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« Reply #45 on: July 05, 2005, 07:25:56 pm »
\\o/ huzzah! for the story! :D, now i suggest you rest a bit before you bit yourself up over chapter 12 Moogs, you\'ve been pretty locomotive lately, not everyone can be a UtM :)

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« Reply #46 on: July 05, 2005, 07:26:02 pm »
You are more evil than I am. Not even I saw that coming... Well done, young one. :D

And I agree with Drey. A writing maniac! :P


*edit* @ Dem> HA! I am completely burned out after last weekend. I think I shall let Moogie have the spotlight for a bit. And well deserved, too.
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« Reply #47 on: July 06, 2005, 02:13:05 am »
You really are a great writer Moogie. This stuff is fantastic! In fact, I have to admit that in some twisted, demented way I\'m dissapointed that it\'s so good, because it makes me feel like my writing is total crap, which it is, but... :P I\'m jealousssss....

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« Reply #48 on: July 06, 2005, 04:53:01 am »
Well, Moogie... I know I allready commented on this chapter...but I have just reread the whole thing from the begining and would like to compliment you on the confidence that has grown in you as you have written Camazotz character. He has grown from good to great to astounding.

I also wish to congradulate you on reaching 22000+ words. Another 14000 and I will have to bow down and give you the title of \'Writer of the Longest PS Story\'. That is untill \'Soul\'s Mirror\' is complete. ;)
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« Reply #49 on: July 06, 2005, 04:09:32 pm »
:O How can this be true! Two chapter sevens!? *looks*

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By Laanx! You\'re right! Thanks, I had absolutely no idea. I\'ll fix the numbers right away. I think it must have happened due to my habit of copypasting the chapter seperations when I start a new one in my notepad file. Sometimes I forget to knock the number up. :P

Well then, I give you, chapter THIRTEEN. :D

(For anyone who\'s played FF9 before, the second section can be thought of as one of those \'Active Time Events\', funny little things happening in other places while the story goes on somewhere else. :) )


Chapter 13.


\"Ah, there you are, my little demon,\" came the man\'s smug voice. His dark red robes were different from the rest of the cultists; the edges were lined with a golden hem, and a belt of sapphire gems sewn on a thin strip of leathery material hung around his waist, loosely tied at the front. Like all of the Strangers, his hood was up, his face hidden in shadow, but his eyes shone a deep blue so bright that they could be seen in the darkest of rooms.

Moogie watched him approaching for as long as she could, untill the cage had climbed too high up for her to see. Her nerves were again on edge. She wondered whether he had come to order her execution, or whether he suspected Camazotz was aiding her to forfill the prophecy. Camazotz stood calmly by the lever below as the cultist stopped infront of him.

\"Heh heh, teasing the prisoner are we? Good, good. It is all the more sweeter to see them suffer a little beforehand. You have proved quite versatile in your uses, Camazotz,\" the man praised, his voice sounding old, but steady and unwavering. He held his hands behind his back as he talked. \"We are making preparations for her sacrificed. The Black God will be pleased to have her soul at last.\"

Camazotz remained silent as the man stepped forward, showing him the palm of his hand. The Xacha saw a Glyph resting there, pulsing with its own dark aura.

\"Take it,\" the Stranger commanded. Camazotz picked the object out of his hand and pocketed it. \"You will use it tonight to drag the soul from her feeble body. Once they are seperated you need no longer hold it; her circle will do the rest.\" His hand returned behind his back.

\"And then?\" Camazotz pressed.

The cultist chuckled. \"All in good time, Callicantzaros.\" He turned to walk away.

\"Strethos, our deal was-\"

He stopped and turned to face the Xacha. \"Watch yourself, Camazotz. You are in no position to be making demands,\" he chided firmly. \"Your new purpose has already been set to the circle that binds you. You will do this regardless of your loyalties.\" He glanced up at the suspended cage suggestively before turning to leave again.

