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Arka's Return
« on: December 02, 2005, 08:58:03 pm »
Part One: Awakening

Arka woke to a cold, wet dawn. The tree she had crawled under last night offered no shelter from the rain. She was wet to the skin and cold to the bone. Worse still was the humiliation. She had travelled the whole stalactite over during her long life, and survived almost intact. She had encountered Rogues, thieves and vagabonds, but had always managed to defend herself. But last night?

And to happen within sight of the place of her youth, Hydlaa! She tried to move but her legs were stiff and painful. Rolling up the leg of her breeches she saw the bruises, blue and yellow, on her shins. Her ribs ached. She had taken a bad beating. She should have stayed in Akkaio, should have taken a room at the night in th? Broken Door. She had the money for it, but not now. She looked around. Her possessions were scattered around where the Robbers had left them. Clothes, books, trinkets, all trodden into the mud. She checked her satchel. Inside was the tight wad of papers, wrapped in Tefusang skin. She sighed. At least she still had that. All was not lost.

She painfully massaged her legs back to life. Nothing broken, except maybe a rib or two. The leather armour had helped, until they had taken it off her. Then the tall one had come back and kicked her in the ribs. That was when she blacked out.

She crawled about gathering together what was left. There was a shawl, big enough to use as a makeshift backpack. Some of her mother?s jewellery, her clothes, a pair of boots (obviously too small for the Robbers) a belt, and her precious package. That was all she had left in the world. The Great Axes that she had worked on so diligently as an apprentice, they were gone. She fought back a tear, remembering her father?s pride when she had shown them to him. He?d kept them all that time. All the years she had been wandering over the Stalactite....

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« Reply #1 on: December 02, 2005, 10:33:34 pm »
:D Sweet! I enjoyed this short but well writen story very much ..... is there more to come? Judging by the part one I am lead to believe so. I like your style of writing and it has inspired me......

/me claps and cheers!
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« Reply #2 on: December 03, 2005, 05:18:45 am »
Oh yes , very well writen story , i like how you use the present to make us know the past
The evil is like an iceberg.
The Dark Empire is the little floating part you can see, but below this, there is a huge part...

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« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2005, 06:59:03 pm »
Niiice. There better be more coming...

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« Reply #4 on: December 03, 2005, 07:51:02 pm »
Part Two: The Old Forge

She?d found the axes in the ruins of the Smithy, buried under the rubble. There was nothing left of the village. A few standing stones and mounds where the survivors had buried the dead. And no sign of her mother and father, just one large mound, now covered in grass, beside the ruined workshop. The tools had gone, looted, she had thought. The anvil was rusted beyond use. Nothing left, or so it seemed. She would sleep that night within the walls of her former home. It would be for the last time, she told herself. She spread out her bedroll on the ground and looked up at the darkening sky. Everything drew quiet; it was strangely peaceful.

She had planned to leave at first light, but woke from a vivid dream to find it still dark. The fire she had lit earlier was just smouldering ashes. Slowly the dream came back to her. Her mother. Standing in the doorway of her home, before? this had happened. She was pointing to the hatchway leading down to the storeroom. ?For you, Arka, for you,? she had said. Suddenly Arka was wide awake. The cellar! Of course! No one would have bothered to get in there.

She put some more twigs on the fire and brought it back to life. The flames cast dancing shadows across the ruins. There was barely enough light to see, but Arka set to, pulling away the stones with her bare hands. By the time the first glimmers of the crystal had started to lighten the sky, she had uncovered the hatchway, remarkably intact. She cleared the earth from around the edges with her dagger and took hold of the brass ring. With an enormous effort, she pulled the hatch open on its rusted hinges and peered inside. A wave of dank air met her face.

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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2005, 08:01:24 pm »
Is Arka  a dwarf?

