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Malkari - Corruption of the Innocent
« on: September 23, 2007, 01:55:05 am »
Mitaki, a brave warrior who had fought many battles, was found one day fighting an Ulbernaut outside of a village of Enkidukai. There was a woman picking herbs in the area, who had just looked over to see the fierce battle. She looked in horror, thinking that Mitaki would be killed and their village would be destroyed, but after a few minutes, the fight was over. Mitaki had slain the creature. She dropped the herbs and began to run toward him, saying nothing and falling into his arms in a hug. The villagers ran toward the slain Ulbernaut and began to cheer as Mitaki held her in his arms trying to comfort her and tell her that she was safe now. The villagers held a feast that same night to celebrate Mitaki's victory over the creature that had been terrorizing their village. The woman that Mitaki had seen earlier picking herbs, walked up to him as he was polishing his sword.

"Thanks for earlier...I don't know what I would've done if that creature had found me before you got here," she said, "I was out trying to find an herb to cure my friend's illness, and..." she gets a startled look on her face. "I FORGOT! I left the herbs back outside the village!"

"Can you use any of these?" Mitaki reaches into his sack and pulls out a pile of herbs.

"Yes! Those are the ones! But wait, when did you..."

"I collect them. Ever since an incident in Hydlaa, I've held on to many different herbs so that I may help those that need them. These aren't the ones you were picking, just ones that I've kept with me for a long time"

"Can you come with me please? There's not much time left, my friend is about to..."

Mitaki and the girl rush to her friend's home. When they get there, a sick girl is lying in bed, rolling around and coughing.

"Raskah, I have the herbs you need! Hang in there!"

She grinds up the herbs into a potion, and has the sick girl drink it. She stops coughing and falls asleep a few seconds later.

"She just needs to rest now..." The girl hugs Mitaki, "Thank you, I don't know what I would've done if it wasn't for you..."

"I'm glad she's feeling better, I don't want to see anyone else suffer..."

"Hey, I never got your name..."

"It's Mitaki...Mitaki Naru."

"I'm Rabalah..." She kisses Mitaki on the cheek. "Will you stay with us? We don't have anyone like you to protect us...the villagers and I adore you..."

"I wish I could, but...when I make friends, I can never take the pain of losing them...and if anything ever happened to me, I don't want you to suffer because of it."

"You're strong...you can protect everyone, and I know nothing could ever happen to you...you were able to slay an Ulbernaut, there's no way anything could happen. If something happens, I'm ready to take the risk...I want to be with you."

After many monthes, the two have a child and name him Malkari. The villagers decorated the young Enkidukai's fur with special symbols that meant "courage" and "wisdom" in their customs, and was said to bless the child with the courage of his father. But there was a mistake made when the symbol was decorated. It was aligned upside-down, and the meaning changed from "courage" to "age." In a year's time, the child had undergone a magic that would completely change his life. Instead of getting the courage of his father, he had grown to the age of his father, and had been blessed with the wisdom of his father as well. But, the age, was not a blessing, instead it was a curse. He awakened, and looked around, seeing straw and cement-covered walls all around him. He layed back down and tried to think, memories suddenly pouring into his head. When the wisdom symbol was decorated onto him, they forgot to remove the "memory" fragment from it.

They had never done this ritual with a child, only when people want to change themselves, or have amnesia and need to borrow the memories of someone close to them. Malkari began to see images of Mitaki's adventures in Hydlaa, experiencing both his satisfaction of battle, and the pain of losing those close to him. The memory of the pain from scars on his flesh began to enter his head, and the pain was so real that they began to form scars on his own body. He screamed in pain, as the memories continued to pour into his head. He had left Hydlaa and met his wife. The pain continued as Mitaki suffered from losing her, and the village began to blame him for her death, as he had not been there to protect her like he had promised...or had been forced to promise. The memories stopped when the image of a gallows appeared in his head.

A woman runs into the room after hearing the scream, slams open the door, and sees the now-grown Malkari bleeding on the straw bedding from the fresh scars carved into his body from the memories. In an instant, she realizes what must have happened and rushes out of the room to get some herbs. She places an incense in the room to put him to sleep as she applies the herbs to his wounds. In a few days, Malkari wakes up, and sees the girl sitting beside him rubbing something on one of his scars, feeling a stinging sensation. He says nothing and looks at her face, trying to recognize her. After a few minutes, the name "Raskah" comes to mind.

"Raskah...is that you?"

"So I was right...you were not blessed, you were cursed...the villagers did not want to admit what they did to you...Yes, I'm Raskah."

Since the last moment Mitaki had seen Raskah, he was handing her something, the memory blurry because of it being close to the time the image of the gallows appears in his head.

