First off I\'d like to say I really enjoyed reading the latest issue of PS times. It is origional, and creative. The idea of a PS newspaper is a wonderful one.
I have a few questions/comments. The first really is where is the PS Times printed? I.E. is it \"ingame\" at an \"ingame printing press\"? I know there isn\'t really an ingame press, but is the idea that the PS times is distributed in Hydlaa? Or is it for people who play to read while in the real world. If it is the latter, I think you can get away with the combination of IC and OOC articles, because when you\'re not ingame or on the forums, both are applicable and people can tke what they want out of it. If the idea is that its distributed ingame then it doesn\'t make sense to have OOC references. If I was at the Tavern bragging about the hot new Kia Sephia car I just bought that would make no sense, as Kia Sephias do not exist ingame. I do, however, like putting and IC spin on real life issues such as \"The Wipe\" (UTM\'s suggestion of \"The Cleansing\" was brilliant (hindsite is always 20/20 though). )
There isn\'t anything wrong with suggestions or critism. But being defensive won\'t help much either. Take it all in stride, see what the suggestions are, decide if you think they are good, and then choose whether or not you think they should be made. There is nothing wrong with changing things pertaining to the paper. It should evolve.
Also, the indexing would be a great idea. I\'d offer help with that but help has already been offered.

All in all I love the initiative, and I found it quite interesting reading. It adds a sense of realism to the game in that I read it for things I didn\'t know were happening. Same reason I read news in real life.
Great work, keep it up, and keep at it. PS needs dedicated persons such as yourself.
P.S. I did mean to mention that I didn\'t think Phinehas\'s intent was to insult, nor did he seem to me to come across that way. I think the way he words things seems harsh at times, but its just blunt honesty. There isn\'t anything wrong with that.
