Please stop making it sound like I've written pages of flaming posts saying how utterly moronic their history is.
It's not just this guild man. Nearly every guild that posts you rip them a new one. Nothing is good enough for you so you tear them apart. Piece by piece. You're like a bitter old man. You constantly hi-jack threads and spew your venom.
Please stop hurting people with your shallow judgements.
A lot of the people that play this game are english as a second language. They don't know that they have made a mistake. But you don't care. "Fire up the torch, this baby's gonna burn! I Phinehas, guild critic extraordinaire condemn you and your blasphemous post!"
You don't offer anything but pure nastiness. You could be nice and offer to help clean it up. Or maybe offer a point or two on how the history could be more unique. But no, you are above that. But you're not above the flame fest upon which you gain your nourishment it appears.
Example of constructive criticism:
"Hey nice idea! The XXXXX has been done before in Planeshift. Perhaps your guild could YYYYY..."
or
"Nice start. I did notice a few spelling errors though. '...the last for years we have...' should be 'the last four years...'"
And let's look at Mister Originality, shall we?
"They have been weighed, they have been measured, and they have been found wanting." hhhmmmm... I thinks maebee I's a beeen heard thas sum'werrs befor... A quote from a movie perhaps? Anyway, it's cliche to say the least.
Please, I grow tired of your inflamatory posts. Just stop! AND if you want to flame me, create a new thread, maybe Raedin Sucks! and post there, or do the right thing and PM me.
Raedin
P.S. Sorry Gondric for putting this in your post. I'd start a new one since this one is trashed.