Camazotz silently watched him as he left the bridge and exited through the archway. The man told the truth; the Xacha could already feel the shift in his mind. His logic faught to disapprove of what he had to do, but somehow it was the only thing that made sense. He took a deep breath and decided to lower Moogie again.

The chains clattered, and the cage thudded once again on the bridge. Moogie swung the door open, cautiously peering at both ends of the bridge before she stepped out.

\"Great to know I\'m going to die tonight,\" she mumbled. \"It\'d be nice if I knew what time it is. How do these people keep track down here?\" She dusted herself off from the dirt in the cage.

\"I have to kill you...\" Camazotz uttered.

Moogie turned to him. His eyes told her he was trying desperately to disagree, but she knew he couldn\'t.

\"Do you know where your circle is?\" she asked.

\"Yes,\" he replied, matter-of-factly. \"The circle I took you to. That is mine.\"

Moogie looked suprised. \"Yours?\" she repeated, gasping. \"So you mean if I had succeeded...\"

\"I know,\" he interrupted apologetically. \"But I\'ve not come this close to freedom in a long time. To see you so close to it, all I could think about was...\"

\"Was leaving me here in the middle of nowhere after I unknowingly killed you?\" Moogie finished his sentence vexedly. He sighed, crossing his arms. She sighed aswell, turning away from him. \"You really don\'t care, do you...\" she whispered.

Camazotz observed her. \"I\'m trying to,\" he said quietly. \"What do you expect from a tortured spirit trapped in a dead body? I think I\'ve done pretty good, if you ask me.\"

\"It\'s not good enough...\" Moogie sighed.

\"Maybe you don\'t realise how much I\'ve had to fight myself to keep control.\" he argued back. \"I\'m not perfect. There are some things that can\'t be helped. Things that don\'t matter to me, like the people in the Gondola, or Leilani\'s brother.\"

Moogie turned to him, her expression brimming with anger.

\"Perhaps you would expect a normal living thing to feel... compassion for those people. Moogie, I am nothing more than a demon. I promised the girl I would save her brother so that she would follow us. Did you actually believe I wanted to help him?\" he snorted contemptuously. \"I don\'t have time for such pointless diversions. Asking it of me is too much. Even in life I doubt I would have cared. The dead have more use to me than the living anyway.\"

The feline could stand no more. Her hand came around and slapped him hard across the face, knocking off his slouch hat. Her claws drew four thin strips of dark blood from his cheek. Her seething eyes were drained of anger as she watched his demeanor darken; perhaps it wasn\'t the best of ideas. She backed away, anticipating a retaliation.

A growl from behind took her by suprise. She dropped to the floor just as the other Callicantzaros dived for her, colliding instead with Camazotz, who had spotted it moments ago. Moogie realised his reaction had been stirred by the creature, and she retreated from them as they exploded into a fight of claws and teeth.

This isn\'t good, she thought as she watched them. The gargoyle threw itself at him again, its claws ripping through his coat as he defended. He grabbed it\'s foot and powerfully swung it over the edge of the bridge. It\'s wings burst into action immediately, saving it from the endless drop below.

Moogie could only look on as the winged demon dived at the Xacha, throwing him through the stone railings as it slammed into him. Camazotz reached up and grabbed the demon\'s leg splitseconds before he fell, but their combined weight was too much for the Callicantzaros\' wings, which fluttered desperately as they plummeted together into the abyss.

\"NO!!\" Moogie shrieked, running to the side of the bridge. She could do nothing as she watched them, still clawing at eachother, as they disappeared into the darkness. Their growls faded quickly from her ears, and soon, there was nothing but the creaking of chains and the sound of a distant breeze echoing in the hollow void.

Her heart sank. \"Camazotz...\"

She waited for what seemed like forever, but they didn\'t return. Not even the winged demon alone, having shaken off its enemy. Nothing.

Eventually she decided she had to leave. She had to get out of this place. But she had no idea where she was or how big the Strangers\' underground lair could be. She glanced from one end of the bridge to the other, wondering which way to take, but then suddenly she spotted Camazotz\' dejected hat still sitting on the bridge. Her eyes saddened as she approached and picked it up. She prayed that he had somehow survived, though she couldn\'t see how it would be possible.

Moogie had to think logically. Whichever way the Stranger left was probably deeper into the cave, so she took a deep breath and began trotting nervously towards the opposite exit. As she reached the archway, she glanced down at the hat again. With a despondant smile, she placed it over her head, before disappearing through the exit.


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Leilani lay on her stomach behind some large rocks near the cave. She crunched another hole through the stalk of a flower with her fingernail, and then picked another from the patch of colour infront of her, stringing the new flower\'s stalk through the seperation. The chain of tiny flowers was already four foot long. An empty, forlorn patch of grass watched her sadly from nearby. It\'s colour all but picked clean by her ineffable boredom.

She sighed. I\'m soooooo bored...

The girl rolled onto her back, watching the flowers bunch together on her chest as she lowered the long string down onto it. She gazed at the sky for a while, yawning sleepily. Booooooooored...

Her eyes began to close. She hadn\'t realised how tired she was. She wondered how long Moogie would be and what they were doing in there; she hadn\'t heard anything but the howling of the wind from the cave entrance, and it was way too dark and scary to go inside.

She felt something tickle her leg. \"Silly bugs,\" she mumbled, blindly brushing it away with a hand.

\"Oof!\" came a little squeak. Leilani paused. Oof? She sat up slightly and looked around. Seeing nothing, she decided she was more tired than she first thought, and rested her head back on the grass.

The daylight was starting to wane and dark clouds gathered overhead. The girl drifted peacefully in and out of sleep.

\"Food?\" cheeped a distant voice.

\"Mmh?\" Leilani half-mumbled.

\"Food?\" it repeated in its tiny, high-pitched tone.

The girl frowned, becoming slightly annoyed. \"There\'s... no food... here...\" came her groggy, sleeping response.

Something clambered onto her stomach, rousing her from her sleep. Lifting her head up, she spotted a tiny white ball of fur, with two tails and beady little eyes looking up hopefully at her. She squealed, jumping to her feet and fleeing towards the cave in hysterics, ignoring another little \"Oof!\" as it plopped onto the grass and was buried in a snow of soft white and yellow flowers.
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« Reply #50 on: July 06, 2005, 04:17:47 pm »
Really, very good.

*pouts that he\'s not as good a writer*

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« Reply #51 on: July 06, 2005, 05:26:42 pm »
8o

managed to distract me from my new offspring CD....(thats saying something) now to watch the DVD with extra noodles \\o/
<Rux> i wish i could say that narrows it down, but the internet is one freaky place

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« Reply #52 on: July 06, 2005, 06:20:21 pm »
AAYHHHH! A cute fuzzy thing! Big big  :D.

And don\'t worry \'bout the chapter thing. I never \'member what I\'m on.

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« Reply #53 on: July 06, 2005, 11:13:48 pm »
Just incase you\'re wondering what that little ball of fluff was:

http://www.albinomoogie.net/images/Rui.jpg


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« Reply #54 on: July 07, 2005, 05:04:14 am »
Chapter 14.


Moogie was grateful for her Shadowkin training. She had needed to dart into the shadows several times already to avoid being seen. The tunnels sprawled on endlessly, every path marked with yet another symbol that she couldn\'t read, much to her annoyance. The hat had been suprisingly useful in aiding her to hide, as she was able to crouch behind it, her white fur hidden behind it\'s wide brim, melding her seamlessly into the shadows.

Somehow she guessed she was in the Hall of Numbers. There were many rooms here, each marked with a slightly different rune; they appeared to be dormitories. Unfortunately for her, they were not empty, and people walked back and forth through the hall, talking in pairs, or alone, reading strange passages from small leatherbound books.

As the whole complex seemed to be using an ancient cavern system, many of the tunnels were chiselled into neat square corridors and supported by wooden beams that ran along the ceilings to minimise the risk of cave-ins. Gas lamps hung from the rafters, illuminating small areas at a time with a soft yellow light. Moogie crept along the wooden support beams, hidden in the shadows above the masking glare of the flames. She had to move slowly; the wood was old and groaned with pressure as she stepped over the beams. One Stranger had already glanced above his head as she passed, forcing her to freeze in place for what seemed like an eternity, untill he decided nothing was there and moved on.

She passed over a group of acolytes who were talking together in hushed voices. Her nose twitched as it snagged a cobweb, and she brushed it away in annoyance. A piece drifted to the floor, to her restrained horror, but fortunately it seemed to go unnoticed. However, as her eyes followed it down, she spotted a peculiar pendant hanging around the neck of one of the cultists.

I\'ve seen that before... she thought, squinting to see it clearly. A small oval of metal; an eye. And within, a reptilian iris. Yes, of course... the pendant the Callicantzaros was wearing. I wonder if Camazotz has... had the same...

Her ears twitched as she eavesdropped on the conversation below.

\"Strethos has ordered them both to be recalled,\" spoke one. He glanced over his shoulder to ensure they were not overheard. \"Apparently something\'s wrong, but I havn\'t heard what yet.\"

Another joined in, his voice a deep whispering. \"Ah. No, the first began acting strangely some days ago. And the second, well, we havn\'t been able to follow him since he was sent out. I say it\'s a miracle the damned thing returned here at all...\"

\"Well they can\'t ignore their primary orders, no matter what,\" said the one with his pendant showing, \"so he would have brought her back eventually. But after the trouble we had with the third, Strethos got fed up and decided to call a Council gathering.\"

A third? wondered Moogie, narrowing her eyes.

\"When is that?\" the first speaker asked curiously.

\"Shhh... keep your voice down,\" another warned. \"I heard it was pretty soon, probably half an hour or so from now.\"

The group were interrupted by another Stranger who approached them from behind. \"What are you lot gossiping here? Get back to your chambers!\" he commanded angrily. They mumbled a few apologies and dispersed, each finding their quarters and locking their doors behind them. The bossy cultist grumbled something about a meeting to himself and strided out of the hall. Moogie moved on through the rafters in cautious persuit. Sounds like a meeting I shouldn\'t miss...

The Stranger lead her through the twisting labyrinth, muttering and grumbling to himself for a good twenty-five minutes, untill he came to a pair of tall, sturdy doors, both marked with the reptilian eye symbol stained onto the surface. He heaved them open on their huge, rusty hinges and stepped through. To her disappointment, they swung shut behind him before she could follow, and she was left standing in the tunnel with no way of getting inside unseen by the people within.

Dammit, she cursed. Glancing both ways, she approached the doors. Maybe I can still hear them from here...

She placed her ear flat against the wood. There was a large gathering inside, she judged from the noise. A hammer was tapped lightly on a wooden surface and the chaotic talk finally subsided.

\"May our words and thoughts here be spoken with truth and for the greater purpose,\" a familiar voice called. It was Strathos. The sounds of many seats sliding forwards as the people sat down filled Moogie\'s ears. \"We gather here today to discuss the recent issues concerning the Callicantzaros. Why was I not informed of the problems with the first two, before the creation of the third?\"

Moogie heard a chair scrape across the floor as someone stood. \"Speaker of the Flame, no major problems were seen with the first two before the third summoning,\" he replied. A murmer went through those gathered and the hammer was tapped again.

\"Councillor Morgal, you could not even track the movements of the Xacha. Is that not seen, in your eyes, as a major problem?\" His voice was greatly agitated.

\"Speaker of the Flame, it was not seen as a hinderance, merely a minor inconvenience for the Watchers. He brought the prophecised one back just as planned.\"

Moogie\'s keen hearing heard footsteps coming from down the hall. She quickly leapt up to the ceiling where she hid untill a pair of cultists passed by underneath and disappeared through the opposite door. Carefully dropping to the floor again, she resumed her position infront of the doors. Strethos was now speaking.

