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« Reply #60 on: July 08, 2005, 01:07:49 am »
I am enjoying Drey\'s comments almost as much as Moogie\'s story. :D

And that creature is one creepy bugger.

28K<36K  but not by much. ;)

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« Reply #61 on: July 11, 2005, 10:41:27 am »
im not a creepy bugger

*runs off crying*
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« Reply #62 on: July 11, 2005, 12:41:40 pm »
I think he may have been talking about Camarenzis... :) if not, I\'ll send a slap through the wires, postage address: UtM\'s cheeks :P

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« Reply #63 on: July 18, 2005, 03:10:30 pm »
Chapter 16.


A crack of thunder tore through the darkness, leaving a streak of pain across her cheek. Moogie winced, struggling to open her eyes. She sensed she was upright, yet her legs felt free of weight. Something cold was digging into her wrists painfully as she hung in limbo between sleep and conciousness, her feet barely touching what she thought might be the ground.

Baram brought his fist swifly across her face again, waking her more successfully this time. She groaned, her eyelids straining themselves open, her head rolling as she tried to make sense of the situation. Pain made its presence felt as an aching sore around her neck. She struggled to remember why.

\"Enough, Baram, she wakes.\"

Had her senses been more focused, the voice of Strethos would have filled her mind with a terrible sense of dread. As she struggled to lift her head, she glimpsed a blurry image of someone moving away from her, decending some steps and heading towards the center of the room. Her eyes gained their focus gradually.

Familiar; it was dark. Shadowy figures lined the edges of the stone cavern. Moogie\'s ears twitched; she noticed the ghostly sound of their voices, chanting as one. She wasn\'t quite sure whether they had just begun or whether the low hum had been echoing through the cold room since before she had even awoke. Someone stood at the center of the room amidst pulsating runic symbols, carved carefully into the stone and arranged in some unfathomable pattern. His back faced her, but the Xacha was instantly recognisable.

\"Cama...\" she uttered weakly, her voice barely breaking into sound. Yet he heard, turning slowly towards the feline from within his runic prison. Several loose strands of hair hung deftly infront of his emotionless face, free from the ponytail he kept hidden beneath his coat, their pale colour contrasting brightly with his eyes. Such strange eyes, she noticed again. Yet as he looked over her weakened form, they held hints of sadness and despair. The usual glow had faded once again underneath the cruel magical binds that subdued him into a state of zombie-like obedience.

But as she looked back into his eyes, she saw him; he was still inside there, somewhere, chained and helpless, just as she was. Desperate and loathing, locked away. It was then that the realisation dawned on her of what she was about to witness. This ritual was his re-summoning; the Strangers were about to make him \'perfect\' to them, to remove the last scraps of free will he still held. Her own eyes cried out to him silently, but he could not answer.

The preparations were now all but complete; the Strangers stepped forward, lifting their hands above their heads. The humming grew louder as Strethos began reciting his ancient dark magics, one hand holding a heavy book from which he read, the other marking symbols in the air as he spoke. The runes on the floor pulsed brighter, faster, their light reaching up, threatening to engulf Camazotz in a blinding yellow haze. Somewhere inside the mass of chains that locked his mind away from his body, he tried desperately to free himself, to escape before all hope was lost. But there was no way out. No time left.

Strong, sudden vibrations rumbled through the floor as the circle threw up a pillar of sheer white light around him, flooding the room with its intensity. The cultists stepped back, bowing their heads, using their hoods as shields to protect their fragile eyes. Moogie gasped, also quickly turning her gaze away. The impermeable light cloaked the Xacha within from view, yet his tortured cries drowned out even the rumbling of the cave. The noise cut through Moogie\'s mind like a dagger, and she could do nothing to help. She could only imagine what pain flooded every nerve of his body as his soul was ruthlessly ripped out of it.

Strethos was the only Stranger close to the circle now, his face resolute, his teeth grit hard. With outstretched fingers he pulled at the air, controlling the unnatural force that was dragging Camazotz\' spirit roughly through his burning skin, every particle of its energy grasping at the fibres of its physical form. The ground shuddered violently as Strethos\' arm suddenly jolted backwards, his fist clenched into a tight ball. He struggled to keep hold as the spirit flailed wildly; confused, overwhelmed, and angered by its sudden freedom.

\"NOOO!!\" Moogie screamed, a loud sob escaping her lungs as she heard a heavy thud from within the spell circle; realising, horribly, the sound of the man\'s empty body falling lifelessly to the floor. The rumblings subsided, and the chanting fell silent. Even Strethos had finished with his book, for now, and set it down on the ground by his feet. The light faded gradually.

It took Moogie some minutes before she gathered the courage to turn her head back and look at the scene. When she finally did, it was too much for her to bare. The Xacha\'s body lay face down in the circle, as lifeless as the runes that surrounded it. Floating in the air above, a small orb of light was encompassed by a larger, shadowy form. Deep red spikes of Dark magic shimmered across the imprisoning mass of energy, trapping the soul helplessly within as it pressed itself against the boundries. It seemed almost magnetically drawn to the body on the floor. The air hummed with the disturbance of ethereal screams that made no audible sound; the feeling sent a cold shiver down the feline\'s spine. She looked on in despair, her eyes filled with tears of grief, her arms straining painfully against their chains.

\"This can\'t be real...\" she choked pitifully.


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The world temporarily lost all meaning. Where once the light that surrounded him flooded his senses, drowned his vision, now there was nothing. When the pain had become too much, and every nerve in his body had screamed in agony, now nothing was there to feel it anymore.

Darkness.

Silence.

Time stood still. There was no conciousness. No memory of what was happening.

No thoughts.

No feelings.

Nothing existed. Not even Camazotz himself.

The split second passed as quickly as eternity and suddenly he felt the opposite. Every movement in the air, every sound within a hundred miles screamed through him like the waves of a stormy sea. It was not that he could see, or hear, or think. The information just seemed to be absorbed, like streams running into a larger river, merging, disappearing, becoming one and the same. Everything shimmered; ripples and waves disturbed the very fabric of existance, moving together, working in perfect unison, unseen and unnoticed to the larger world. But something here felt wrong.

Something unbreakable disturbed his energies; trapping, constricting. It kept him still and controlled, where he should be free to meld with the world, travel its length and breadth in a single heartbeat of time. Whatever it was, it kept him whole, as an existance, as a being of the physical world. The unnatural aura emitted something that could almost be described as pain; so deep and terrible, unrestricted by the limitations of the physical existance. His energy screamed and threw itself against the invisible forces, again and again, but it was no good. He could not free himself.

Underneath this, however, there was something larger waiting to happen. A steady vibration, something everpresent, which seemed to grow stronger by each passing second. Its presence felt heavy. It tugged at the soul, and a dark whisper entered the world. He had felt it some time before, even with his living body; a strange tingling in the air, almost unnoticeable, but now the sound made a terrible kind of sense. Then it happened: a shape appeared before him. Tiny vibrations shuddered together, creating an outline in space inperceptable to the world- yet he sensed it there clearly, moving, rising up out of the ether, its form growing bigger, tiny movements combining with others, growing in strength. As it threatened to engulf him with its sheer size, he felt a familiar pattern rushing through the world\'s fabric. Its ripples washed though him strongly- a scream, frightened and desperate. Someone he recognised. And then, all hell broke lose.

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« Reply #64 on: July 18, 2005, 03:11:07 pm »
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It had started so quickly; Moogie screamed again. A paralysing arch of energy burst from the circle and hit her in the chest, knocking the wind out of her and latching on like an anchor. The symbol scratched into her skin spat blood from the wound; she tried to wrench her body away from this agonising embrace, gasping for air, but the force was stronger than anything she had ever felt. The floor shook as the ceiling began crumbling onto the gathering below, rocks and dust thrown amidst the unsuspecting cultists.

\"What\'s going on!?\" Strethos yelled, sweeping up the book with a swift hand as he jumped back to avoid the falling chaos. The Strangers fled in a panic towards the exit, but some did not make it in time. Moogie\'s overloaded ears somehow still heard their suprised cries as they were crushed under the weight of the earth. Trapped in her chains and pinned by the energy, she watched fearfully as the spirit and Camazotz\' body were abandoned, lost underneath a mountain of debris; carnage that would soon kill her too if she could not get free.

Through the deafening roar of the cave-in, and the calls of the men as they pushed others out of their way in a desperate bid to escape, Moogie heard an obscured voice urgently calling her name.

\"Is someone there? Help me... please...\" Her strained voice could barely manage a whisper, and the effort drained her immensely. To her suprise, the figure scrambling through the rubble was a young girl, her clothes becoming rapidly quilted in layers of grey dirt as she stumbled blindly towards the feline. Moogie recognised Leilani as she hurriedly began pulling at the chains restraining her arms.

\"Lani... Oh Gods... hurry!\" she gasped. The girl tugged at the chains, vainly searching for a way to release her friend. But she could do nothing with the crackling blue arm keeping a stranglehold on the feline\'s chest.

\"What\'s happening, Moogie? How do I free you!?\" The roar of the cave-in almost drowned out her words. Leilani couldn\'t yank the chains free; there was no way to pull them away from the metal poles buried into the stone, and the links were much too strong to break with her young, delicate hands. She wanted to embrace her friend, tell her how sorry she was, but Moogie gasped and shook her head.

\"No, Lani... get... away. You can still... ugh! Before it\'s too late...!\"

Leilani could see her strength failing, but she couldn\'t just abandon her here. The chaos inside the cavern room was loud, but Moogie could hear the girl\'s defeated sobs above anything else.

\"It wasn\'t your fault, Lani...\"

Both of them prepared to feel death crush them from above in the next heartbeat. But that instant, another thick bolt of energy from the circle pierced the debris and threw itself upwards through the roof. A sudden blast of hot air from above knocked Leilani off her feet and sent Moogie thudding into the stone wall behind her, knocking her unconcious. Panicked, the young Ylian scuffled on all fours away from the source of the light, but there was no escaping this. Another wave of burning oxygen threw her across the stone like a toy. She found herself plunged into darkness.

It felt odd. She was weightless, but awake. Yet the world seemed...  gone. It struck her that she still lived, somehow, as a dark, whispy voice penetrated the infinite shadows, deep into her mind. It\'s sinister tone dripped poison in the darkness; Leilani felt flooded with emotions of hatred and unmeasurable pain as it reached with icy fingers into her soul and whispered without words.

\"So these little Flame fanatics thought to steal my powers and my Callicantzaros, did they? Well no longer... I have come to reclaim what is rightfully mine...\"

She shuddered involuntarily. The voice made her feel physically sick. It seemed to contemplate her for a moment- a long, drawn moment of silence that seemed to last longer than it actually had. Her sobs echoed in the quiet blackness.

\"Two tiny mortals I see before me. Swallowed and lost, deep within the bowels of the earth... You do not belong here, Ylian. But the other... she has served her purpose well.\"

\"W-Who are you?\" The girl clutched her mouth in suprise as no sound came out of it.

\"Go home.\"

Suddenly, there was silence. The scent of the air changed; no longer stuffy and claustrophobic, it felt fresh, slightly dewy, and sweet with the smell of... Sekich\'Kui?

Leilani opened her confused eyes and was greeted by a wide open area. Fields of crop quilted the landscape all around her. All was silent- she no longer felt the voice, or the rumbling of the earth. The wind washed gently over the plains and through her hair. The light was dimming above.

\"Moogie...?\" she called weakly, her eyes searching around her. But Moogie didn\'t reply. She was alone. And worse, it dawned on her that she recognised this place. She stood slowly, the breeze drying her wet cheeks.

\"I\'m... I\'m home...\" she whispered. Her fists clenched and her eyes welled up. \"I\'M HOME!!\" she screamed. Her voice was carried away, and nothing but the wind answered her pained cries.

\"I\'m so sorry Moogie...\"

Something wriggled next to her. Confused at first, the girl realised she had almost forgotten one small detail. From a small pouch tied to her waist, she gently brought out the fluffy mouse she had kept hidden there. She stroked its little body, her eyes filled with tears.

\"Moogie...\" she sobbed, lifting her head to the sky.

\"Moodie?\" the little creature echoed innocently.



Whoops, I forgot to use the Doublepost-B-Gone trick. Oh well, I\'ll use it next time. :)
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« Reply #65 on: July 18, 2005, 04:13:25 pm »
finally you took ages :| i swear you said to me it was nearly done or something way back.

but you still manager the same standards  \\o/



Editation! is it me or do like all my post sound like they are thoughts rolling out of my brain and getting typed out in any random way.
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« Reply #66 on: July 21, 2005, 04:46:25 am »
Chapter 17
**Guest Chapter! Kindly written by Ayshe**


The stone and hide city of Ojaveda was a bustling centre, well deserved of it\'s place as the fourth largest settlement on the first level of Yliakum. It was a city that never truly knew night, as the trade Dsars of Sarraghi and Akkaio especially were open at all times.

Ojaveda was largely inhabited by Enkidukai, and just as day and night meant little to hunters who could spot prey well in either, a new kind of hunter and prey had evolved over time amongst the bleached white stones. Pick any typical street of Akkaio, and it was guaranteed to be filled end to end with the tight press of bodies, hawkers, pickpockets and merchants. Here between rare herbs, trinkets and bolts of fine cloth, the new hunters of the Enkidukai city - the merchants - sought their less dangerous but no less cunning prey - the customer and their tria.

One could buy rare gems, momentoes of the \"surface\", food, clothes, potions to give life, take it, bring you love, wealth, magical crystals and even affections... all for the right fee. A newcomer to Ojaveda, green from the fields and heavy of tria was a helpless malksa amongst the hunters.

Of the other dsars, all had a purpose. But here in the Blikau dsar, the housing district, there was something unusual. On this street of white stone, there was a blackened twisted shape nestled amongst the buildings.

The heat from the fire had been incredible. The stones themselves had spit and crackled, shattering into bright glassy shards in places. Of the wood structure, there was just a fine ash. Of the possessions in the house, much the same fate had arisen. Yet something was wrong, and the short Nolthir - an Akkaio vigesimi - standing by the wreckage with his official quill and scrolls, had no clue what to write.

From the sheer tortured destruction of the building, the very paving stones should have shattered. The vigesimi looked at his feet and saw the cobbles unblemished and covered only by a light sand, that blew in from the dunes to the east. Looking around, black tongues of soot reached across the surrounding buildings and dirtied them. Yet there was no other damage, and the vigesimi knew that the black soot should not have come from this fire, for the heat was too intense. It was as if someone had created a massive amount of heat and flames, but confined it to this building alone. An act of malice, but what powers could have done such an act, and for what purpose?

The scene made him very uneasy.

Footsteps behind him made him turn. There, on the street him were two enkidukai. One male, one female by the looks. Both wore blue and silver clothing, with some sort of stylised  motif woven in to the fabrics. A guild of some kind. He did not have time for gawkers. Besides, he was not fond of Enkidukai.

\"Clear off\" he rasped, his throat drier than usual. \"Official business. Move along\"

The male stepped forward, mouth open to protest. Full of indignant pride. Oh these arrogant furred creatures were always trouble. But the female placed a hand on his shoulder. The male looked at her and nodded, stepping back. Strange, that. She stepped forward and spoke to the Nolthir.

\"We are here to ask questions about this building\" she asked. Before the Nolthir could reply, she had pulled out a signet ring embedded with a special glyph that he instantly recognised.

\"Official business\" she said with a smile that held no warmth or humour.

The Nolthir resigned himself to obliging. This enkidukai was either a Vigesimi, or on vigesimi\'s business. Given her appearance, he guessed the latter.

\"What would you ask? Intense fire, no surrounding damage. No deaths. It\'s an insignificant house owned by a nobody. Probably a prank\"

He saw the enkidukai\'s eyes narrow at the mention of a \"nobody\". He found himself uncharacteristicly startled. Her eyes, blue and clear held something in them... he felt as if she was staring through him and focussing a few feet behind his heard. The effect was rather intimidating, and he faltered in his speech.

