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« Reply #15 on: July 06, 2004, 02:08:23 am »
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ouch! the claws! so bright, they burn my eyes
you just need to darken them up a bit


I know, but I can\'t... :(

Because the highlights are so bright, and the shadows are so pitch black, any attempt I make trying to lighten/darken the hands causes the opposite problem to worsen. I want to fix it, but I dont want to have to re-colour the hands from scratch.

Perhaps there is a way to \"level\" the two extremes somehow...? Bring them to a more related shade so they arn\'t as contrasted? Using brightness/contrast just makes things go grey.

Any help appreciated. :) Oh and btw, I\'m currently working on the lion end and tail. :)


[Edit: Updated pic. Lookie! I found a way (kinda) to fix the hands. Turns out there is actually a feature called \"Equalise\" which came into my mind when trying to figure out how to tackle it. I tried it, and hey presto! Exactly what I wanted. They\'re still a bit bright, but I think it\'s an improvement. I\'ve got good feedback about the pose of the whole body, but any additional comments about it would be fabulous. Ty :)]

http://www.seperot.com/moogie/images/Gryphon_6.jpg
« Last Edit: July 06, 2004, 02:56:35 am by Moogie »

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« Reply #16 on: July 06, 2004, 08:23:59 am »
Very well done. I think the shiney is nice, since the bg is white the whole picture looks really bright, but if you were to use an actual bg, or a darker colour, I think the highlights would make the claws look metalic, and menacing, which is not really a bad thing. :)
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« Reply #17 on: July 06, 2004, 08:59:57 am »
Nice!

Some comments:

- the back claws in the lion part seem to come from nowhere.
- the back leg seems too flat. maybe make it look more like a \"hind leg.\" also it is a little too wide compared with the rest of the animal
- add another back leg :)

Overall, it looks very soft and furry :P. Yes, I agree that you should choose a darker background (even a simple color fill will do), and maybe add something that the animal is sitting on so it can interact more with the scene.

Please explain: the arms are part of the lion, but instead of hands, it has claws? I don\'t think any bird would have huge arms like that :P. Maybe you should make the front have lion claws as well (although I like the talons, they are really bright)?

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« Reply #18 on: July 06, 2004, 10:14:10 am »
the light on the back leg seems to come from many random directions which is giving it a flat look

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« Reply #19 on: July 06, 2004, 12:28:26 pm »
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Any tips for those with tablets? I shelled out $100 for a graphire2 awhile back, but I can\'t seem to figure out how to make the best use of it. Can anyone share their brush settings?


I got me a graphire 3 and I use it for efverything, thats great practice. Trow that mouse out and use the tablet :)
As for the rest, my brush settings, dunno, always depends on what Im going to do :P Just with colouring thats usually around 10 pix.
I have to adjust the sensetivity of my tablet, its way to strong, with the smallest push I get a huge brush :P
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« Reply #20 on: July 06, 2004, 03:56:13 pm »
Ty for comments :)

About the \'scene\': Don\'t worry, I have big plans for the background and the Gryphon\'s perch. ;) I\'m leaving it untill last though.

icebr4kr: Google the word \"Gryphon\". ;) It is a mythological creature which is depicted in a variety of ways, but most commonly (and mostly by recent artists) shown with the head of a hawk, bird-like claws/wings and a lion\'s back half.

I\'ll see what I can do about the hind leg.


Thanks again! *gets to work*

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« Reply #21 on: July 06, 2004, 04:09:27 pm »
If you ever feel the need to look at great pictures of gryphons for reference, check out Nambroth\'s elfwood gallery (http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/loth/j/e/jenmiller/jenmiller.html) - it\'s very inspiring :)
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« Reply #22 on: July 06, 2004, 06:21:54 pm »
Wow, she truely is a fantastic artist! That is some incredible work. :) I have an Elfwood gallery, but I don\'t update it anymore. The moderators send back half of my work with silly reasons as to why they can\'t be put up. (\"This isn\'t fantasy\" @ a dragon picture... eh!?) and the ticket queue is so long that it takes several weeks to a month for any updates to the gallery to be approved.


Ok, this time I need more position feedback- I\'m re-drawing that broken old wing :D She\'ll now have a grand outstretched limb which will, hopefully, be anatomically correct (with your input :) ).

http://www.seperot.com/moogie/images/Gryphon_wingtest.jpg

(Some small changes: Feathers are hopefully less blurred now. The eye looks more \"bird-of-prey\". The hind leg has been re-coloured somewhat).

