Thank you again Golby, your critique is always welcome.

It\'s true that I often focus more on the style and effect of a figure than going to all efforts in making proportions correct. Part of the reason this happens is because most of my sketches start off as those crappy scribbles

and sometimes I neglect to properly align and measure the bones. As such, I havn\'t had much practice at that anyway, so I\'m not all too good at it.
The mist sounds like a good idea, as do all the burning rubble/building suggestions. I\'ll play around with those.

I agree about the hair, by the way, but I\'m not sure if I\'ll try changing it on this picture. I need to learn and practice some techniques with that first, and I think I\'ll just end up ruining this pic if I tried now.

Thanks all again for commenting, and don\'t forget to stop by
here.