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« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2005, 06:21:32 pm »
Part Three: The Oak chest

She lowered herself into the hole in the ground. As her eyes became used to the dark, she managed to make out a few dark shapes. The barrel in the corner, a few broken wooden boxes, and, in the centre of the room, the very thing she had hoped to find. A small oak chest, bound with brass strips. Eagerly, she lifted the chest out of the cellar and into the light. She pulled herself up and sat with her legs dangling into the hatchway, her chest heaving with the effort.

The chest was locked, but that was no problem. Arka reached inside her shirt and pulled the gold chain over her head. On its end was a small gold key, unused for so many years. The key turned easily in the lock and the clasps sprang open. Arka held her breath as she lifted the lid, hardly daring to hope.

In the first layer she found two leather bags. One contained money: not a fortune, but enough to live on comfortably for a while. The second was her mother?s jewellery. Her mother had simple tastes, and this was reflected in her choice of clothing and ornaments. Simple metal brooches, a plain gold ring and a few pendants with semi-precious stones. Arka handled each piece in awe; each one brought back its own memory. She wrapped them in the leather and thrust them deep into her bag.

Lifting the wooden tray that separated the layers in the chest, Arka gave a squeal of joy. Wedged in the bottom of the trunk were the two Great Axes she had made as an apprentice. She ran her finger along the edge of the first one she had lifted. Her father had kept them sharp! She picked up the second and balanced them, grasping the soft leather handles on the fine maple stocks. Above all, this felt like coming home. ?With these axes I shall avenge my parents? death.? She wiped her eyes with the sleeve of her shirt.

There was one more thing she needed to find. Putting down her precious axes, she returned to the chest. Pushed into the corner was the one thing she wanted most; a small parcel of Tefusang skin, tightly wrapped around a wad of parchment. She picked it up and pressed it to her heart. This was what the dream had been about. This was what her mother had wanted her to have! ?Thank you! Thank you both, mother and father. I will not let you down.?

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« Reply #7 on: December 04, 2005, 08:44:15 pm »
:D Once again I am left in suspense which to me is a sign of a good story teller. I look forward to more of this story and will keep checking back......
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« Reply #8 on: December 05, 2005, 06:47:55 pm »
Thanks for all your comments.

Yes, Arka is a dwarf.

Yes, there will be more posts (one a day if I can manage it)

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« Reply #9 on: December 05, 2005, 06:59:03 pm »
Ok, I assumed so. But you never stated and I didn\'t want to create a false image of Arka and then have it blown away later. I think it would be a good idea to mention this somehow in the next part.

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« Reply #10 on: December 05, 2005, 08:09:58 pm »
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Ok, I assumed so. But you never stated and I didn\'t want to create a false image of Arka and then have it blown away later. I think it would be a good idea to mention this somehow in the next part.


Good point.

Thanks, Stephen

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« Reply #11 on: December 05, 2005, 08:20:00 pm »
Part Four: Akkaio

The crystal was burning brightly as she made her way down into the valley. She had put the chest back into the cellar and covered the hatch with rubble once more. She might come back for it one day. Maybe, the village would be rebuilt and she could take over the Forge again. She shook her head sadly. ?Wishful thinking Arka,? she said to herself, aloud, ?Sentimental fool.?
 
In the distance she could make out the stalagmite with the tunnel that led to Akkaio. She hadn?t eaten for two days and was running short of water. In Akkaio she could get a bath and a meal. But she was eager to get back to Hydlaa. She hoped that whoever had been left in the village would have gone there. In any case, there were bound to be other Stonebreakers living there. She might find someone who could tell her what had happened.

Four hours later, she was in th? Broken Door, with a mug of Dverbarl in her hand, and a nice full feeling in her stomach. Brado had served the dwarf with the best Tefusang steak she had eaten in a long time. She had been entertaining a group of young enkies with tales of her exploits and didn?t realise it was getting dark.

?You?ll be wantin? a room Miss Arka,? said Brado.

Arka glanced at the window. ?No, that will be all right. I?ll be getting off to Hydlaa right now.?

Brado looked at her in earnest. ?That?s not a good idea,? he said, ?That road?s not safe at night, not these days.?

