This is a poor, badly thought out and basically all round terrible guild down to the point that, as is apparent, you can not spell.
The Book Of The Peasant
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Once a great guild war formed between the greatest of the guilds, this war nearly destoryed all of planeshift, but many great heros arose from this battle like Rain, the founder of The Sect, he was a diaboli, a devil , *cough cough* he didnt seem right, well thats what old Ragnar used to say
\"Some time just after one of the great guild wars, a solider called Rain appeared from no where. he came to towns asking for young people to train in the arts of war, well that?s what he said he was a tall diaboli or ynnwn we couldn?t tell, we were all nervous because of this but some of the less \"racist\" citizens of out township said to trust him, then at least or children would have a ok life, so we did...
every now and then he would come back and ask for more, and more, and more we should have realised it when he return with a tall evil looking solider, who looked like... my son, I ran at him and yelled \"Smokk its you finally you have returned!\"... But he just laughed coldly and said \"I don?t know who you are old man...
They left and didn?t come back for years after that, until we started hearing story?s or some who call themselves the Sect, the marched across the land until they got here, and that was the last I saw of my son, now I here the guild has shrunken, not much more then mercenaries now but I know they will return... please do not mistake them for evil, they are but ambitious\"
Ragnar Duranus, father of Smokk Duranus
Well thats from Ragnars point of view... i hear his son still resides within that guild
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My point made.
Your guild ranking system is also, rather flawed. You have only two sections, the holy section and the warrior section \'you may chose a path fighter or priest\' What about the mages? What about the merchants? What about the martial artists?. Mages are generally not holy as you seem to believe if you think that they can be put in the holy section. If I am wrong, then there is no way for a mage to gain rank. I also believe that there is no such thing as a bishop or holy boy in Planeshift as there is no Christianity. Holy boy? Why? Why did you call that class holy boy? An aged healer joins your guild for lack of another place to go...
\"Good sir, I am at a loss, I need help delivering my trade and yet receiving money to, hopefully give me a good retirement. Can I be a part of your guild of mercenarys as a healer?\"
\"Suor u is nowww an \'Holy Boy\'\"
\"Oh! The indignity of the thing!\"
\"Wat u tall kin bout mista? Go eal em peeps over theea if tey givin youse moneyes.\"
Your rules are also, flawed. For example... 2: All your friends are in the guild... Do you mean to imply, that your entire population of friends is 3 other people in your guild that you have never seen or talked to in real life? Another example... 5: No jobs is less importanat then another... I do not understand, this rule has broken my mind, thanks. By the way, check the spelling. Not to mention the title of the rules! These are the Rules of Six what? what is going on here? This does not make sense, I know you mean 6 rules but want to say it in a special way, think of a more elaborate name, if, if you can, if you can make that journey to a dictionary. Good luck.
By the way your sigs are very good.