"The villagers banished me here for speaking out against them when they drew these symbols on you...I inspected them and found so many flaws, but they were foolish and did not want to admit they'd made any mistakes. After all, you're the son of Mitaki, the person who they used to believe was their savior..." Raskah begins to cry.

"My...father...?" Malkari begins to draw back the memories of his father and his pain. The wounds open back up and bleed through the bandages, and he begins to shiver in pain.

"Hold on, don't think! Just relax...I'll be right back!" Raskah runs out of the room, wiping the tears from her eyes and grabs her last remaining herbs, comes back in and unties the bandages and reapplies them to his wounds. She ties the cloth back around his wounds after the herbs are applied, and Malkari's pain disappears except for the sting of the herbs.

"You are not Mitaki, you are his son. The villagers branded you with hasted symbols. They meant to bless you, so that you would be like your father, but instead they ruined you...you do not have his courage or his wisdom, only his pain and suffering...You must relax, force the images out of your head. Try to think of the good, if there is any to be had...I did not know the man well myself, but he did save me and this village, so in doing that he has to have some calming memories."

"I...don't understand anything you're saying..." Malkari tries to move, but collapses back down to the bedding in pain. "If I'm not him, then...why do I remember his friends? Why do I remember them calling me Mitaki? Why do they -"

"Those are your father's memories. Like I said before, our village practices customs that would make us...different, from the other Enkidukai in Yliakum. We are more in tune with magic, and have created rituals that give us enhanced strength, knowledge, power..." Raskah wipes the remaining tears from her eyes. "You see, when you were born, you were branded with the symbols of Courage and Wisdom. Courage was drawn the wrong way to mean 'Age' which is why you are how you are. As for Wisdom, they have never done this mark on a newborn, and they forgot to remove the 'Memory' rune from it when they drew it on you, which is why you are having all of these painful memories. Mitaki had a lot of scars on his body, I'm guessing from previous battles he's fought, and as those memories were freshly created in your mind, your body began to feel the pain from those scars and opened wounds in your flesh. If you stay here I can heal them, but...your life has been shortened. You have no past except for that of a baby, which you by now have probably forgotten. If you can, try to remember Mitaki's visions of you..."

"I still don't understand, but...alright, I'll try." Malkari closes his eyes and tries to remember.

Mitaki walks up to the baby as he is being held in his mother's arms. He pats him on the head, and kisses Rabalah on the cheek as he walks outside to help a farmer in the village.

Malkari opens his eyes.

"That baby...is me...?" Malkari asks as he begins to raise his head off the bedding and put it in his hand.

"Yes...all of these memories, are your father's. I'm not really sure what I should do...your life is wrecked with what has happened...all I know to tell you is, after your wounds have recovered, you should find your father's friends...they can guide you better than me. I am, after all, an exile...all I can do is heal wounds, I am labeled a fool in the eyes of our village, and after what they think your father has done, you going into the village looking like that will get you killed as he was..."

"He's...dead?" The image of the gallows appears in his mind, but he quickly shakes the memory away.

"I'm afraid so...your father was executed after the villagers thought he had killed your mother. He tried to protect her, but she was killed before he could stop the thief." Raskah coughs and stands up. "Stay here for a few weeks, let your wounds recover...after that, you must leave this place before the villagers come. I am to be executed in one month, for my so-called heresy..."

(To be continued...)
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Re: Malkari
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2007, 03:22:28 am »
Malkari lays back down.

"Apperantly my father was a heretic, as well...he didn't seem to like the Gods of this world, would curse their existence for not letting him keep the natural flow of things in this world. I can't explain it very well...but I'm not going to let you get killed over this. If I can help, let me know how."

"I'm sorry, but...I have no place outside of this village." Raskah lifts her shirt and reveals a symbol branded on her stomach. "All of the villagers are given this symbol when they arrive. One reason your father was executed is because, from the many times he'd left the village to hunt, they thought he was telling people their secrets, since he had never been branded. This symbol bounds its bearer to a certain radius of where they got the symbol. I cannot walk very far outside of this house or else my flesh begins to burn...it's a curse, and there is no way to remove it. They trust people who are born inside the village's walls, which is why you can leave and were not given this marking...but I cannot."

"If they're such bad people, why did you come to live here in the first place?"

"Because of your mother...I met her when she came to Hydlaa for a few years. We'd became best friends, and when she had to move back to this village I was heartbroken. I had to come here soon after, just to find I'd be stuck here for the rest of my life. I didn't know..."

"My mother was born in this village, so she never got the marking..."

"Yes. So you see, there is not much I can do but sit here and wait for my death..."

