A quest for a goddess

[Roadwolf]

As his conciousness came back he realized that he no longer hurt,and his wounds were gone.
Were am i?he asked himself.
Somewere that u never been before,was the answer from a beatyfull female voice.
He turned and he was almost blinded by the light and the beaty of the goddess.
Why i am here?he asked keeping his low.
I need someone worthy to do something for me.
I have judged that u might be the one i need,and thats
why i have helped u.
I am indepted to u goddess,the warrior said.
Tell me what u need to be done,and it shall be done.
The goddess approached him,and looked down on him.


OK thats for now,if liked this or find it interesting just tell me.

Roadwolf

[Moogie]

Interesting.... so far.

Rather short though... ?( If you want proper opinions, you\'ll need to write at least the first chapter of your story/tale. As it is, there\'s hardly anything to comment on.

[Roadwolf]

It is a basic idea for a quest,it came since i am writer by hobby.

At least i would like to hear more opinions from more.

[Dexlan]

Looking for us to say pretty please!
If you write for a hobby then you should say pretty please read my story!
Ok I would like to read your story, but there was not much effort there.
There have been lots of posts so far by people who have never dared write something down, never mind share them with the internet! but in the spirit of PS and the people they share this forum with, they layed it on the line, SO get on with it!
If you think i\'m hard on you, you  can point out the fact that i haven\'t done one yet myself!
So  ok lets have more.....

[Roadwolf]

As he disapeared in a flash another figure show up behind the goddess.
It looks that u are very kind with me dear,said an old but very similar man with the warrior.
U know that i have to done this for both of us,the goddess said.
I know, Gorthas said.
But the shield u gave me then was the source of our problems.
Corelia turned at him.
Yes it was,but also was a strong weapon and companion dont u agree?
The old man smiled.
Yes it was a very good friend.
The young warrior have find himself watching from a hill the preparations of 2 armies for battle.
But the one thing that make his blood freeze it was the small village in the middle of the upcoming battlefield.
Damn! Gorthas said.
Not now,not in the middle of a battlefield he whined.
Then start running,said the shield at his back.
Before he could ansher to that his saw that the battle was about to begin.
He started running as fast as he could.
RUN RUN RUN U MUST REACH THE VILLAGE,a strong voice in his mind.

i will continue every time i can this little(maybe)story.

[Roadwolf]

BTW u r not hard.
One that judges those that read his work without judging himself first is an ignorant fool.

[Roadwolf]

When he reached the village the battle was on for good.
The arrows were falling like swarms.
:I need some cover shield!!!He yelled.
:Whatever ,the shield anshered and started to fly around him.
He charged at the middle of the village.
Soldiers were battling with fury and  hate for the opponent.
A group of them saw him and turned at him.
:I am not an enemy he yelled.
:Lier yelled one soldier.
:ATTACK was the cry of another.
They charged at him with pikes and swords.
But in surprise their weapons were stoped by the shield.
:Wizardry they started to say,and began to take steps backwards.
:well thank u shield,Gorthas said.
:Well then if u dont mind i have a name,the shield anshered in a rather angry tone.
:And what that might be?Gorthas asked.
:My name is Rethos and i would not mind a polish after this,said while covering him by the next wave of arrows.
:I thing thats fair enough,he said.
He looked around.
:Now were could she be?he wondered.
A cry was heard from a small wooden house that was on fire.
He entered the burning house,in front of him the bodys of a man and a woman.
Bellow the bed was a little girl crying.
He turned down and said.
:Come out Cordy,i must get u out of here.
The seiling was on fire and burning pieces of wood started to fall.
:NO!!!the girl said and keep weeping.
:Thats why i hate children,Gorthas said while turning the bed and grabbing the girl.
:NOOO!!!LET ME GO!!LET ME GO!!the girl screamed.
:I am sorry but i cant leave u here after i was sent to save u,Gorthas said while exiting the house.
Rethos was outside observing the battle and few scarred soldiers who at the look of the flying shield were mutering something.
:RETHOS!!!gorthas yelled at the shield.
:Alright alright u dont need to yell at me every time u need something,Rethos got close to him.
:Lets leave,rethos said and started to cover them.
Gorthas started to run to the direction he came with the girl in his arms.
From the top of the hils the a general observed him.
:Who is he?questioned one of the inferior officers.
:I dont know!the officer said.
:But one of soldiers reported that he had with him a flying shield for his prottection.
:Gather all the soldiers that have seen him and report to me!the general said.
:Yes Sir!!!