I studied some bird wing pictures for the pose. There\'s three sections- the lesser coverts, the greater coverts, and the primary/secondary feathers.

I\'d also like to know what you think about the colours; when I start to properly texture/colour them, they won\'t stay that exact colour... please note that. :) They will be vagely the same shade, however.

Is the brown > orange > red a good order, or perhaps brown > red > orange would look better?



[Edit: Oh well, nm about the colour advice, I went ahead as planned. :) I got some tips from a couple of people, including SaintNuclear (thanks again;)) and decided to give it a try. This, version #7, is now what I could call the \"complete\" vesion, bar a few improvements here and there. Next comes the background... and the final piece will be posted on my artwork thread.]

« Last Edit: July 06, 2004, 10:29:37 pm by Moogie »

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« Reply #23 on: July 06, 2004, 10:34:23 pm »
There are two things that mainly bother me right now, but they can be easily fixed :} The first is the hind leg - it\'s bent incorrectly. I\'ve tried doing a quick search for some reference you could use, but alas, didn\'t come up with many as my time is limited right now, but there\'s something quick: http://www.artarchive.org/scripts/service/action/showimg.asp?image=hoshi_griff.jpg&artist=Angel_Rising&p=1

The second thing is the talons on the forefeet. I think the curve is way too strong. How about extending the length of the talons? Here\'s a reference picture (from http://www.snowwowl.com/rlwarbirds1.html)



Other than that, I think the coloring you\'ve decided on for the wings is great :) My only other suggestion would be to enlarge the length of the wing where it connects to the body. Right now it doesn\'t seem as if the gryph could take off at all, because the wing is only attached to the shoulder. (And don\'t forget to add a second one in there - while a single wing can look ornate, two, if only you have a tiny bit of the other showing, is always more realistic :})

And that\'s it :D Full speed ahead! You\'re doing a wonderful job so far!
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« Reply #24 on: July 06, 2004, 10:40:21 pm »
my tips on photoshop

don\'t use this burn smuge dodge stuff...

I\'m not shure if  photoshop is the right thing to get started with, when having no exp in traditional materials, another thing is  if you really want some tips go to http://www.conceptart.org,  theres tons of stuff you can rely on and ask questions  on irc or in the forums.

Heres the wrong place to develope your artistic skills, most of the replies are too positive and this is gonna make you too confident about yourself and your skills.

This is no offense you have talent but as i said its the wrong place to get some level ups ^^

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« Reply #25 on: July 06, 2004, 11:56:54 pm »
One thing... the spread of the feathers. To Savion, it seems like all the bird is doing is lazily putting its wing up rather than stretching it.... try spacing the wing feathers out a little at the tip.
« Last Edit: July 06, 2004, 11:57:15 pm by Savion »

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« Reply #26 on: July 07, 2004, 12:45:57 am »
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don\'t use this burn smuge dodge stuff...


I agree that it is very basic, but what are the alternatives?

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« Reply #27 on: July 07, 2004, 01:28:58 am »
i think it looks very nice, however, i think the eye lacks depth, and it looks like someone killed the gryphon and stuffed it, the eye is glazed over and it doesn\'t look like there\'s life behind it. so.......yeah my 0.02

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« Reply #28 on: July 07, 2004, 01:30:49 am »
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don\'t use this burn smuge dodge stuff...


I agree that it is very basic, but what are the alternatives?


Add color by hand, smudge/blend. Add, blend. Add, blend. It\'s a lot more fun, and you get tons more color variation and control :D
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« Reply #29 on: July 07, 2004, 01:55:04 pm »
Thanks for the extra tips all :)

I agree that the eye looks glazed over. I\'ll see if I can make that more realistic.

Karyuu: That sounds interesting and fun :) I\'m considering drawing a Megaras next, and I think I\'ll use that technique and experiment with it.



And for all the tips I\'ve received, here\'s one of my own to other artists. Don\'t do the \"lasso the space and fill with colour\" thing. When colouring a line drawing, have the lines on a seperate layer, and just paint your colours all the way up to and even over the edge of the lines. Infact, do this on all the lines you can see- make sure you have filled the entire space. After you\'ve coloured, textured and fiddled with the colour layer to perfection, you can erase the bits outside the lines.

Trust me, there is nothing more frustrating than deselecting an area to find nasty little white lines and dots around the edges. It\'s ugly, and (dare I say) makes the whole piece look quite ammateur. :)