Imperial Legion

[Rakera]

Imperial Legion(my guild thats imcomplete:D) is a neutral guild. Please post if you wish to have imformation or join. NO SPAMMING!!!!!! For those who want to know, I haven\'t finishied my website. It will be won\'t be done for quite a while. Right now I\'m am naming allies,neutral, and enemies.The goal of this guild is influence of certain places.(You better not criticize that shadowmancer.) We\'re not evil, nor good. WE befriend those guilds who we/they wish to befriend. We pay 30-35 gems a week, should anyone want to know.
Any new recruits will be gladly accepted, regarding of what allignment they\'re on.

Allies: Sword of Silence


Neutral:Mercenary guild, Dark Alliance, Shadowhand

Undecided enemies:Cabal

Enemies:None posted yet

[shadowmancer]

Don\'t bother posting who you are neutral to, its assumed that you are neutral to anyone not on your allies/enemies list. Your neutral list would have to be very very long.
You chose good allies. All of those are active, respected guilds who would be good allies for a neutral guild.
I can\'t critisize you for not posting your goals, etc. because I have to assume they will be on your website. It would have been better if you could put them on this thread... just edit your post when you have details.

[Rakera]

I said no junk>_<

[shadowmancer]

That wasn\'t junk, [stupid filter].

[Rakera]

Read the first post. ONLY POST IF YOU WANT INFORMATIN OR WANT TO JOIN. Its not hard to read.

[shadowmancer]

I see no reason why I can\'t post whatever the hell I want, including comments.
Its requests for you do get information. That counts.

Now you\'re filling up your own thread with spam. Great move. You gotta let things go every once in a while, you can\'t bother people about EVERY LITTLE GODDAM THING.

[Rakera]

Listen to Mr. Know-It-All. Ok what \"Information\" would YOU want?

[shadowmancer]

Me? I\'m not joining, so I don\'t need anything, but it would be interesting to see what kind of stuff you are going to have on your website. That will all come in time.
The most impotant things missing from your starting post is the concept of the guild and the goals of the guild. Those are important enough that they should be in the main post, not just the website.

Sorry to say this, but you may have to work a little.

[Rakera]

Ok,ok. I\'ll say that now. The goal of this guild is domination of certain places.(You better not criticize that shadowmancer.) We\'re not evil, nor good. WE befriend those guilds who we/they wish to befriend that.thats all I can say for now

[shadowmancer]

OK. That\'s a good start. Make that sound a little nicer, and edit it into the first post. You don\'t have to do it now, if all the details aren\'t worked out.

[Rakera]

Ok \"Master\". I\'ll do that by copying the first post before you\'re post

[Rakera]

Better?

[shadowmancer]

It still needs work, but some declaration of the goals of the guild is a good start. I suggest longer descriptions, just to make it interesting, and more line breaks. These are friendly suggestions, not critisizms.

Remember that the first post in a guild thread is the only really important one, as they get spammed up pretty quickly.

[lynx_lupo]

How did you get your allies???

[seperot]

I have to ask the same question i dont remember talking to you on any sort of allience. infact i dont remember ever talking to you.