Author Topic: My [really long] story (Read 1238 times)

Icefalcon · « **on:** August 18, 2004, 03:49:32 am »

Over the past few...er months, I have been writting a story. My progress is very slow, but its comming along. If you want to read what I wrote so far, read it and tell me what you think. This is just the very beginning (http://mercenary.fragnetics.com/the_mercenaries\'_controversy.htm) and if you want to read more, you will have to read it on TMG forums here...(http://icefalcon.proboards27.com/index.cgi?board=roleplay&action=display&num=1081028956 )

Aidana · « **Reply #1 on:** August 18, 2004, 07:11:04 pm »

Always up for a good story!

(continued good luck though)

smoak · « **Reply #2 on:** August 19, 2004, 04:18:44 am »

good story so far, keep up the good writing.

Myrtl · « **Reply #3 on:** August 19, 2004, 05:45:25 am »

Ya its really good! Keep it up.

Isolis · « **Reply #4 on:** September 19, 2004, 12:02:07 am »

Great job!

Alcarillo · « **Reply #5 on:** October 23, 2004, 07:17:23 am »

I love it! More! I WANT MORE!!! Please? ?(

Lardhoc Aewheros · « **Reply #6 on:** October 30, 2004, 09:32:26 pm »

It is a good job. Makes your character very living. :tup: