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Quitaa
« on: May 05, 2006, 02:32:31 am »


Shalmaneser entered the gates of Hydlaa with the enki woman close at his side.  After they passed through the gates together, the woman’s eyes widened as she took in the city for the first time in years.

“Does it look very familiar to you?” Shal asked.

“Yes… yes, I know this place!  But much has changed.”

They walked along the stone path until the statue of Talad came into view.  Shalmaneser told her to seek the Vespers near the temple if she needed further help.  She thanked him for all he had done for her, and they parted ways in the crowd.

“Cheater.”

The stranger’s voice emanated from behind Shal’s back.  He turned.

Honourless cheater.”

The speaker was another female enki, but younger, and clad entirely in fresh leather armour from head to toe.  He didn’t recognize her face, but something in her tone was eerily familiar.  He recognized an insignia woven into her breast covering:  Dwarvesbane.

“I know your guild mate Drahlian, fenki, but I’m afraid I do not know your name nor the source of your displeasure.”

“I am Quitaa, and you are a cheater.  Drahlian has told me about you… that you use potions in combat!  You fight without honour!”

Shalmaneser was taken aback by Quitaa’s unprovoked rudeness, but he then remembered a time when he protected a party of dwarves from Drahlian.  He used light green potions to avoid having to kill the dwarf-hater, and Drahlian never forgave him for it.  He glared at Quitaa. "I will do whatever is necessary to protect my friends.  Such battles are about survival."

Stone faced, Quitaa ignored him and turned her head towards the large crowd that occupied the plaza.  “I don’t think that Shalmaneser would win a single fight without potions!”

Though her tone was so strikingly familiar, Shal took even more notice of being spoken of in the third person.  She was not talking to him, no - she was talking to the crowd.  Her taunts were for their ears as much as they were for Shalmaneser’s.  He heard a snicker.  This was a trick.  This was a trap, and Quitaa’s clasp on the hilt of her dagger was tight.

“Quitaa, it is?  Hiding behind false names and false accusations... you talk with the tongue of a coward.  But did I hear you right?  You wish to duel as a test of honour?”

“Sure.”

“By the fountain then?  Someone is likely to be hurt if we stay in this crowded place.”

The two walked separately down the stone steps to the floor of the plaza and stopped near the feet of Talad’s likeness.  Shalmaneser stared up at the crystal staff held by the stone giant.  Even though his faith lay with Laanx, he was still able to appreciate the symbol for what it represented to so many:  Faith, strength, forgiveness, and honour.  Remembering where he was and why he was there, his attention returned to his physical reality.  The Dwarvesbane enki that had showed him such a wicked tongue had moved and was now standing far from him near the other side of the plaza.  His senses went into overdrive; he noticed the smell of food and ale in the air from a nearby tournament, there was the clanging of Harnquist as he tended his craft and the bellow of his furnace, and there was the scent of musk and incense from Laanx’s temple and her worshippers.  And he saw his enemy, her mouth moving as she looked back at him from afar, and there was a burning pain in his shoulder.  He was hit by an arrow.

Shalmaneser ran at his enemy full force as he realized that his time was running out.  It seemed that arrow after arrow came at him.  The short dash was a lifetime as different parts of his body exploded with fiery pain from Quitaa’s magic.

The two met.  Mid-spell, Quitaa dashed at Shalmaneser even as he ran towards her.  The two sliced air with their blades and moved past one another.  On the verge of collapse from the toll of the arrows, Shal looked at his blades.  One was bloodied.  ‘Yes!’ he thought to himself. ‘At least that trickster will not get away without some pain to remember me by!’  He was pulled back into the moment as yet another arrow struck him, this one near his temple.  Looking up through the haze of his injuries, he saw Quitaa’s figure even as she spoke yet another incantation through a twisted smile.  Shal saw blackness, there was a warm trickle down his back, and his face rested on the stone floor of the plaza.

