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The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« on: November 25, 2007, 08:41:33 pm »
Long, long ago, while the world was still newborn, a seemingly sacred Isle made of mountains, desert, forest, plains, and swamp reached high unto the clouds. Laanx, seeing the beauty, set up a Lunar Temple in the woods, before she and Talad pierced the depths of the Stone Labyrinths. Dangerous creatures were drawn some hundred years after, however before this happened a people rose up. The Nolthrir. The entire time praying, a few miles east of the Temple they migrated into a deep Valley. The words inscribed (put there by Laanx herself)

Whomever has found these sacred words, behold. I have created land for you; fertile, bountiful land full of hopes and promises...


The Nolthrir tribes soon, under these words which they held sacred, came together. Year after year, they created their town of what they soon named "L'Olath", eventually creating the Castle, with one of its many towers taller than (and leaning against) the mountain itself. All was well. Crops and healthy animals allowed them to be self-sustaining enough for them not to depend on trade. Until the Ylians came. Guided by a man whose last name was "Etearna", the Ylians soon dominated the Nolthrirs. A fierce war would have ensued, if Talad had not decided to step between them. His holy words to them both were these:

We are all those of the earth here, are we not? Did myself and Laanx not spring you from our eternal womb into creation?

Seeing, through Talad, that they were mistaken, the Ylian commander, Unyua Etearna and the Nolthrir tribes [OOC NOTE: There were no documents found on the history of the names or habits of the Nolthrir, only these events] created a treaty. Blessed by Talad, the Eternal Treaty was made; as long as the Etearna family ruled L'Olath, Nolthrir would be free to roam as they wish in and out of the sacred caverns of the, now named, Etearna Castle. In return, the Etearna family and ruling would have to uphold the Ten Sacred Laws of the Nolthrir. If broken, the Nolthrir would instinctively attack the kingdom of L'Olath, rule it once more, and bring the Ylian dominian to an end.

The agreement was made, after several failed negotiations. Now, hundreds of years later, numerous ports have been set up around the Valley, allowing travelers to come freely back and forth to and from L'Olath.

The Western side of the Isle has many towns, as well, with their own ports. Jagz, a town made entirely out of shaped tree roots, made by vast numbers of mages and is a magic-dominant town; about as large (though not as tall) as L'Olath. Chath, a town mainly used for technology, has huge problems with poverty. 76% of the population is in utter poverty, and the Noble minority has built an actual, physical wall, blocking the Noble district from the slums.

Port Drakkan, a vastly important trade center, is on the south side of the isle, against the Draconian Gulf. Lake Sound, a lake/town set within the center of the isle, is a popular destination for those who wish for beautiful scenery set in rolling hills in the border of the Great Forest.

[OOC: And voila. I want other people's thoughts and contributions, so don't be afraid to post! :D]
« Last Edit: November 25, 2007, 10:59:18 pm by meelee10 »

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2007, 09:04:19 pm »
[well just by reading the first part I got to say this: I commend you on your writing and creativeness, but be careful, it sounds like you're getting into dev stuff. And none of this can necessarily be official, only at most a rumor. But oocly you can't say these places exist as they haven't been approved by the devs ;) ]

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2007, 09:30:32 pm »
This belongs in the Storywriting forum. :)
As for the roleplay-ability of it... well, it clashes with pretty much everything in the history that is publicly known. I would advise against trying to use it ingame.

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #3 on: November 25, 2007, 10:56:29 pm »
[What I'm thinking is that Laanx and Talad didn't go so far out of their way to focus on this kingdom that events would have changed. Laanx just liked the way the lunar energy focused on that certain isle. Talad just prevented a major civil war. This isle is important, but the gods didn't take much notice of it.

If this would be approved, it would certainly add to the game, unless the devs have a sort of map or something. To me, personally (THIS IS ONLY MY OPINION!) it doesn't seem like they've got the geography and the in-between events quite figured out. I mean, the events between Talad and Laanx took a couple of hundred years at LEAST. It seems likely they would have done something during those times where they had nothing better to do. >.> Every God has those. XD

Also, I'm leaving room for other players to submit their ideas.]

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #4 on: November 25, 2007, 11:01:50 pm »
How did the Ylians and Noltrir reach the isle?
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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #5 on: November 25, 2007, 11:04:57 pm »
It was one of the places that the Nolthrir were created.

The Ylian, lots and lots of years afterwards, came by boats, once they had the resources.

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #6 on: November 25, 2007, 11:28:30 pm »
So where is this place located? Yliakum? Kadaikos?
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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2007, 12:12:48 am »
I was thinking Yliakum.

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #8 on: November 26, 2007, 12:40:44 am »
So it's an isle on one of the lower submersed levels of Yliakum? Then why is the temple called "The Lunar Temple", as Yliakum has no moon?
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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #9 on: November 26, 2007, 02:19:52 am »
Nice. Definitely not something that should be rped as though it was real. If you said that in game people are likely to look at you the same way they might if you proclaimed it as true in rl :P
I suggest the statue of Laanx gets turned into a statue of Parallo <3. An NPC could never replace the huge hole he left in my heart when he died  :'(

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2007, 04:54:36 am »
So it's an isle on one of the lower submersed levels of Yliakum? Then why is the temple called "The Lunar Temple", as Yliakum has no moon?

I apologize; the Isle is on the Surface of the World, sticking out of the Ocean. I'm still confused as to what Yliakum actually IS, and I've never heard or seen on this site the word Kadaikos. I know, I'm a newbie.

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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2007, 07:49:46 am »
You will find it in here. http://www.planeshift.it/history.html [Kadaikos

Alone with a lot of other stuff.
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Re: The Kingdom of L'Olath...
« Reply #12 on: December 06, 2007, 02:14:46 am »
What surprises me was that a person who was able to write that didn't see the need to read the settings through thoroughly beforehand...