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Jedi

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« Reply #15 on: November 12, 2003, 01:00:21 am »
Why do I bother,
I only end up worse,
Every time I try,
I gain another curse.

Maybe I\'ll just quit,
though I\'m not ahead.
Being lonely is far worse,
than ever being dead.

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« Reply #16 on: November 19, 2003, 04:12:29 am »
Hello everyone i\'m new here but i believe Jedi knows me, I\'m somewhat of a poetry nut although i\'m not sure how good i am, here goes.

The hate, the anger, the pain, and the suffering
Burn my tortured soul in the darkness
The darkness that blinds my heart and shadows my mind
And makes me cry out for the joy of life

The pain that I hide is awake in my eyes
And the death that I feel walks my path
The death of a thousand souls in an instant
Is merely another moment in my being

The love of one I have never felt
And the caring of the world is lost to me
The grace in a life haunts my thoughts
While the freedom of that being draws me

The troubled mind of mine never sleeps
While my shadowed soul never lives
Only I can ever save myself
For only I will fight the darkness



I wrote this for a vampire thing i was doin.
The fire in my heart is all i need

The sword in my hand is all i have

The treasure of mine is all i seek

The soul of one is all i want

I am the Hunter
 

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« Reply #17 on: November 19, 2003, 05:37:37 am »
Sweet! You revived my old thread!
I forgot about this cos I thought it was dead :)
Firiath! ?-idhren! ?-vatha i brestanneth?
Ir tolthach e-m?r, dangweth avo telitha anech!
Man agorathach?
Ir m?r dhanna, gostathach di-nguruthos!


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« Reply #18 on: November 19, 2003, 11:33:36 pm »
How... gothy...

This is all based on my thred..
but moogie made my thread dead
What a thread my thread was
but blah blah blah then something that rhymes with was

Jedi

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« Reply #19 on: November 20, 2003, 12:30:30 am »
Ahoy there, MG,
Glad to see you here,
Even with your newbie status,
You have naught to fear. :D

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« Reply #20 on: November 20, 2003, 01:11:30 am »
well thanks alot there jedi,
i think i\'ll go bake a pie,
i like watching the sky,
here\'s my next poem to try.

A friend who always stands beside me
A friend who seems to guide me
A friend who supports me
A friend who never bores me

My friend to always keep close
My friend to who I owe the most
My friend to the end of time
My friend to forever be mine

This friend I will always favor
This friend I have will never waver
This friend I really cherish
This friend I will love until I perish


I tried to make it lighter than the last,
Try not to mock because i wrote it very fast.
The fire in my heart is all i need

The sword in my hand is all i have

The treasure of mine is all i seek

The soul of one is all i want

I am the Hunter
 

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« Reply #21 on: November 20, 2003, 01:24:51 am »
I dare say!
That poem is rather wordy,
But, I guess \'twas well-written,
And thankfully far from dirty. :D

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« Reply #22 on: November 20, 2003, 04:23:11 pm »
Let\'s try something a bit more upbeat,
I hope it is a nice treat.


There is a special someone in my life
Who makes everything feel just right
They are a wonder in my sight
And cast a heavenly shadow over my life

There is a special someone I see
Who makes so much out of me
And reminds me of what can never be
By all the beauty I see

There is a special someone I found
Who lifts me up with a sweet sound
And although my feet never leave the ground
I marvel at the world I found



This is a sonnet I believe,
I wrote it in english to recieve,
A mark in order to leave.
« Last Edit: November 20, 2003, 04:23:38 pm by Metal Gear »
The fire in my heart is all i need

The sword in my hand is all i have

The treasure of mine is all i seek

The soul of one is all i want

I am the Hunter
 

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« Reply #23 on: November 21, 2003, 05:40:23 am »
I like to see the poets that are coming to my thread.
I hated all the thoughts I had when I thought it was dead.

It\'s much relief to see the rhymes appearing, it\'s revived!
Great are the minds from which these many poems are contrived. ;)

I see we have a newcomer! All hail the Metal Gear!
I hope you keep composing and we see the product here.

At any rate, I like your stuff, but I have one criticism on it.
Perhaps you should go to yourdictionary.com and look up the word sonnet :))
Firiath! ?-idhren! ?-vatha i brestanneth?
Ir tolthach e-m?r, dangweth avo telitha anech!
Man agorathach?
Ir m?r dhanna, gostathach di-nguruthos!


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« Reply #24 on: November 21, 2003, 02:21:46 pm »
This poem is not made by me, but I find it so great that I just have to share it with you all.

Anonymous Author a.k.a. \"Almion the Bard\" of Ultima Online.

?During the dark early hours, of a midwinter\'s morn.
In the township of Yew, a new life is born.
A father cradles gently, his son in his hands.
And wonders what future, he holds in these lands.

From a babe newly born, to a tall strapping lad.
He grew straight and grew strong, bending nary a tad.
He worked sixteen plantings, and harvests of grain.
With dreams of the future, and honors to gain.

By daylight he toils, by candle he reads.
Tales of great heroes, their codes and their deeds.
He bows to the virtues, whose path he does walk.
He gives thought to his words, before he does talk.

Then comes the day, it is time to leave home.
It is time to strike out, start a life of his own.
With the clothes on his back, an old sword, wooden shield.
With a hundred gold pieces, he sets out across field.

Wandering the township, he comes to a crossroad.
And enters a building, of the Guardsmen\'s abode.
Meran Lew charges coin, for some small bit of training.
And regards him quite closely, to make sure he\'s no taintling.

After a while, he joins up with the Guard.
A trainee still learning, that life can be hard.
He battles beside warriors, each one of great skill.
At a time when Militia means honor and goodwill.