As Quitaa walked up to him, Shal’s thoughts were simple and fading. ‘Mongrel cheater… to use magic… in such a duel?’

“You know,” Quitaa said as she loomed over Shalmaneser’s dieing body, “You should spend the time to learn some magic.”  She snickered.  “Should you find a way to make my energy arrow more powerful, I would be glad to hear it.”

As Quitaa's figure faded to black, Shalmaneser waited to awake in the death realm.  Even though he was killed, he felt at peace with what had happened.  It was a duel to test honour, after all.
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Re: Quitaa
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2006, 10:53:11 am »


As Quitaa walked up to him, Shal’s thoughts were simple and fading. ‘Mongrel cheater… to use magic… in such a duel?’


What's wrong with magic in duel? I don't think that magic ins't fair in a duel. It takes long to cast a spell and can put you in a bad position in a fight. Using potion in a duel isn't fair,the instantaneous effect isn't logical when you think IC. how can be used a potion while fighting with the hands occupied by weapons. Potions are for me a BIG BUG in this game til it heals immediately a wound.

[edit] : Oops sorry, I forgot, very well written story though
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Re: Quitaa
« Reply #2 on: May 05, 2006, 02:24:46 pm »
The story isn't bad, have to say I didn't really expect you to let yourself die in it. One thing was extremely confusing to me though and that is "the statue of Talad" you keep mentioning. I'd take a good close look next time you're around Hydlaa plaza if I were you ... that statue doesn't look like Talad at all, if you ask me. :P
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« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2006, 06:44:42 pm »
I don't think using magic in a duel is cheating, and I also don't think using potions in combat is cheating. If you were dualwielding swords it would be unrealistic to use potions, but what if you're carrying one sword? Then it wouldn't be unrealistic to quickly grab a potion and heal yourself. And magic, well, energy arrows weren't invented to heal someone you know...

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« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2006, 07:37:45 pm »
Drahlian's reply needed its own thread, thus it has been created. Her story can be found here.
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« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2006, 07:41:19 pm »
i think using 4 potions within 1 second is unrealistic no matter how many swords you don't wield.Sayin that magic in duels are cheating is just the bad loosers excuse imho
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Re: Quitaa
« Reply #6 on: May 05, 2006, 07:42:18 pm »
What's wrong with magic in duel? I don't think that magic ins't fair in a duel. It takes long to cast a spell and can put you in a bad position in a fight.

No, because the spell can be aborted at any time.  By using arrow spell, you force the other person to advance.


Using potion in a duel isn't fair,the instantaneous effect isn't logical when you think IC.

No one used any potions.


how can be used a potion while fighting with the hands occupied by weapons. Potions are for me a BIG BUG in this game til it heals immediately a wound.

No one used any potions.


[edit] : Oops sorry, I forgot, very well written story though

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The story isn't bad, have to say I didn't really expect you to let yourself die in it. One thing was extremely confusing to me though and that is "the statue of Talad" you keep mentioning. I'd take a good close look next time you're around Hydlaa plaza if I were you ... that statue doesn't look like Talad at all, if you ask me. :P


Hmm?  I've always thought that the fountain was a statue of Talad.  I'll have to check next time I get in game.  I guess my character made a mistake.:)  Besides, the Gods in PS can take on whatever form they like.  When I "met" Laanx, she looked like a fenki.



i think using 4 potions within 1 second is unrealistic no matter how many swords you don't wield.Sayin that magic in duels are cheating is just the bad loosers excuse imho
I don't think using magic in a duel is cheating, and I also don't think using potions in combat is cheating. If you were dualwielding swords it would be unrealistic to use potions, but what if you're carrying one sword? Then it wouldn't be unrealistic to quickly grab a potion and heal yourself. And magic, well, energy arrows weren't invented to heal someone you know...

