Well, I read everything, and as Kwartz said somewhere in the first few pages of this thread, the crystals were all achieved way too fast (wich made it pretty obvious that the story won\'t be very long), sep gone way too powerful, and Yliakum is swarming with undead (wich in some of the posts magically turn into skeletons without a prior notice). Since sep is both uber-powerful and have 4/6 of the crystals, it\'s pretty obvious that in a page or two, he\'ll get all of them, turn into a god, and... That\'s it, the story is over, in a pretty uninspiring way.
Or, we could have something in the form of a deus ex machina. Scatter the crystals, fight off the undead (\\skeletons), and try to be a bit more organized, or atleast not cause anything too drastic (like having all the crystals taken by the end of the second page, and turn Yliakum into an undead mess hall :rolleyes: ).
I think, maybe sep should go so fanatic about this whole crystals thing, summon more and more power out of them, and go lunatic (Kwartz said that when the power is summoned by someone, he gets crazy). He\'ll do stuff, wich will eventually leave him without crystals. Auran will give Monketh a task, and lend him his crystal. Monketh will lose it somehow (maybe he\'ll walk in the forest, bump his head in some branch, lose his backpack, and get amnesia... yep, sounds like Monketh
). I guess Kramy could keep it, since he\'s playing a naive char, and since it\'s kinda fused into him.
I\'m not trying to come over and take over your story guys, just trying to see if it can be steered to a better and more interesting path.
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Now, no matter wich way is chosen, I wanna have a few points about Krans and my char:
Krans aren\'t stupid, dumb, unintelligent, or whatever.
I can see how this:
The page about Krans
Psychology
They are not one of most intelligent races of Yliakum, but they tend to be loyal and firm in their beliefs.
Was understood as this:
Not what the page about Krans means
Psychology
They are the most unintelligent race of Yliakum, but they tend to be loyal and firm in their beliefs.
But it\'s still wrong.
They may not be one of the most intelligent ones, but it sure doesn\'t mean they\'re anything close to being stupid.
So although Kramy had in a few of his posts stuff that talk about the way \'Krans think\', and made them a stupid race, I don\'t think that this way should be kept.
My char won\'t be stupid, but won\'t be uber-smart, or speaks in riddles, or something. It\'ll be normal.
Just a note so no one will expect anything else.
Enough ranting, I\'ll go think of a way to start my char in this mess :]
