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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #45 on: October 29, 2007, 10:19:17 pm »
Part 15 The Queen

Erelenga soon arrived at the High Royal House of Purrty. He knocked at the door and was let in by Melinya, the housekeeper.

“Mr. Erelenga! You’ve come at a difficult time, to be sure. The lady what was staying here. You know, the dwarven lady you brought here. Well. She’s only gone and disappeared! Her majesty’s in a right state I can tell you.”

“That’s why I’ve come; you see…”

But Melinya was now in full flood, “And that Xathia has gone and fallen out with the physick again. You see, she went and gave the dwarf some special potion without asking him. She said it was to wake her up, what with her being asleep for so long. But he’s worried in case it was too strong. He thinks she might collapse again, but Xathia says…”

“Please, Melinya! I have an important letter for her majesty from Arka.. err.. the dwarven lady herself. I need to give it to her.”

“Well! Why didn’t you say so? Standing here keeping me talking, when you have a letter for the Queen. What were you thinking of?”

Erelnega rolled his eyes and sighed as Melinya bustled him up the stairs. She knocked and opened the door. Lolitra looked up from a letter she was writing.

“Melinya?”

“There’s that young Mr. Erelenga to see you, your majesty,” said the housekeeper, bobbing a curtsey.

“Well show Mr. Ere.. Mr. Karal in, Melinya.”

Erelenga entered the room and bowed to the Queen. “Your majesty, I bring a letter from Arka Garam.”

He handed the sealed letter to her.

Lolitra smiled. “Sit down Erelenga, while I read it. You are not in a hurry?”

Erelenga briefly thought of the pile of papers waiting for him at the university, but shook his head. “Of course not, your majesty.”

Lolitra read the letter with a worried expression. “Oh dear,” she said “I am so worried about poor Arka. I fear she may have put herself at some considerable risk. And I do feel I am partly to blame.”

“I am sure she knows what she is doing, your majesty,” began Erelenga.

“Well that’s just it. Xathia, my herbalist tells me she has given her a most powerful mixture of potions, in an attempt to bring her out of the coma. Apparantly it worked. But we cannot be sure the effect was more than temporary. When it wears off, she may lapse back into unconsciousness. Have you any idea where she may have gone?”

“None. She must have left before I arrived at the university. Her cloak and walking boots were missing from the hallway.”

“Then she must intend to travel. I have sent some of my people to ask after her. Hopefully we will have news before long.”

“Is there anything I can do?”

“No, Erelenga. Your duty is to the university. If I hear anything I will send word with Sir Gag.”

“If you are sure…?”

Lolitra nodded. Erelenga rose to his feet, bowed and backed out of the room. He almost collided with Melinya, who had been clearly listening at the door.

“Oooh look at the dust here,” she said, suddenly running her finger along the balustrade. “Wait until I see the maid. She will get a real piece of my mind. Good meeting?”

Erelenga smiled at the pretence. “Very good thank you. But I must be getting back to the university.”

“Are you sure you wouldn’t like a warm drink and a piece of cake? You do look a little peaky.”

Erelenga recognised the ploy. “That’s very kind of you, but I have a lot of business to attend to.” He nodded to Melinya and made his way downstairs.
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #46 on: October 30, 2007, 02:21:38 am »
My Friend Arka,

I am so worried for you. Your writing is so real that it truly makes me think it is happening and it is not just a story . That is a sign of a great writer and you are that. Keep it coming. I cannot wait to read what will happen next.

Best Wishes,

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #47 on: October 30, 2007, 08:04:31 am »
Excellent!! :sorcerer:
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #48 on: October 31, 2007, 08:07:43 am »
Part 16. A mystery solved

Sarine made her way to the Faculty of Stalactite Studies and knocked at the door of the Dean’s Office, quietly at first, but more boldly when there was no reply. Eventually, to make sure, she pushed the door open and peered inside. The room was empty.

“Ah well,” she said to herself, “I shall have to come back later.”

Her eye was drawn to a large tome on the Dean’s desk. Embossed on the cover in gold letters were the words, ‘Directory of Students’. Feeling more than a little nervous, she walked up to the desk and turned the pages of the book. The students were listed by subject.