\"-can not afford any more of these setbacks. I have already re-summoned the third Callicantzaros, and I am pleased to report to the rest of the Council that it is now working at its full capacity. The others must be called back to receive the same correction, after which we\'ll have no more of this nonsense about them making their own haphazardous decisions. They will do exactly what we tell them, when we tell them, and nothing more.\" There was a pause. \"Where are they? I thought I requested their presence here in this meeting. Well?\"

Someone else stood, stifling a nervous cough. \"Speaker of the Flame. There is, uh, another recent problem. Camarenzis and Camazotz both reappeared in their circles simultaneously some moments ago, and the Xacha tells us they have been... somewhat... in disagreement,\" he stammered.

Moogie\'s jaw dropped. He\'s alive...!

\"What do you mean \'in disagreement\', Councillor Baram?\"

Baram hesitated. \"Well... it seems that Camarenzis thinks Camazotz should... not live.\" He swallowed so hard that even Moogie outside picked up the sound. \"And Camazotz... uh, disagrees of course. He thinks Camarenzis should die instead.\"

Distainful murmers grew loud from within the room. The feline almost missed the sound of more approaching footsteps from the corridor behind her, and was able to dart into the rafters again before another cloaked Stranger appeared. In his hand he clenched the end of a chain made of a strange metal that seemed to eminate a bright yellow glow from each link. It seemed to be magically fused, and Moogie could guess why; behind him, following closely in tow, were the two Callicantzaros. She thought it odd that they wern\'t fighting. They wern\'t even making a sound. They looked subdued, somehow in a hypnotic state of obedience, and the thick strips of glowing metal clamped around their necks suggested they had been forcibly restrained.

The Stranger swung the doors open and lead them through. As they closed shut, Moogie took up her listening position again, her eager ears aching even more now to hear the rest of the meeting.

\"Ah, finally.\" Strethos welcomed the Stranger as he entered the room.

\"Speaker of the Flame, my apologies for the delay,\" the newcomer apologised. \"For some reason they are having difficulties tolerating eachother\'s presence. They fight as soon as they spot one-another. Restraining them was the only way to bring them here together.\"

Moogie heard a chair move, then footsteps. They came relatively close to the door and then stopped.

\"I shall cast a simple enchantment on their pendants. It will be a temporary solution to their disobedient tendancies, for now. See to it that they are not removed untill we have had time to perform their re-summonings,\" ordered Strathos. There was a sound of a lock being freed, and the chains fell heavily to the stone floor. Footsteps lead back to the far end of the room and the speaker sat down. \"Since the girl is to be sacrificed in a few hours time, it would be best if Councillor Baram personally oversees the rituals.\"

Moogie swallowed, her stomach churning.

\"They will take place immediately. This Council is adjourned.\"

She didn\'t have much time before her disappearance from the bridge room was discovered, and then there would be no hope of her escaping at all.

There was much talking and chair-scraping as the cultists ended their meeting and moved towards the door. Having leapt back up into the shadows already, Moogie watched silently as they filed out of the room. The two Callicantzaros, and the Stranger who Moogie could only assume was Baram, were the last to leave. They took a different route to the others who were heading in the direction of the dormatories.

I need to get that pendant off of him somehow or I\'ve got no hope, Moogie frowned, lowering herself cautiously down as to not alert the keen senses of the demons. She skulked forward a few steps to see where they were being lead. I hope Leilani doesn\'t decide to come down here... she worried.


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Leilani peered nervously over the rocks at the small animal. It was sitting on a bed of flowers, chewing one in its mouth as it spotted her and looked up curiously. The girl ducked.

Don\'t be silly... mice can\'t talk... she tried to persuade herself again. Nevertheless, she was face-to-face with a mouse that could say \"Oops\" and \"Food\" in a language she spoke. She peeked, very slowly, back over the rocks. It was still looking directly at her.

