(Yes its meant to be cartoony-ish because i cant draw realistic things worth a nickel.)
Well, the old Ylian and Hammerwielder do look cartoonish, but in a good way, now for the Enki, I reckon it looks great, and I don't reckon it looks too cartoonish.
Now for the part where you say "I cant draw realistic things worth a nickel", well, do they have to be worth a nickel? As you said before, you have never taken art lessons, so it is only by practicing and perfectioning that you can achieve really good realism. Also, anything on paper cannot be that realistic, as Picasso would say.