She turned to the section labelled ‘Languages and Culture’. Halfway down the second page was a heading ‘Stonebreaker’. Sarine gave a little gasp. The first name on the list was Einnol Feldorm! She had surely found her ‘Ei’.

She gave the rest of the section a brief glance, just in case there were any other names beginning with ‘Ei’, but Einnol’s was the only one. She took a piece of paper from the desk top and dipped a quill into the inkwell. In her best handwriting she copied the name, returned the pen, folded the paper and put it into her pocket. Now she just had to find him.

••••

Arka had reached her planned resting point in good time, although she felt much more tired than she had imagined she would. She had settled herself into a hollow, just off the path, and promptly fell asleep.

She was woken suddenly by the sound of a twig snapping close by. She pressed herself deeper into the ground and held her breath. Although barely perceptible, she could make out the sound of light footsteps passing by. Was she being followed? She had not seen anyone on the road. Eventually, the footsteps faded into the distance, and she could breathe easily again.

If she was being followed, she knew that whoever it was would double back as soon as it became clear her tracks had disappeared. She decided to continue her journey across country. It would be slower, but safer. She re-packed her knapsack and set off, taking care to cover her tracks as she went. After a decent distance, she struck out again. It was harder going over the rough ground, and her bags weighed her down, but she gritted her teeth and pressed on. This way there would be a few steep climbs, but it would be better than being found and taken back to Hydlaa. There was a small lake further along this way, where she could stop for something to eat. But for now she just needed to keep going.

••••

Lolitra had got word back that Arka had left Hydlaa by the North Gate and had immediately dispatched two of her most able rangers, Parryen and Ffallma, to track her. The two Menkis had set off at a brisk run. They picked up her trail easily and quickly reached the point where she had stopped.

The first, a dark coloured older Enkiduki, left the road a few yards, then knelt down. “See here,” he said, “the undergrowth has been flattened here. It looks like she was hiding.”

“It’s a good place to hide. Completely invisible from the road,” agreed his companion, a younger enkiduki, with pure white fur, “But someone seems to have found this spot before us.” He pointed to a smaller print in the mud. “An elf. Dermorian, possibly. And there is something odd about these prints.” He pointed to a trail of small indentations in the ground.

Parryen stood up and walked across to take a closer look. “Looks like he’s limping.”

The white menki nodded. “I saw some marks like that on the road. Let’s go take another look.”

The two made their way back onto the pathway, taking care not to obscure the footprints they had found.

“Here,” said Ffallma, “These are the same. It looks like he went straight past then doubled back. See? They go in both directions.”

Parryen had to agree. “So he was tracking her? When he lost her tracks he came back here and found where she had been hiding, just as we did.” He looked thoughtful. “But then what? There is no more sign of the dwarf, but he heads out across country.”

“We could follow his tracks,” suggested Ffallma.

“The Queen said we were to track the dwarf. From here, she could have gone in any direction. She’s made a good job of covering her traces. If we couldn’t find her, I don’t suppose this dermorian could. He missed where she turned off the road for a start. It’s unlikely that he’s picked up on her tracks again, unless he knew where she was going.”

“Then why would he track her?”

“Exactly. Let’s go back – I think we should tell the Queen what we know and let her decide.”

The two menkis headed back to Hydlaa, satisfied that they could make no further progress.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #49 on: October 31, 2007, 01:21:16 pm »
AAAAH! :o Arka! Look behind you!! Noooo!  :'(

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #50 on: November 02, 2007, 08:19:52 am »
Part 17: Curiosity

Sarine had finished baking for the day. There were 6 trays of pies cooling on the racks and a delicious aroma of meat and piecrust filled the air. She opened the windows, partly to help the pies cool, but mainly because it was good for trade. People passing were drawn into her shop by the smell.

Sarine was waiting for the shop to close, so she could find her friend and fellow sudent, Aerianna, and ask her about Einnol. Time went so slowly, even though she had many customers. Eventually, it was noon and time to stop for lunch. She called the boys inside from their play and set out the table. She took Joana aside while Valiki and Declan were washing their hands.

“Joana, I want you to be good for me and give your brothers their lunch. There’s a good meat pie left with plenty for all of you. I need to go on an errand. If I am not back by teatime, make some sandwiches – there is some cheese in the pantry.”

Joana nodded, and Sarine pulled on her shawl and stepped out into the street.