\"...Hi?\" Leilani whispered, feeling somewhat foolish. It squeaked back, it\'s tiny mouth still stuffed with petals. Leilani relaxed.

\"I knew it, I must be going crazy...\" the girl sighed.

\"Moodie?\" it cheeped. Leilani froze. Now it was calling her names. Feeling quite silly for herself, she attempted to reply.

\"Who are you calling moody, furball?\" she scorned softly.

\"Moo...die?\" it repeated. A gust of wind blew across the plains and whistled through the grass between them. The petals sticking out of the creature\'s mouth acted like a windsail, rolling the fluffy mouse onto its back with a familiar \"Oof\". Leilani couldn\'t help but giggle in amusement.

\"You\'re an odd little thing, arn\'t you?\" she said, feeling braver as she approached it and knelt down on the floor. It picked itself up off its back and toddled towards her. Climbing up onto her knee, it lifted itself onto its haunches and sniffed the air.

\"Moodie food?\"

\"Hmm,\" the girl mused. \"You\'re not saying \'moody\', are you...\" She stroked the little creature\'s head with her index finger. It closed its eyes happily. A small petal still poked out of its mouth.

Having gained Leilani\'s trust, the mouse jumped onto the grass and started shuffling away. The girl followed, towering over it on all fours, giggling delightedly. That is, untill she realised the direction it was leading her to.

\"Moodie...\" she whispered, standing up fully, her eyes fixed on the cave mouth and the small white ball that ran purposefully towards it. \"You mean Moogie, don\'t you?\" She stepped forward cautiously.

\"Moodie!\" It squeaked again, glancing between the cave and the girl.

\"How do you know that name, hmm?\" she asked. \"Hmm, maybe it wants me to go in... maybe something\'s wrong!\" She gasped, peering into the darkness. \"I hope not... it sure looks dark in there...\"

The creature sniffed around, slowing edging into the cave. Leilani held her arms frightfully as she followed. She wondered why she was following a mouse into a den full of evil madmen, but the thought that her friend may be in trouble compelled her forward regardless.

\"Lani to the rescue, eh mousie?\" she tried to joke bravely. She was already trembling in fear.

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« Reply #55 on: July 07, 2005, 02:15:14 pm »
Very, very good. Although you spelt \"scrape\" \"strape\", but I won\'t hurt you for it this time. :P

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« Reply #56 on: July 07, 2005, 06:32:48 pm »
Yeah, I\'m making so many typos lately it\'s scary. I think it\'s something to do with my ears.

Err, eyes.*



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« Reply #57 on: July 07, 2005, 09:58:25 pm »
maybe your pushing yourself too hard ^^ take a break, other then that when your sleeping ;)

it\'s brilliant so far, hope it keeps getting better, you\'ll kick stephen king\'s ass xD

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« Reply #58 on: July 07, 2005, 10:41:55 pm »
Are my chapters getting shorter??


Chapter 15.


The Summoning Room was once again filled with men, hidden underneath their grey robes, chanting in unison. To an onlooker, they all might aswell have been clones of eachother. The archaic symbols covering the floor pulsed randomly, their glowing soft, barely tinting the floor around them. They were focusing their energies, cleansing the room, and preparing for the resummoning rituals to come.

Baram lead the two Callicantzaros to a dank, moist cavern further inside the lair. He passed through the entrance, greeting the lightly armoured guard who stood vigilantly by the doorway. Moogie took stock of the man from afar, not daring to approach further; he wore the same dull robes as most other cultists she had seen, but it was open at the front, revealing a protective dark brown leather tunic over his chest, and thick padded pauldrons paired with some heavy cloth boots. A longsword was sheathed at his side by a sturdy black belt with silver studs running across the front. His gloved hands were held loosely by his sides, the circles of metal on each knuckle reflecting the orange of the small brazier flames at either side of the door. He looked well-enough equipped for his duty.

Baram appeared again some moments later from within the room, stopping to give instructions to the man.