[Dexlan]

Great to see you have posted more I haven\'t finished reading it all yet!
Is this the name of a character you use in the game Gorthas i mean?
Or do you go by roadwolf in the game? any way i can see there\'s  lot\'s of action in this but did i miss the bit where Gorthas got the magic shield Rethos?
Any way good story and nice quote by the way!

Oh and I\'ve started one myself so you can tell me what you think it\'s call Family lost, but i don\'t have any real action in it yet just getting to the main character first real quest!  keep up the good work!

[Roadwolf]

The part is in the beggining of the story.
Gorthas is a name that i randomly choose.
In game i use the name corelia,my roadwolf char fell of the edge of the world hehe and /spawn didnt get him back.

[Roadwolf]

4 days have passed since the day that Gorthas saved the little girl by the name Cordy.
On those days while traveling to east to they got to know each other.

:Were are we going Gorthas?cordy asked.
:The one who told me to save have tell to me that after i save u.to travel 2 moons to the east.
:And what is our destination?cordy asked again.
:That neither i know,Gorthas said.
:Its getting dark gorthas,rethos said.
:Aye i thing we should camp,gorthas anshered.
It was the beggining of the night and gorthas gathered some wood for the fire.
Later while eating gorthas asked cordy.
:Hey cordy do u possess anything spesial or u can cast magic?
:No i dont,but why do u ask?cordy said.
:Its actually nothing,Gorthas said while thinking that is weird for a god to send someone to save a child.
A common child,but on the other hand who is he to judge a god for his actions.
Then he heard something behind the trees.
Something like the a sword hitting a tree.
:Rethos cover me,gorthas said.
:Now what?rethos said in surprise.
Gorthas charged at the bushes while rethos was behind him.
But the only thing he find was an iron helmet.
:A diversion said the voice in his mind,but for what reason?
The heard cordy screaming.
As he russhed back he saw one black dreesed soldier riding a horse grabing cordy and running away.
:That was a cheap trick bastard,agrrrr when i get u on my hands u l be real sorry Gorthas growled.
:No shit rethos mumbled.
:What have u said?gorthas turned at rethos.
:Nothing nothing,but i believe we should move.Rethos anshered.
:Alright i dont know who this guy was,but i have an idea for whats going on.

And together started to go towards the direction the kidnapper go.

[Roadwolf]

Meanwhile at the city of Tarth general Lund accept at his office one inferior officer.
A knock on the door.

Lund:enter
Soldier:hail general Lund
Lund:What is your report Geld?
Geld:As i was ordered i followed the warrior but i was unable to steal the shield,the soldier said.
Lund:WHAT?and u dare came back?
Geld:But general i have something that will bring the warrior here.
Lund:And what is that i might ask?
Geld:The girl that the warrior take with him during the battle near the Karashi vilage 6 days ago.
Lund:hmmmmm that will lure him here and might give us the shield without needing to kill him.
Geld:The girl is now held by Gith.
Lund:Gith?what is doing the sorcerer with your hostage?
Geld:I dont know,as i came from the gates he stopped me and told to leave him take a look at the girl.
Geld:After a while he told me that he will have the girl in case that we will need her,and i am no fool to oppose him.
Lund:Allright then,u are dissmised and here is 100 gold talons for your work.
Geld:Thank u general,geld said while leaving the generals office.

The next day in the morning Gorthas and Rethos was scouting the city of tarth by a near by hill.