\"No deaths. Are you sure?\" the enki demanded.

\"Y-yes... a sounding was performed. No souls departed this place recently enough to have been the fire\"

He turned back to the building. \"Small building, no death. So pointless, and so much paperwork for me\" He growled and turned back, but the enkidukais had gone. He caught a glimpse of them walking briskly to the city gates. Fine by him. He returned to his report, irritated.



The offices of Ayshe Alchamet, current leader of the Felines Lair were brightly lit. Three enkidukai sat in this room, all deep in thought. Ayshe, standing by the window, reading a report so new the ink was barely dry. Mordon Thoth, the scholar, and Zaxim, Moogie\'s second in command of Shadowkin - the order of spies for Felines Lair.

Ayshe finished reading the hastily coded report and addressed her companions.

\"The accident was deplorable. So many deaths... and still no one knows why. A carriage was found, impacted into the second level transit station. Scorched, twisted wreckage and a lot of very dead passengers. The cable was sheared through. This is a piece of the puzzle\"

Mordon cocked his head. \"How are you sure?\"

\"Because Moogie was seen boarding the carriage by a few eyewitnesses, with a young Ylian. Yet there were no enkidukai in the wreckage.\"

Ayshe nodded at Zaxim, thanking him for his contribution to the report.

\"What we know is that Moogie did not return home that night, and that her house was utterly destroyed some time in the early hours of the following morning. She was not seen until a few days later, boarding a carriage for the second level. She did not reach the second level, but she did not return to the first. The only eyewitnesses are dead.\"

Mordon shrugged. \"So what now\"

Walking over to a sturdy cabinet, Ayshe undid a complicated lock and withdrew three intricate and unique chainmesh gloves, each with a small blue lionhead glyph mounted in the center of the palm. Zaxim could see a large device carefully packed in to the cabinet. A present from a retired kran, he knew... a very dark contraption indeed. Ayshe was the head of a special order in the Felines Lair. One that dared to go a place that was as far from the light as it was possible to go.

Ayshe locked the cabinet and put the glove on that held glyph she had been personally bonded to. The blue crystal glowed faintly as it touched her paw.

\"Get me Keder and Hart.\" - Two of the other members of the Order, and the most experienced in the Death Realm.

Zaxim looked at his guildleader, in a mixture of mild awe, fear and admiration. \"What\'s the plan?\"

Ayshe clenched her palm, wincing at the memory of the last trip she had made using the glyph. \"We need to speak to those eyewitnesses in the Death Realm. We have to act quickly, before they are claimed...\"



Thanks Ayshe, that was great! :)

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« Reply #67 on: July 21, 2005, 05:20:43 am »
Bravo! Well done!

*is speechless other than those two phrases*

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« Reply #68 on: July 31, 2005, 03:47:37 am »
Sorry, sorry... I know, my attentions have been elsewhere as of late. I don\'t have a full chapter to post yet, but I\'ll show you the first half. It\'s not much but it\'ll have to do for now. :/ Enjoy.


Chapter 18.


Drip.

Drip?

Drip.

Where am I...?

Moogie opened her eyes. Her body felt numb. A white furry paw lay blocking her vision; her own. She moved it away slowly. The floor stretched out beyond her gaze... was it a floor? It shimmered somehow. Light patterns danced like liquid over the smooth surface. There was a small puddle of water a few feet away, almost unnoticeable. It\'s glistening skin was the only thing distinguishing it from the rest of the sea-blue stone. Another drip from somewhere high above plopped into the water, causing a tiny splash. The noise echoed a few times.

The... caves. I remember. But it felt like I was... moving?

Somehow these surroundings looked unfamiliar. Moogie could remember no water in the vast tunnels and caverns of the Stranger\'s lair. The air here felt heavy; she felt dizzy from the pressure, as if the room itself pressed down on her, dampening her strength and tensing her mind.

\"Get up.\" The voice was stern, and so close that it made Moogie jump with a start. She sat up and turned, slowly, to its speaker.