\"I\'ll be returning with the girl soon. See to it the Callicantzaros stay put in the meantime; Strethos will have my head if anything else goes wrong today,\" he instructed unsteadily.

\"Yes Councillor.\" The guard nodded. Moogie was eternally grateful for all the ceiling supports as Baram passed by underneath her, heading for the bridge room. Somehow, she had to get inside that room without being seen, and quickly. As soon as Baram found her cage empty, the whole complex would be searching for her, and she knew she couldn\'t hide forever. She had to think quickly.

The guard, now alone, leant lazily against the wall and crossed his arms, visibly bored. His eyes began to close, untill he noticed some movement ahead. Thinking Baram had returned already, he straightened up and composed himself.

But nobody came. He scratched his head in mild confusion.

A piece of rubble rolled into view from the tunnel ahead. His eyes narrowed.

\"Someone there?\" he called, gripping his sword. No reply came. He took a step forward, leaning towards the wall for a better view.

Another pebble hit something out of sight and rolled back across the tunnel.

\"Ahh, tricky one are we? Can\'t fool me that easily...\" the guard whispered under his breath, grinning to himself slyly. He carefully drew his sword as quietly as he could and edged forward. \"Come out, come out, wherever you are...\"

A shadow moved, and the guard jumped out into the passage, sword swinging before him, grinning triumphantly at having seen through the ploy and facing in the opposite direction from where the disturbance had come. But nothing was there.

\"Huh!?\" He swivelled around in confusion, thinking he had been duped. The other tunnel was also empty. Not an intruder in sight.

His sword arm dropped in disappointment. \"Well what the hell...?\"

A pair of white furry legs dropped from directly above him and wrapped themselves around his neck before he could react.

\"Gak..!\" was all he could choke out, as he dropped his sword and started clawing at the strong limbs as they denied him precious air.

\"Kinda stupid, arn\'t you?\" Moogie held on to the beam above her head, digging her claws in furiously as he tried in vain to struggle free of her grip. For a few minutes, it seemed he would outlast her strength, but eventually his flailing subsided, his movements slowed, and his body went limp. The feline held him for a few moments longer incase he was still awake, but eventually released him to collapse on the floor. She dropped gracefully down beside him.

\"Sorry about that,\" she grinned, quickly moving towards the newly unguarded room ahead.

She peeked inside. The smell was terrible, like rotting meat and animal excrement. It was dark and stained with dirt and blood across the floors and walls. Lining the far wall was what seemed to be an enormous ribcage jutting out of the rock, the bones dark and ancient. Moogie suddenly realised this was a prison room. And within the bone cell, the two demons waited patiently to be released. She gulped, terrified of what the reaction might be as soon as they saw her approach. But she had no choice; she had to remove the pendant from Camazotz; she needed his help.

She stepped down into the room quietly. From the deep shadows behind the blackened ribs, two pairs of eyes flashed up at her as they noticed the intrusion. They came to the bars immediately, eyes fixed piercingly on her. Moogie froze.

There was silence.

Where she had expected calls of alarm, or mad scrabbling to break out and apprehend her, there was nothing. Just their cold, haunting eyes following her as she cautiously approached. Moogie glanced between the two, fearfully unsure of how close she was safe to be, but neither of them flinched. They stood like living statues, stone gargoyles whos gaze could not be avoided from any angle.

\"C-Camazotz...?\" she whispered, peering into his dulled eyes. They watched her silently, unblinking. A shiver went down her spine.

She inched forward. Her whole body was tense, ready to jump back at the first sign of movement. Her claws pressed against the moist rock under her feet. Slowly, with one hand, she reached forward. Slowly, and even slower the closer she came.

There was still no reaction. Moogie even wondered if they could move at all. Her hand came closer to the chain around his neck. It begged to her. Her heart raced. His eyes narrowed. But she noticed too late.

A hand flew out between the bars and locked itself around her neck before she could even pull her arm back in suprise. She felt herself lifted from the floor. His eyes no longer moved as his fingers clenched harder. Too hard. Unbearably hard. Moogie\'s senses overloaded with panic and pain flooded her mind.