She knew she would find Aerianna by the Blacksmith’s in the plaza. Sarine didn’t like that part of town. Harnquist was a bit gruff and she’d heard he was rather too fond of the ale. But the other students seemed to use his shop as a meeting place.

Sure enough, Aerianna was there, along with Rell Farrigan and Andoryn Thaakor, a trainee mage. Sarine was always a bit wary of Andoryn, who liked to show off her magical skills. That sort of thing was downright scary.

She waved to Aerianna, who walked across the Plaza to meet her.

“Sarine! Are you coming to join us?”

“Not today, Aerianna. I have such a lot to do. I wondered if you could help me though.”

“If I can I will,” Aerianna replied, with a smile.

Sarine gave her the piece of paper with Einnol’s name.

“I need to find this person,” she began, “I… err… have an order for him but I’ve lost his address.”

“I can do better than that. He’s working here at the forge.”

Sarine blushed. How was she going to get Einnol away from the other students? She was beginning to regret having told Aerianna a lie.

She followed Aerianna to the forge, where a middle-aged Stonebreaker was pouring molten metal into a mould. Great clouds of foul-smelling steam rose up as the hissing metal cooled in its casting. Sarine wrinkled her nose. She was glad she was a baker and not a smith.

“Einnol, there is someone to see you,” began Aerianna.

The dwarf put down the crucible and wiped the sweat off his brow with the back of his glove, leaving a black smudge.

“Dovoy’. It is Sarine, is it not? How is business?”

“Sarine recognised him as one of her customers, and was relieved.”

“Mr. Feldorm,” she said nervously, “I… err I need to talk with you privately.”

Aerianna’s ears pricked up.

“Of course,” said Einnol, pulling off his gloves, “But ye can call me Einnol. Let us go over to the fountain. You can talk to me on the way.

They set of across the plaza together, while Aerianna hurried back to Andoryn and Rell.

“Well?” asked Andoryn.

“It didn’t sound like an order for pies.” Said Aerianna, “She was awfully nervous. I wonder if she has designs on him.”

“Don’t be ridiculous. Einnol is happily married.”

“Yes, but she doesn’t know that. Or maybe she does.”

Andoryn’s eyes widened and Aerianna giggled.

“Look,” said Andoryn, “They are heading for the university now.”

“Or her house,” said Aerianna.

Rell rolled his eyes. “You two have more imagination than sense.”

“He called her by her first name, Rell. He’s one of her customers. And Sarine is an attractive woman, err… for a dwarf.”

“Don’t let Arka ever hear you talking like that.” Rell’s voice was stern. “And if I were you I wouldn’t go spreading rumours about Einnol. He is highly respected.”

Andoryn smiled at Rell. “Don’t worry, it’s only a bit of fun. But I would like to know what they are up to. Let’s follow them.”

“No.” said Rell, but Aerianna and Andoryn were already halfway down the steps.

He decided he should follow, if only to keep an eye on the two women.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #51 on: November 03, 2007, 05:50:52 pm »
Part 18: More clues

Sarine welcomed Einnol into her home, a little self-consciously. If she had known that her fellow students had witnessed this, she would have been mortified. She had shown him the letter in the plaza, and he immediately asked about the scrap of paper. Sarine suggested that Arka had probably forgotten it, but Einnol had insisted on coming to her house to search for it. She was a bit taken aback by this, but had agreed.

Andoryn and Aerianna were intrigued. Sarine had taken Einnol straight to her home.

“What’s going on, d’ye think?” asked Andoryn.

Aerianna shrugged.

“I saw her show him something at the forge. Looked like a letter.”

“Who would write to Sarine? And what has it to do with Einnol?” asked Aerianna.

“Well, whatever it is, it isn’t our business,” said Rell, shifting uncomfortably.

“Oh come on, Rell, aren’t you the least bit curious?” Andoryn mocked him.

“Well I’m staying until they come out,” said Aerianna, “I want to know what’s going on.” She looked at Rell. “Look, I’m not saying there is anything going on – I just think it’s strange.”

Rell frowned.

“It’s like you say, Rell, Einnol is happily married – I honestly don’t think… Let’s just see what happens,” she continued.

“Well you two girls can stay if you want. I’m going to the library.”

Rell turned to go, but Andoryn took his hand. “I’ll come too,” she said, “but I am curious too. Aerianna, if you are staying, come and tell us what happens.”