?Nonsense! I shall be there before dark. And anyway I have these to protect me.? Arka patted the axes that hung from her belt.

?I really think?? began Brado, but Arka downed her ale and was out of the door with a cheery wave. Brado shook his head. ?I suppose she?s old enough to take care of herself,? he sighed.

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« Reply #12 on: December 06, 2005, 10:06:45 pm »
Part Five: Homeward Bound

It was still light when Arka left Akkaio, but only just. It was still early in the year and the nights were cold. The wind was getting up and there was a touch of rain in the air. Arka pulled out a woollen shawl from her backpack and wrapped it over her shoulders, fastening it with one of her mother?s metal brooches. She stopped at the tunnel and looked at the road ahead. She could still hear the sound of singing from the tavern, and for a moment she thought about turning back.

She opened her bag again and took out her leather armour. It would slow her down, but if there were any beasts on the road, she would be protected. She slipped on the leather leg-pieces and body plate. The boots were looking a bit shabby, she thought, but with the money from the chest she could easily afford a new pair when she got to Hydlaa. Finally, she buckled on her arm protectors and wrapped the shawl around her once again. She checked around in the gathering gloom to make sure she hadn?t left anything and set off down the long road to Hydlaa.

In the open, the wind whistled mercilessly over the rocks and along the valley. It was in her face the whole way, slowing her down. It was as if the Gods were stopping her from making any progress, but she struggled on, even more determined to make it to the city. Her thoughts went back to the morning, and the oak chest. It almost seemed as if it was dream; she touched the axes hanging from her belt to make sure. She remembered the happy times she had spent working with her father at the forge. And then the day she had decided to leave the village.

She always knew she would be an explorer. Her parents knew as well, and they did not try to stop her, although they were so sad to see her go. She didn?t know then that would be the last time she saw them in this world.

Before she knew it, she had entered the forest. It was calmer here, out of the biting wind, but almost pitch black. She remembered that there was an old house in the woods, near the split in the road, but she thought it would be too late to disturb the inhabitants, so she took the right turn and set off on the last stretch before Hydlaa. How long since she had trodden this road? She had been young then, perhaps 40 or 50 years. That was over 90 years ago. Things would have changed in that time, that was sure. None of the Ylians she knew then would be alive, but there would be dwarfs, maybe even some from the village.

She was lost in thought as she turned the last bend in the road and emerged from the forest. Ahead she could see the lights of Hydlaa and her heart gave a leap. This was the beginning of a new chapter in her life. With her parent?s money, she could rent a good room at the tavern, maybe find a good blacksmith to work with, start up a weapon-foundry. She had been travelling too long; now she could at last afford to settle down. She could almost see the gates in the gloom; the road wound around a heap of rocks before opening out. Her pace quickened; almost there!

Then she saw a figure lying in her path. At first she told herself it was a bundle of rags, but it moved and she heard a soft groan. She knelt down beside the man and opened her bag. She had a potion that might help.

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« Reply #13 on: December 07, 2005, 11:21:34 pm »
Part Six: Ambush!

No sooner had she opened her bag than the man sprang up and grabbed her by the wrists. She instinctively head-butted him in the face, and heard his nose crack, with some satisfaction. But before she could stand, there was another on her back; blows rained down on her head. She rolled herself into a ball; there were at least three of them, and she needed help. She shouted as she fumbled for her dagger, but no-one came. Her fingers touched the dark iron hilt just too late as another, taller, man (if it was a man) hit her hard on the head. She stumbled, dazed, and the dagger fell to the ground.

?Oho! The little wasp has a sting!? The voice was harsh and deep. ?Let?s show her some manners, boys.? She felt her bag being torn off her and then the beating started. Blow after blow rained down on her. Her body plate took most of it but the leather only softened the blow. She could feel herself losing consciousness. ?I?m going to die,? she thought. This made her angrier. ?No!? she shouted, but her voice was small and weak. She tried to scramble into the rocks, but she was dragged back and kicked in the sides. ?All right, take it. Take it all!? she murmured.