A mix of emotions crossed her face as she recognised the Xacha. He was a familiar sight, one which made her feel somehow protected. She felt suprised and relieved to see him alive, standing before her. But after what she had just witnessed, could she still trust him? And he looked different... strikingly so. His coat, once hanging straight and sturdy from his broad shoulders, was now in tatters, particularly towards the bottom and around his cuffs. His hair was dirty, and loose for the first time she had ever seen it. The white strands were just beyond shoulder length, straight, but in parts gently curled, particularly at the back. It was messy and stained with blood and dirt. The rest of his attire was also in a state of dishevelment, but the detail that shocked her the most was his face.

\"It\'s rude to stare, girl,\" came his deep voice, in a tone Moogie hadn\'t heard since she had first met the man, but she couldn\'t help it. The left side of his face had been marred considerably; presumably from when the cave roof had collapsed over his body. A thick, ugly scar ran vertically from his brow to the base of his cheek, passing right through the middle of his eye socket. The lids were closed, and the skin seemed sunken over the orb.

\"I said \'get UP\'!\" His other eye shone brightly as he grabbed her roughly by the arm and pulled her up onto her feet. Moogie instinctively retreated a few steps, fear and concern struggling for domination of her delicate features.

\"I... I saw you die. You were dead, and then... the cave, it...\" She could barely form a complete sentence. Her thoughts complained silently of blindness, clouded by a storm which fed and grew on each new question, each new twist in the truth. Camazotz calmly approached the feline, his cold eyes fixed on hers.

\"The Master is here. The Master needs you. You will go to him.\" He placed a hand on Moogie\'s shoulder, the leather material still barely intact enough to cover his skin in most places. Her expression lightened slightly.

Master? Did he somehow save us from the Strangers? Does that mean... I\'m safe now?

Her thoughts stopped abruptly- sharply interrupted by something thick and cold plunging through her stomach. The pain was fleeting; as the blade of his silver Sai buried itself up to the hilt in her flesh, a small trickle of blood escaped the corner of her lips. Somehow she managed to look down, her vision quickly blurring. His hand gripped the weapon firmly, pressing the metal against her bleeding dress. A red stain creeped through the material from the mortal wound.

With the last of her strength, she looked back into his undamaged eye. She no longer saw him there. It was empty, staring back at her with emotionless indifference. Her body went limp in his arms.

\"Fear not...\" the Xacha whispered, slowly lowering Moogie to the ground. \"In Death, you will bring him life... I will see you again shortly.\"


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« Reply #69 on: August 01, 2005, 12:19:57 am »
Wow, Moogie, I LOVE your story. I can\'t wait to read the rest of it!

EDIT: Hmm, I feel like I should say more.

GAH! Moogie DIED?! ... I never understood how people could kill off their main character, even if there is more to the story.

Still, awesome story, amazing description, nifty characters. ^_^
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Lilura: ralas and Jjairr  be all like "oh i was a xiosia worshiper before she existed" "rivnaks are too mainstream I ride a yulbar" "I was a nolthirir before they were green"

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« Reply #70 on: August 01, 2005, 07:08:55 pm »
8o ....  

well that was interesting, i still didnt get round to reading it and it all gets spoiled :/

i hate you Jjairr




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« Reply #71 on: August 01, 2005, 08:22:14 pm »
*is not talking to Moogie.*

Just kidding. Great start, but you can\'t leave us hanging like that! \'Tis not fair!

*goes back to not talking to Moogie while grumbling something about Kathy Bates*

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« Reply #72 on: August 02, 2005, 11:38:54 am »
What I just came back and Moogie kills her main character?  


Please tell me your going to bring her back!

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« Reply #73 on: August 02, 2005, 12:00:54 pm »
waaaa! moogie how could you!

so yeah i finnaly read it. definatley not my favourite chapter (not in a bad way that, mainly due to the events). im not sure what my favourite chapter is, maybe the one with Zabeal in it. the one at the winch that was my favourite.
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« Reply #74 on: August 02, 2005, 12:27:00 pm »
Dammit Moogs >.< i was about to do that in my story... well not stab you but... ah nevermind *throws notepad in the bin* stupid mmphflflmphngrn

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