[Roadwolf]

Gorthas:Alright we have everything and now this,a city full with an army.
Rethos:ah come on gorthas dont tell me that u afraid?
Gorthas:If i had a hammer now i will surelly was gonna make u beer mugs,gorthas growled.
Rethos:come on,u cant destroy your precious friend and make beer mugs rethos said.
Gorthas:we l see about that the next time u throw a line like the last one.
Rethos:ok ok mister touchy.
Gorthas:AGRRRRRRRRRRRRR.
Rethos flyed away.
Rethos:ok ok relax.
Gorthas:Now hear me rethos,i am gonna go straight at the gates and enter the city.
Rethos:And how r you gonna do that without identified?
Gorthas:Simple,you are not comming with me.
Rethos:And what i am suposed to do if anything happens to u?
Gorthas:We l see about it right now.

After a while gorthas was stopped at the gates of the city,and while the guards had theyr attention on gorthas rethos flyed behind them and enter the city.

[Roadwolf]

Ok dont yell for any grammar mistakes ,i am greek and usually my free time to write is about at 4:00 in the morning.

Thanks for spending time to read this.

[Dexlan]

Your English is fine by me!
Keep it flowing! )

[Roadwolf]

Gorthas as he entered the city had in mind that he had no weapon.
Gorthas:Now were could that blacksmith be?
After a while he find it .
Gorthas:Good morning blaksmith.
Blacksmith:Aye and to u warrior,my name is Grag.
Gorthas:glad to meet u grag.
Grag:So what do u want gorthas?
Gorthas:I want a weapon.
Grag:What kind of weapon?a sword?
Gorthas:No,something like that it can smash an armor like that,gorthas said while observing a passing patrol.
Grag:Hmmmm so u r thinking to mess with them,grag said in a low voice.
Gorthas:I didnt say anything like that.
Grag:Then u need a maul.
Gorthas:Yes i think it will do.
Grag:Ok wait a little.
Grag gone to the back of the store,and after a while he came with a beutyfully crafted maul.
Gorthas:It is beutyfull,how much?
Grag:Wait i am not finished yet.
Grag got out of the blaksmith and yelled.
Grag:TAAAAAARIIIOUSSSSS
After that he came in.
Grag:Wait a bit.
Gorthas:For what?
Then with a puff and a lot of smoke a male elf apeared beside gorthas.
Tarious:Now what grag?u almost have heard to the next town.
Grag:I need an enchatment for a weapon of mine.
Tarious:Those cost grag.
Grag:And u own me one, remember the time at the tavern?
Tarious:Allright then what do u need?
Grag:I want tremble and to be hard to be destroyed,grag said.
Tarious:oh old man,that it will be hard for me but i will do it.
Tarious started a chant while touching the maul,the weapon started to glow in red and a rune started to form.
Gorthas:What the....?
Grag:sssh boy.
The chant had stopped and the maul stopped to glow,but at the side was a rune.
Tarious:Now the second one.
Tarius started to chant again but this time rythmicaly with the word tremble at the end of each turn and hiting his feet in the floor.
With each tremble word gorthas started to feel a vibration from the floor.
After a while the vibration had became strong and ended with a very strong gap that throwed many things in the blaksmith down.
Grag:Allright gorthas it is ready.
Gorthas took the maul in his hands,a fine piece of craftmanship with a differend rune in each side.
Gorthas:What do i own u?
Grag:Just some broken heads and ribs grag said with a meaning.
Grag:And if u come in a ditch,hit the maul in ground with all your strength while saying the word tremble.
Gorthas:I guess that i will put in good use.
Grag:Aye do that boy,i have some soldiers that are not good customers.
Gorthas:Have a nice day,gorthas said while leaving.
Tarious and grag whatced him leave.
Tarious:Grag i guess that everyone is gonna hear of him soon.
Grag:hehehe as long as it comes with some broken heads,is fine by me.

After a while Geld got out of the tavern full of joy from the singing and the beer.
Then he noticed a golden claw in fron of him.
He turned down to get it,but he got a boot in the face sending him in a near alley.


To be continued