As the images of the world blended together and began to fade, a small noise went unnoticed beside her.

\"Release her!\" came an urgent call, so distant in her failing ears. She barely noticed as she was dropped immediately to the ground, her head hitting against the rock. Darkness decended all around her.

\"You stupid creature!\" Strethos reviled, his fist clenched threateningly at Camazotz. \"What use is she to us dead out here? If I knew you were this broken I would have just fed you to the Fenhounds.\" The two demons\' eyes remained fixed on the girl as she lay unconcious by his feet.

\"My apologies,\" Camazotz said flatly. \"My instructions were to kill her when she was next presented to me.\"

Strethos grunted in anger. \"When she was presented to you in the Den of Sacrifice, you fool...\" he seethed through gritted teeth. Baram quickly approached from the doorway, kneeling down to check the feline\'s pulse.

\"I knew she\'d probably come here if she escaped... s-she seems to be alive, at least.\" He stood up, turning to Strethos. \"His circle is ready... S-shall I escort him?\" he fumbled nervously.

Strethos nodded as he turned to Camarenzis. The dark creature looked back at him, expressionless. \"Now, you listen carefully to this order, or I will trap your soul in a glass bottle and bury you under the Eighth Level seabed.\" The demon gulped. \"You are to remain here with the girl and ensure she does not leave this prison on her own. If she tries to leave before one of my men come to claim her, do what you must to restrain her, but I do NOT want her dead. Is that understood fully, wretched creature?\"

The Callicantzaros nodded slowly, baring its teeth in what could be considered an ugly, forced grin.

\"Good,\" Strethos settled, recoiling slightly in disgust, before turning to leave. Baram unlocked a makeshift cell door at the end of the ancient ribcage.

\"Come with me, Camazotz.\" He gestured with his hand, and the Xacha stepped out through the door. He moved over to pick up Moogie\'s body and put her inside, before moving away to allow Baram to lock the door again. The Stranger turned to him, holding out a glowing Glyph, his eyes closed as he cast the spell within.

A twirling spike of energy rose from his palm, twisting around itself and forming chainlinks. They wrapped around Camazotz\' neck, forming the magical brace Moogie had seen him locked in earlier at the meeting room. It tightened around his skin, and his body shivered. His eyes became drained of colour. Baram nodded, satisfied he was secure, and lead him out of the room after Strethos.

The room was quiet once again, save for the dripping of water down the walls and the buzzing of flies around a festering piles of bones in the corner. Alone with the girl, Camarenzis sunk to all fours and approached Moogie\'s motionless form, it\'s tail flicking from side to side in delight. The creature\'s lips turned into a cruel grin as it extended one of it\'s incredibly long, thin claws and turned her onto her back. Peering closely at her body, it found an area of skin on her chest that was not already injured or stained with blood, and began scratching a small symbol into it. Blood was drawn and formed tiny streams of red liquid that weaved through her fur and down underneath the dirtied material of her clothes. The Callicantzaros cackled to itself as it finished the mark, and stood up proudly, kicking Moogie roughly back onto her stomach.

\"Kromshuul be pleeeashed...\" it gurgled to itself gloriously. \"Shtrangers deliversh meee what I neeedshed, kreehehehe... shoon, Kromshuul, he comesh to take shem all... even your presshious Xashca will be hisshh. Weaksh little girl... weaksh little humaansh, kaaahehehe!\"

Somewhere in the darkness, the unearthly sound echoed distantly in Moogie\'s head. But she couldn\'t move. Even as she felt herself being picked up and carried away over someone\'s shoulder, whispers of a sacrifice floating faintly in the air, the darkness wouldn\'t lift. She struggled against it in vain as she was carried away.

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« Reply #59 on: July 07, 2005, 11:18:18 pm »
oh noes  8o  whats going to happen to poor moogie?
<Rux> i wish i could say that narrows it down, but the internet is one freaky place