Try to think of it IC, and what my character was expecting from the duel.  Think about why the duel was happening, what its RP purpose was, and what the rules were and what all of that might suggest.  Maybe it was a false impression, that's a legitimate assessment, but there are more overtones to it than just "It wasn't cheating and you're just bitter".
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Re: Quitaa
« Reply #7 on: May 05, 2006, 07:49:20 pm »
Well okay it could be a statue of Talad taking on the form of Laanx but where is the logic in that ...

@ThomPhoenix: In that case I'd say this story belongs in the in-game roleplaying events forums, not here. I liked this as a story but I'm starting to dislike this as a means of badmouthing eachother's characters outside of the game. ::)
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« Reply #8 on: May 05, 2006, 07:54:13 pm »
Well okay it could be a statue of Talad taking on the form of Laanx but where is the logic in that ...


:P Didn't I say in my other response that my character probably made a mistake?  I'll take your word for it that it's more than probably.
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« Reply #9 on: May 05, 2006, 08:06:46 pm »
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Using potion in a duel isn't fair,the instantaneous effect isn't logical when you think IC.

No one used any potions.

Shalmaneser, how do you explain that your health increased from about 60 to 80% while fighting?
Maybe Quittaa casted the wrong spell and shot a life infusion arrow on you. :P

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« Reply #10 on: May 05, 2006, 08:10:12 pm »
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Try to think of it IC, and what my character was expecting from the duel.  Think about why the duel was happening, what its RP purpose was, and what the rules were and what all of that might suggest.  Maybe it was a false impression, that's a legitimate assessment, but there are more overtones to it than just "It wasn't cheating and you're just bitter".
I was there, so I know exactly what happened. Quitaa accused you of cheating in duels because you used potions, and the she "cheated" by using magic. But! Nothing was agreed upon, there were no rules made. You just started to fight, no one said "no magic".

I do understand why you feel she cheated, but at the same time I don't think she cheated myself.
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« Reply #11 on: May 05, 2006, 08:23:47 pm »
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Try to think of it IC, and what my character was expecting from the duel.  Think about why the duel was happening, what its RP purpose was, and what the rules were and what all of that might suggest.  Maybe it was a false impression, that's a legitimate assessment, but there are more overtones to it than just "It wasn't cheating and you're just bitter".
I was there, so I know exactly what happened. Quitaa accused you of cheating in duels because you used potions, and the she "cheated" by using magic. But! Nothing was agreed upon, there were no rules made. You just started to fight, no one said "no magic".

I do understand why you feel she cheated, but at the same time I don't think she cheated myself.


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« Reply #12 on: May 05, 2006, 09:13:02 pm »
zanzibar, this is REALLY funny...

Guys, I didn't bother to read any replies, but whatever has or hasn't been said, I'll give you the truth. Before Proglin's tournament, Shal and Quittaa were arguing (her name is spelled with two t's, Shal), and they went to the statue of LAANX, and had a duel. She kept using magic when he got far enough, then she killed him. Then he went all the way from the Death Realm to the arena, and started calling HER a cheater. So now he's made a story about it, explaining his own point of view, which really is a load of lies. He wanted to duel, he lost, he complained.

Now, zanzibar, please stop whining over losing a duel and get on playing. You win some and lose some, simple as that.

EDIT: Just read the replies, and no one mentioned what really happened. Trust me, I was there.
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« Reply #13 on: May 05, 2006, 09:33:52 pm »
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If you don't understand despite everything I've already said, then there's no way to make you.
No, you don't understand me. I do understand why from you point of view, RP reasons, etc, etc you think she cheated, but from my RP point of view, etc, etc I think she didn't cheat. Suno is pretty much right, it went like this:
- I bet Shalamaneser wouldn't win a fight without using potions
- Challenge? Let's duel at the fountain.
- <insert fighting here>
Shalmaneser was killed by Quittaa.

Later at the tournament:

Quittaa!! Where is the CHEATER!
She used magic!

(my thoughts: where during all this was there agreed no one would use magic......there wasn't)

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Re: Quitaa
« Reply #14 on: May 05, 2006, 09:48:01 pm »
Quick question: Thom, are you Quittaa?