Rell rolled his eyes but said nothing.

“Of course I will. You two run along.”

Aerianna watch the two head off towards the University. She was a bit disappointed that Andoryn wouldn’t stay, but understood. She looked around for a comfortable place to sit, where she wouldn’t be seen. She was genuinely interested in what Einnol was doing with Sarine. He hardly knew her. And it wasn’t like Sarine to invite a stranger into her home. What was in that letter? And why had Einnol hurried off with hardly a word? He’d even left his iron stock in the castings. She settled down and waited…

*****

The boys were playing a noisy game of tag as Sarine opened the door, but soon quietened when they saw Einnol. Declan and Joana ran off to their room, but Valiki stayed in the hallway.

“Hello,” he said, “I’m Valiki”

“And I am Einnol,” said Einnol, smiling.

“Eiwas”

“I’m sorry?” Einnol looked puzzled.

“Eiwas. Your name starts with ‘Eiwas’.”

“So it does,” said Einnol, surprised. “And your name begins with ‘Wunjo.”

Valiki beamed. “See, mummy?” He looked at Einnol. “Did Aunty Arka teach you that?”

Einnol chuckled, “Aye, she did! That and a whole lot more.”

Sarine stroked her son’s hair. “Mr. Feldorm and I have some business to discuss. You run along and keep an eye on Declan.”

Valiki nodded and ran off.

“He is a good boy,” said Einnol.

“He is,” agreed Sarine, “and very curious. Both the twins are interested in everything these days. You should see the things they collect.”

“I was very much the same at his age,” said Einnol.

Sarine opened the door to the kitchen. “We can talk in here,” she said, gesturing towards the table.

Einnol took a seat. “Let me see that letter again.”

Sarine took out the parchment and spread it on the table. Einnol looked at it closely.

“’Tis very good parchment,” he said at length, “Why would Arka use this just for a letter?”

Sarine shrugged.

“I noticed she used the word ‘legacy’,” she said, “that frightened me. I thought she meant she was going to die at first.”

Einnol frowned. “So she might as well use up her best parchment,” he thought, although he said nothing.

Sarine jumped up. “I’ll just go check on the boys.” She left Einnol re-reading the letter.

A few moments later Einnol became aware that someone was watching him intently. He looked up to see a pair of sharp eyes peering from beneath an untidy fringe.

Valiki looked at him expectantly. “Mr. Einnol, what does Aunty Arka say in her letter?”

Einnol smiled. “She has a job for me to do. Trouble is, I don’t know where to start.”

“Doesn’t she tell you?”

“Not exactly. She has left me with a kind of puzzle.”

“I like puzzles. Tell me what it says.”

Einnol looked at the young dwarf. How wonderful to be that curious! He could see no harm sharing some of the letter with him.

“Well, it seems Aunty Arka wanted me to have a piece of paper. But your mother couldn’t find it. ‘Twas supposed to be in the letter.”

Valiki’s eyes widened. “My brother’s got a piece of paper.”

“Yes,” replied Einnol kindly, ”but ‘tis a special piece of paper I need. Not just any piece of paper.”

“Is it from an old book?”

Einnol’s mouth dropped open. He was remembering a time, a long time ago when Arka had given him a small piece of paper. It was a time he had tried to forget.

“I’ll get it,” said Valiki, before Einnol could speak, and ran off towards his room.

Einnol’s mind raced. “He will know where to look…” If this was the same piece of paper, then… But how could Valiki’s brother have it? Maybe it dropped out of the letter, maybe Sarine hadn’t noticed. The book had been destroyed, so how could the scrap of paper have survived?

Sarine broke his train of thought. “Can I get you a drink, Mr Feldorm? I’m afraid I’ve no ale, but I have some very good apple juice.”

Einnol smiled but shook his head.

“This piece of paper…”

“It’s like I said, Arka probably forgot it. There was no piece of paper in the letter.”

“Could it have fallen out?”

“I looked everywhere. It wasn’t on the floor”

“Could it have fallen somewhere unseen?”

“Not in the hallway. There was nowhere it could have done.”

“I wonder…” said Einnol, thoughtfully.

Just then Valiki came skipping into the room, with a small box under his arm.