Along comes a great day, though he knows it not then.
When he meets a new trainee, her name Fabienne.
Over time they become close, as the Militia does stray.
From the ideals they hold dear, and the Virtues? own way.

Fabienne follows her conscience, and takes leave of the Guard.
He stands there quite shaken, as she walks out of the yard.
The battle he then faces, is not fought in a war.
It is fought in his heart, till he can stand it no more.

His fate he decides, in a north forest\'s fair glade.
He looks into her eyes, and his decision is made.
He resigns from the Guard, and starts his new life.
Alongside this fair lady, who will soon be his wife.

They heed their friends\' call, and prepare to move away.
To start their new lives, in a town near Skara Brae.
In Spiritwood lies a vision, of the future they\'ll build.
The Custodes Fati welcome them, and become their new guild.

So many good people, so many good friends.
It seems that their search, has come to its ends.
In the Halls of Spiritwood, by the Lion they wed.
And are given the gift, of their own home, their own bed.

Fabienne is now a seamstress, of great skill and reknown.
People come from all over, to her shop in the town.
He battles in Trinsic, and other campaigns.
As the Custodes Fati proves itself Evil\'s bane.

The friends they have made, the list is so long.
There are so many, it would fill a whole song.
The years they go by, he lives in true bliss.
He thinks to himself, it can get no better than this.

More years pass by, and his heart fills with concern.
As his wife move more slowly, with each season\'s turn.
In the years still ahead, he will think back to this time.
And wonder if his travels, were the cause of this sign.

But still happy together, until this very day.
Returned home all alone, at the end of his way.
He goes about his business, knowing in his heart still.
That soon she will be there, he just knows that she will.

Days turn into weeks, then months become years.
Till he denies it no longer, and accepts his worst fears.
Fabienne has left his world, she is no longer by his side.
He is filled with an emptiness, which he struggles to hide.

He wanders through Spiritwood, and the last home they bought.
And thinks he sees her everywhere, but when he looks closely she\'s not.
His friends try to give comfort, and he thanks their good heart.
But the memories still haunt him and he knows he must part.

He ponders in the dark of many nights what to do.
But the answer was clear; he should go back to Yew.
In the land where he was born, he would live out his days.
In the cloisters of the Abbey, and reflect on his ways.

And so it comes, that he lays down his sword.
Having fulfilled his service, to both Nation and Lord.
He teaches the Virtues and tells tales of great men.
Children clap with delight, and beg to hear them again.

In the spring of this year, he begins to feel frail.
He knows that he approaches the end of his tale.
He thinks back on his life, and ponders a while.
\"I haven\'t done badly,? he thinks with a smile.

In the dark final hours, of a midsummer\'s night.
In the township of Yew, a life loses its light.
A monk prays over the body, and arranges his hands.
And wonders what past, this man held in these lands.
\"Somewhere over the rainbow...\"

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« Reply #25 on: November 24, 2003, 04:39:16 pm »
COME ON!! At least post your own poetry! I\'ve got another one comin up people.
The fire in my heart is all i need

The sword in my hand is all i have

The treasure of mine is all i seek

The soul of one is all i want

I am the Hunter
 

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« Reply #26 on: February 20, 2004, 01:12:06 pm »
An untimely end this thread has made,
is anyone willing to participate? ;(
"Amor sceleratus habendi"- Ovid
"First they ignore you, then they laugh at you, then they fight you, then you eat them." -Godzilla

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« Reply #27 on: February 20, 2004, 02:48:56 pm »
I AM WHAT YOU FEAR THE MOST

yet i am no more solid than a ghost

MY GRASP ON YOU HAS INFINATE POWER

yet my touch is delicate like a flower

YOU HAVE FEARED ME SINCE THE DAWN OF TIME

yet you can\'t see me except in your mind

I CAN BE SO CLOSE YOU SENCE MY PRESENCE

yet you can\'t touch me i have no essence

SO BE PREPARED BUT DON\'T HOLD YOUR BREATH
FOR I HAVE COME I AM DEATH
if man didn't take chance's the moon would still be made of cheese  8)

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« Reply #28 on: February 20, 2004, 10:21:09 pm »
I reach out for it
But it slips through my grasps
I want it, I need it
But it always floats on past

The love of someone
Is all I ask
But it?s always just
Slipping through my grasps

I plead for it
I beg for it
But they all just stare down and sneer
Like they?re better then me?
Like they don?t know what I mean?

They lead their double lives
Hoping that no one will see
As the crumble from the inside
Begging and pleading on their knees

I realize I?m not alone
That they are reaching for it to

?

And it?s slowly slipping through our grasps

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« Reply #29 on: February 20, 2004, 10:23:05 pm »
Here\'s a poem I wrote for a girl I like but can\'t be with right now, which is truly sad. Well actually this is one of a few poems I\'ve written for her...

My heart?s beating
Can you hear it?
You?re the one it beats for
You pour the life into my veins

This night I?ll dream you were mine
But I?ll wake in a cold sweat
Remembering how it was all a dream

You?re touch it felt so right
Those lips, they could make me get down and kneel
Your eyes drank my soul in so deep
As you took me to utopia
This feeling I never want to forget

So, this night I?ll dream you were mine
but I?ll wake up in a cold sweat
remembering how it was all just a dream

Your breath on my cheek is what I need
Your smell on my skin is like a seed
It grows the thoughts inside my head
Into urges that must be done, not said
This feeling is something I never want to forget

So I think I?ll dare to dream of you,
And give into this feeling and these urges.
Tomorrow I?ll wake up and remember?

That dreams do come true.