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sstoykaa

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #45 on: January 25, 2007, 08:37:27 pm »
i read them

just when i reply, i dont scroll down and read everything again..... call me what yhou want, usually i do this when i get off work and im a little... twisted. but like i said before give it a chance before you knock it.... its only fair

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #46 on: January 25, 2007, 08:41:10 pm »
That doesn't change the fact that you didn't answer the questions! Could you not at least do that? We'll knock if it doesn't meet standards and thusfar your beheaviour in this thread does not meet those standards. As was said before this forum is for getting opinions and such opinions cannot be fully made without someone answering questions. If you don't want to answer them, do not post.
I suggest the statue of Laanx gets turned into a statue of Parallo <3. An NPC could never replace the huge hole he left in my heart when he died  :'(

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« Reply #47 on: January 25, 2007, 09:03:00 pm »
Here is my final opinion about this:

Any possibility of this turning into a large Roleplay involving an attempt of the Outlaws of delving into politics(corruption) is almost fully broken when Narure openly announced his "selfless" support to it. A pity as it could lead to interesting outcomes if properly applied.

This is a constructive but harsh criticism, not only towards this one, but also indirectly to the Outlaws, as I am pretty sure this "guild" was supposed to be part of a plan from them:

The Outlaws are excessively public on their plots to have a chance of reaching the infamous status of  these ones in real world history. Narure openly declaring his support to this "Law Enforcement Agency" blew it up almost completely before it could work as a political platform to have a criminal lobby in the Yliakum government. Most forget that in Real World most criminal organizations like for example the medieval Garduna were secret, their members never identified themselves and all shady supports that those organizations gave to other apparently legitimate groups were in secrecy and behind the scenes. Although the Outlaws classify themselves as *cough* "Chaotic Evil", it doesn't necessarily means they must avoid becoming a more organized criminal group.

In my opinion, IC-wise this guild dug its own grave even before being founded because of that.

Of course sstoykaa, if you dismiss Narure from it(Honestly or a fake "dismissal") it may still have a chance of recovering its reputation and being respectable after all. Also you must expect criticism when you post any idea about guilds, organizations and such, specially in a roleplay based game like Planeshift, and it is important to know how to use these criticisms to improve your own idea instead of trying to defend continually its original and raw state as if it was perfect.

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #48 on: January 25, 2007, 09:18:33 pm »
 :thumbup: well as far as politicks go, you have that bit right, never yet known one answer a strait question.
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sstoykaa

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #49 on: January 25, 2007, 11:24:30 pm »
fine i'll get you answers on the forums, tomorrow after work i'll go thru each post and detail an answer. hopefully after that you all can begin to give it a chance.

*update rp*

Stoyka, tired of the constant slack he is given for Narure being in HLE. he decides, threw the peoples wishes, to remove narure.

He sends message for Narure to meet infront of harns. The two start speaking quietly. It quickly escalates. Narure starts to shout at Stoyka. Telling him the guild was his, it would be nothing without him. Stoyka shouted back in shear reaction to this side he had never seen.

Stoyka grabs at narures guild badge and rips it off, shoving it in his pouch.  Narure darts behind Donari, holding a dagger to her throat. Stoyka feels he has a strong enough case to arrest the ex-outlaw, hold him in the hands of the citizens. Donari closes her  eyes and chants a spell. A flame spire glyph twirls around her forcing narure to let go and stand alone.

The crowd dashes around moving clear of the magic. As the onlookeres settle in and outward ring, two figures remain in the center. Epyrion on standing, sword drawn, and an enkidukai staggering around.
« Last Edit: January 26, 2007, 12:00:50 am by sstoykaa »

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #50 on: January 25, 2007, 11:39:56 pm »
Narure drops his daggers and clutches at the gushing wound. The crowd circles wildly turning into nothing but a sensless blur. He splutters and drops to his knees. He opens his mouth and takes a huge gulp of air, his face contorts with pain "bugger" he splurts out as his body crashes to the ground. His nose twiches. He awakens in the darkness.

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #51 on: January 26, 2007, 01:07:50 am »
Nice Story writing.
There is no right or wrong.... only Trias.

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #52 on: January 31, 2007, 05:10:30 pm »
"Bugger" he splurts out as his body crashes to the ground.

Watch the language.
I suggest the statue of Laanx gets turned into a statue of Parallo <3. An NPC could never replace the huge hole he left in my heart when he died  :'(

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #53 on: February 01, 2007, 08:59:13 am »
Hahaha, I love you, Parallo :P

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #54 on: February 01, 2007, 10:46:15 pm »
Pfft gimme a break, who am i insulting? Am i deforming anyones mind?

Is the Hydlaa law enforcement going strong? I've not seen any around for a while. I hope it didnt go down the drain.

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #55 on: February 01, 2007, 11:06:43 pm »
Hahaha, I love you, Parallo :P

Another quote for the books along with the masses of "Parallo's right"s.

I suggest the statue of Laanx gets turned into a statue of Parallo <3. An NPC could never replace the huge hole he left in my heart when he died  :'(

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Re: Hydlaa Law enforcement
« Reply #56 on: February 02, 2007, 01:43:14 am »
Hahaha, I love you, Parallo :P

Another quote for the books along with the masses of "Parallo's right"s.



Minitrue approves ref, "bugger" oldeng word, leads crimethink, doubleplusungood

Parallo crimethinker, ungood. Only Big Bro's right, and the Octs and Vigs of the party*cough* Yliakgov

Minitrue'll fix Narure's ref. Miniluv'll fix him.

Hydlaalawenf copying Doublethink, docrime Narure enforcing law.

Ungood, Miniluv must fix Hydlaalawenf
Thinkpol check if Narure really is gone from it, possible still hidmember.
Outlaws doubleplusungood ref Lawenf possible work against Big Bro and Yliakgov
Big Bro hard to keep stability, no telescreens in Yliakum, Inner
party*cough*circle Octs n' Outer part*cough* circle Vigs investigate fullwise