“Valiki! Not now, dear,” said his mother kindly, but firmly, ”Mr. Feldorm and I need to talk.”

“But… I want to show him something.”

“Later, dear…” began Sarine, but Einnol held up a hand. “I think this might be important.”

He looked at Valiki. “D’ye have it?”

Valiki looked nervously at his mother and nodded. He opened the box and took out the scrap of paper his brother had found earlier. He held it out, and Einnol took it, his hand trembling. He stared at the paper in disbelief.

“What is it?” asked Sarine, alarmed at the sudden change in him.

When Einnol managed to speak, his voice seemed smaller and somehow far away. “’Tis a long story, Sarine, a very long story. And one I would rather not tell again, if ye don’t mind.”
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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #52 on: November 03, 2007, 06:08:52 pm »
I sit with cup in hand and read these with a verve that is captivating - you are wonderful Arka.
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« Reply #53 on: November 03, 2007, 10:44:16 pm »
Arka,

I second what Lolitra said. Simply riveting. I cannot wait for more. You are a great writer!

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« Reply #54 on: November 06, 2007, 09:30:49 am »
Part 19: The Library

Aerianna had almost given up when Sarine’s front door opened. She jumped up and hid in the shadow of a doorway as Sarine and Einnol emerged from the house. They hurried off towards the university, with Aerianna following at a safe distance. She felt a little awkward, but her curiosity was overwhelming.

“Where are we going?” asked Sarine.

“The Library”

“But isn’t it the other way?”

“Nay,” said Einnol, “not Jayose’s Library. The University Library. The Library of Magicks and Potions.”

“But that’s locked. We won’t be able to get in there.”

This stopped Einnol in his tracks. He’d forgotten that Arka had arranged for the Library to be sealed with a strong spell after that night.

“Would ye know anyone who has access?”

“Only Andoryn. She is studying Magick,” replied Sarine, “but she won’t let anyone in. It’s against the rules.”

“We shall have to tell her.”

“No! Arka said we mustn’t show anyone the letter.”

“She did not say anything about not reading it out,” said Einnol, his eyes twinkling.

Sarine pondered this. It didn’t seem right, but she couldn’t argue with him.

They arrived at the University Library as Rell and Andoryn were leaving. Andoryn needed very little persuasion to open the door for them, and without Einnol having to share Arka’s letter with her, much to Sarine’s amazement.

Einnol walked to the far end of the long room, lost in memory. This was the second time he had been here. The last time was in dead of night. Then, he had known what he was looking for. This time, he was less certain. Light streamed through high stained glass windows, making pools of coloured light on the book stacks and floor.

Aerianna arrived, red-faced and out of breath. Andoryn signalled her to be quiet. Einnol had told her that Arka had asked him to retrieve something from the library, although he wouldn’t tell her what it was. She was watching him closely and didn’t want to miss anything.

Einnol looked at the rows of leather bound books in dismay. Where was he supposed to look? “He will know…” said the letter. How could Arka be so certain?

He went to the shelf from which he had taken the book, so long ago. He was surprised that he remembered it. He ran his eyes along the shelf and soon found the space where a missing volume once had sat. He felt a pang of guilt. Because of him, the Library had lost a valuable book. He was told he had torn out a page. The thought of it left him feeling deeply ashamed. And now Arka had destroyed the book. What was it she had said about the missing page? Something about the other side?

He shook his head. No good dwelling on the past. He had to think about what Arka had sent him to find. He stood on tip toe and reached into the empty space between the books. At first he could find nothing, but then a stubby finger brushed against a hard, cold object. He slid it out towards the edge of the shelf, dropping it into his upturned palm.

It was a small, silver key, well crafted, but unadorned. He’d never seen it before. What would it open? He was suddenly aware of the small crowd at the library door. He should keep quiet about this, he decided. He made a little pretence of searching, pulling out odd books and peering behind the shelves, before making his way back.

“Well?” asked Andoryn.

“I did not find anything,” he lied, hoping she wouldn’t notice, “but I thank ye for helping me.”

“My pleasure,” said Andoryn, smiling, “if you need to get back in, just ask.”

“Garamdor,” replied Einnol, “I think I should be going now. This place is a bit creepy.”

Andoryn smiled, “That’s the energy stored in the books,” she said. “It creates a field around the library. It can make your hair stand on end.”

