink  

So all the thoughtless stuff will end
if we post here, the rules to bend.

Let\'s have no idle gibberish, folks
Just wonderful poems, lyrical jokes

And everyone who comes around
Will never, ever make a sound

Unless they say it and it rhymes.
Else they should be like so many mimes.

Respect the thread but post here please.
I\'m begging on my hands and knees.

It will be fun, I guarantee,
but only if treated seriously.

[PS]
I hope you folks don\'t think me dumb.
I hope you\'re really laughing hard.
But to answer the thoughts of some:
No, my other guy\'s not a bard.  
[/PS]

[lynx_lupo]

That\'s very good,
what Yar has said,
I\'m in no mood,
to spam this thread.

I come from far
and yet feel home
although it\'s cold,
I\'m not alone.    //soooooo lame, aye?

The land from where
I really hail,
has little fish
and a dead whale.  //(just decomposed, going to a museum) REALLY!

The mountains there
are steep and high,
showing off
beneath the sky.

Another pearl
our forests are,
their colors green
are seen by far.

I\'ll also mention
our girls sweet,
I\'ll sing them praise
on this cosy seat.

I will end this ode,
I\'ll end this sh*t
and throw this piece
into a forum pit.

One thing more,
before I go,
it\'s Slovenia
that you should know.

//my second \"poem\" hehe, I never thought I\'ll write this. The first one was for \"anger managment\" purposes some months ago, but it\'s in Slovene, so you won\'t see it.    

[Yarulion]

You did a good job, Lynx.
We\'re all proud.
Now step up to the plate
and be a good crowd!
Read your poems
and read them loud!

[Jedi]

Someone, I\'m calling,
I\'m all alone,
With the memories aflame,
of the people I\'ve known.

My life is an ashtray,
deposit your waste,
it\'ll just pile up,
on my mound of disgrace.

Maybe there\'s a hope,
I\'ll wait and see,
but I\'m afraid I\'ll never cope
until that saviour believes.

Lost is the light,
from the battle I fought,
I\'m swinging in the dark,
of the horror I\'ve wrought.

I\'m praying there\'s a way,
some semblence of life,
something to come down,
and cuut through my strife.

But as it is, there is nothing,
of the Sun not a ray,
for the only one who matters,
has turned me away.

[Yarulion]

Very nice, Jedi
I thought it was good!
I applaud your effort,
and if I just could

I\'d get everybody
to post what they will.
If this thread gets bigger
I\'ll sure get a thrill.

Keep posting my brethren,
let the poetry flow.
Don\'t be afraid
To let yourself go.

The topic is open,
as you can see
There are simply no rules
on what it can be.

As short or as long,
as meek or as bold,
it\'s all your choice
how your story is told.

And by the way, Jedi,
Nice metaphor, there!
\"My life is an ashtray\"
really gave that verse flare

[Evanchild]

there is no meaning to my life.
nothing has gone, nothing to come.
were am I? where are you?
nobody knows in this vicious self centered world
I am not self centered, I am not living
I know not fear, I know not myself
I know not what to think, please guide me.
please guide me past what to feal, what to lie.
I am the figment, the figment of imagination
if you know who i am, please inform me,
i know not you please find, complete my quest.

can you take it all away?
when you shoved it in my face.
I need a turn a way to run away
from this endless laughter, this senseless mind.
this mind of mine, I have one sense of order
I have this sense, this sense from you,
I know not who you are, i know not all
I am not from what you have seen
I am, truly unseen

[Jedi]

Blackness, deep,
hiden inside,
I wake from sleep,
run and hide.

Life, a shell,
and empty pride,
a hollow hell,
where death resides.

Killed, my heart,
it lies there bleeding,
torn apart,
while I was pleading.

Why, oh life,
forsaken have I been,
for treacherous knife,
that was not seen.

Ignorance is bliss,
that will tomorrow,
yet from this,
I feel only sorrow.

Oh my passion,
forsake me not now.

[Yarulion]

Yay! Keep up the
Participation!
But Evanchild...
what in tarnation??

Originally posted by Evanchild
can you take it all away?
when you shoved it in my face.

[Jedi]

How can\'st thout hus forsake me,
When thou know\'st I love thee true?
How can you leave me hanging,
When I so gave to you?

Know you not my heart,
That, to me, you are the world?
And now you thus ignore me,
When\'st I around your finger twirled.

Perhaps thou hear\'st me now,
in my desparate longing plea.
If so, reutrn, I beg thee,
the measure I gave to thee.

And now I\'ll say it plainly,
To thus lay forth the frond.
I have pmed you, Vicky.
Why do you not respond?

[Evanchild]

are we alloud to post constructive crit?

[Evanchild]

Originally posted by Yarulion
what in tarnation??

Originally posted by Evanchild
can you take it all away?
when you shoved it in my face.

i had that line before it was onthat one song.  that poem is old.

[Jedi]

Constructive \'crit\',
is good for most,
But what we frown on,
is a double post.

[Aramys]

I\'ll hate you forever,
forever until,
this pain that is mine,
will make you that I kill.

Tearing me up,
hurting inside,
tears come to life,
and I go to hide.

Fearing your voice,
I go insane,
there\'s no more to you,
than the ones you have slain.

How worthless I am,
how pathetic my life,
these words that I hear,
bring closer the knife.

So I hope you feel happy,
I hope you\'re content,
when you destroy my life,
in your vengeful resent...

[Yarulion]

Good sigs and good poems!
I must say to all
An to Evanchild\'s question
Here\'s my judgment call

If you can\'t make it rhyme
your critique\'s still OK
Just keep it concise
So they rhyme theme will stay!

And you could get royalties
On that line you wrote, bud.
You should call your attorney -
Sue Puddle of Mudd!

OK, well I need sleep
So I guess I\'ll quit
I\'ll check this thread later
so keep posting in it!