Now she felt rough hands, pulling at the straps on the armour, dragging at her clothes. Her boots came off and she felt the belt being cut. ?NO! Leave me the axes!? she begged, but her plea was met with harsh laughter. ?Oooh the lady wants her pretty axes back!? said another man, this time in a high squeaky voice. ?I?ll have those,? said the tall one. By now, Arka?s eyes had closed from the bruising, but she recognised the men from their voices. ?I need to remember their voices,? she said to herself.

?Don?t even think about following us!? said the one with the deep voice, almost as if he?d read her mind. Then she felt the blow to her side as he connected with his boot. The pain seared through her body and her head swam.

She came to, to find that the rain had started in earnest. It was bitterly cold and she was utterly exhausted, too tired to call out, almost too tired to move. She dragged herself into the shelter of a small tree by the road before slipping back into unconsciousness. Before the darkness enveloped her once more she replayed the two voices she had heard in her mind. She would find the men. She would get her axes back. And she?d make them suffer for it.
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« Reply #14 on: December 08, 2005, 09:35:42 pm »
Part Seven: Hydlaa

So now here she was, a few remaining belongings, no money, no food, wet, cold and in pain. They had not even had the decency to leave her a potion to heal herself. Arka was angry. If this is what Hydlaa had come to? But she needed to get out of the cold. Looking around, she found a straight, slender length of wood that would support her weight. She hauled herself to her feet, leaning heavily on her makeshift staff. Painfully, she made her way to the city gates. Thankfully, it had stopped raining and mist was rising from the forest and blowing along the road. Far from the welcoming place it had seemed last night, the city appeared grey and austere. Dark towers appeared between the mist and swirls of smoke from the early morning fires.

After what seemed an age, she was at the gates. There was no sign of life in the city, just two guards at the gate. One was a man, the other female. Arka found herself staring. They let women in the city guard! Things had changed!

?What?s your business here?? said the woman officiously.

Arka licked her swollen lips, ?I?ve been attacked? need some help,? she muttered.

The woman looked at her distastefully. Arka was acutely aware of how ragged she looked. She?d spent the last year sleeping in the open and last night hadn?t helped her appearance. ?I just need to get cleaned up,? she said. For a moment, she thought she would be arrested as a vagrant, but she waved her through.

?Try Kada-El at the tavern,? she said.

Wearily, Arka made her way past the tower. At least that hadn?t changed, though many of the surrounding buildings were new. Kada-El? That was a new name to her. Old Grunwell would have died years ago, but she thought maybe his family would have taken on the Tavern. What was his son?s name? Garwin? Gronwin? It was so long ago. He was a good boy, she remembered. Helpful, and very able. He would have been about ten when she last saw him. No, he would be dead now too.

Getting down the steps was almost too painful to bear. There was a Klyros at the top and he had helped her down. She winced at every step.

?How did you get those injuries?? he asked.

Arka was in no mood for conversation, especially with a stranger. But this one seemed kind, especially for a Klyros. She would have to get used to this new Hydlaa, which had changed in both good and bad ways.

The stranger introduced himself as Ozbi. ?Take it easy,? he said, ?I understand it?s hard to talk.?

He took her to the foot of the steps that led to the Tavern. They were more worn than Arka remembered, but they were the same steps.

?I?ll be fine here, thanks,? she said. She waved him away.

?If you are sure?? began Ozbi.

?No, really, I?ll be fine,? said Arka, lying. She just wanted time to be on her own.

Ozbi bowed, ?I?ll keep an eye out for you,? he said.

?You are kind,? said Arka, ?but I?ll be fine.?

Ozbi disappeared towards the square. Arka looked around. Down here, the buildings were as she remembered. The huge statue stood in the centre of the plaza, with its six sides. At one end was a new building. Arka could just make out the top of the spire. It was rust coloured, as if made from raw iron. That must be the famous Laanx Temple. She had heard of it on her travels. The old stone building must have been demolished, as it stood on the same spot, over the well. She closed her eyes as a new wave of weariness swept over her.
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