Einnol grunted. He wanted nothing more to do with magic. He’d tried it once and look where that got him… No, he would not be returning to this library again.

He and Sarine walked quickly back towards her house, leaving the others looking confused.

“What was that about?” asked Aerianna.

“Search me,” said Andoryn, “but I do know something. Whatever Einnol might have said, he definitely found something up there.”

Aerianna’s eyes widened. “So why did he lie to us?”

“I don’t know. It’s not like Einnol to lie. There is something going on, Aerianna. We have to find out what it’s about.”

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #55 on: November 06, 2007, 10:13:59 am »
* Under the moon chuckles and grins.

The smallest of things can sometimes create the greatest of problems.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #56 on: November 07, 2007, 08:52:05 am »
* Under the moon chuckles and grins.

The smallest of things can sometimes create the greatest of problems.

If if it's the small thing I'm thinking of, then you have read the story well!

(Actually there are no end of small things creating all sorts of problems for me writing this!)

* Arka sharpens a new pen and starts on the next set of revisions

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« Reply #57 on: November 07, 2007, 11:05:47 am »
Ah! Damn my compulsion to read old discussions on the Knowledge Seeker forums. I went and spoilt part of the story!

Can't wait till the next chapter  ;)
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« Reply #58 on: November 07, 2007, 11:14:23 pm »
Part 20: The dermorian

Lolitra had waited all morning for her rangers to return. Since she had seen Erelenga she had become more and more concerned about Arka’s safety. Another of her men had seen a stranger leave the University earlier, a dermorian, with a pronounced limp. He’d followed him across the plaza but lost him in a crowd by the steps. He couldn’t be sure if he had been heading towards the tavern or the tower.

That could wait. The main concern right now was Arka. Lolitra was deeply concerned about the physick’s report. He had said that without attention, Arka could die. She felt totally powerless and it frustrated her.

A gentle knock sounded at the door, and Melinya ushered the two menkis inside. They bowed deeply.

“What news?” asked the queen.

Parryen straightened up and began, “We tracked her through the forest, your majesty, but then her footprints disappeared. We think she was being followed.”

“Followed?” Lolitra’s brow furled.

Ffallma joined in, “A dermorian, your majesty. With a limp.”

“A limp, you say? How do you know?”

“The shape of the footprints were quite distinctive. He definitely had a limp.”

“He?”

Ffallma looked at his companion quizzically, “We assumed so...”

 Parryen smiled. He had thought Ffallma had spotted the signs, but evidently he had not. He intervened, before Ffalma could embarrass himself. “It is more than likely that this was a male, your majesty.”

“Really?” Lolitra raised an eyebrow. “Do tell me how.”

“There were a number of signs, your majesty.  Normally we would be able to tell by the weight of the tread. But this is not so easy with dermorians. Both the male and female tread lightly.”

Lolitra nodded, and did not fail to notice that Ffallma was hanging on Parryen’s every word.

“Two things were apparent. Firstly, the stride is slightly longer; even with a limp, this was noticeable. More importantly is the alignment. The male’s narrower hips mean that the footprints are closer to the centre line. It’s a subtle distinction, but important. Difficult to spot, but Ffallma did well.”

Ffallma looked surprised for a brief moment then realised what Parryen was thinking. So did Lolitra, but she said nothing. She was impressed. Not just with Parryen’s skill, but also his generosity. But if Parryen was right….

Lolitra’s eyes narrowed. A dermorian with a limp. This was too much to be a coincidence. He must have set out just after he left the university this morning. And there was a connection with Arka, an old story she had heard. But that dermorian had been killed, either executed or in an accident. She searched her memory for a name, but none came.

“You have done well,” Lolitra smiled, “But I have one further task for you.”

“Your majesty?”

“You will take me to the point you lost her. I want to see it for myself.”

“The trail will be cold now.”

Lolitra looked at the ranger and he lowered his eyes. “Of course, your majesty.”

Lolitra donned her cape and boots and the three set off across Hydlaa towards the northern gates.

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Re: Arka's Return 3: The Reckoning
« Reply #59 on: November 08, 2007, 01:55:01 pm »
Arka,

I really feel totally part of this story. I love how you bring me in and make me feel like I am there. I now understand how describing the setting is so important and you do it so well. I must say I do not want you to die.

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