"But can't I..." Malkari sits up and gets a stern look on his face. "no...nevermind, it's nothing."

"You couldn't if you tried. You may have your father's wisdom, but you do not have his strength. Besides, you are still wounded, and you have no experience with a weapon..."

"But I have his memories, maybe I could -"

"No, don't worry about it...I do not expect to be saved. I have only delayed my death up until now, it is time I moved on. I've done enough in this world."

"I'm sorry...I wish I could help you..."

"Don't worry...I'm sure your father had strong friends. Once you find them, they can train you, and you'll be able to save this village from it's fate."

"Then I must leave quickly..." Malkari starts to stand.

"No, your wounds haven't healed yet, you can't -" Before she finishes, Malkari has already removed the tape to show the recovered wounds that have now become nothing but scars. "I've...never seen someone recover so quickly."

"I may not have his strength, but I am still his son...I'm sure it's a bloodline thing. They stopped hurting a few minutes ago."

"Get some rest...if you wish to leave soon, I can prepare things for you. You have a long journey ahead of you."

"Thank you for doing this...I don't know why all of this had to happen, but I'm not going to let it happen to others. One's enough..."

Malkari awakens, seeing a packed bag beside him, a sewn cloak, and two decorated blades. On the bag is a note that reads, "I am sorry I could not see you off, but the execution date has been moved up...by the time you read this I will already be dead. I did not want to worry you, which is why I did not say anything. I made sure to do all of this for you before you left this acursed place. The blades you see there were your father's. Before his execution, he wanted me to have them to give to you when you came of age. He did not know that I was set to be executed soon after him. Well, you came of age early, so I figure you should begin your weapons training now. I am not very fluent in your father's native tongue, but I believe you are now a 'Shinito.' From now on you are free. If you wish to save this village, find your father's friends and have them train you. Or you can forget this acursed village and live a normal life...I'm sure you'd rather choose to save this village, I imagine your father was a risktaker as well. Just be safe, don't do anything you might regret. I hope yo-" the note ends there.

Malkari's eyes start to form tears. He reads the note over and over again trying to change the words on the page.

"Raskah...why did this have to happen? You were a good person, why can't these people...I'll save this village, I swear it." Malkari grabs the swords, wraps the cloak around him and carries the bag out of the house. He finds flint and tinder a little ways into the forest, and comes back to light the house on fire, leaving behind no trace of the place Raskah was forced to live and wait for her death.

"I hope the afterlife treats you better than this life did..." Malkari walks down the dirt road through the forest, determined to reach Hydlaa and find his father's friends.

(To be continued...)
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Re: Malkari
« Reply #2 on: September 28, 2007, 01:39:38 am »
[Question: how did they have a child in a few days? That part creeped me out slightly, as I also thought when you said girl, you actually meant a young girl.  ::| (Seventeenth paragraph, first sentence.)]
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« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2007, 01:45:06 am »
wow! Whens the next chapter coming out?  ;p

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« Reply #4 on: September 28, 2007, 02:28:09 am »
[Question: how did they have a child in a few days? That part creeped me out slightly, as I also thought when you said girl, you actually meant a young girl.  ::| (Seventeenth paragraph, first sentence.)]

[Finally, some comments. Thanks, I've been waiting for someone to say something. I meant monthes there, read over it but I can never figure out what's wrong besides grammar when I type something. =/

As for the girl thing, I counted down and 17 puts me at a paragraph that doesn't have the word in it. I'm thinking you mean

"A girl runs into the room after hearing the scream, slams open the door, and sees the now-grown Malkari bleeding on the straw bedding from the fresh scars carved into his body from the memories."

If that's it, can you possibly give me a suggestion on how I can change that? I can see how that might fool a few people, but I can't come up with better wording. >.<

And theirah, I'm sort of planning something for the next chapter, but it needs the consent of a few people, otherwise I'll write it up probably tomorrow.]
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« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2007, 02:46:24 am »
[ohh you want comments  :P Acually I read was reading it earlier and really liked it. I just realized after finishing that I had to do something and didn't bother to say anything. Still its really intresting, I especially enjoy how Malkari is effected by the change into his father negatively more so than positively.]
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« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2007, 02:52:23 am »
[Always looking for criticizm, I never know if anyone's even reading, and I always know there's some mistake I'm not seeing. :P]

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« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2007, 04:32:55 am »
Malkari walks down the forest path, thinking back to his father's experiences in the wilderness. His village had been burned down by an army that wanted supplies from them, and he was forced to wander for most of his life until reaching Hydlaa and training himself as a warrior. He pulled the note Raskah had left for him, and kept looking at the word "Shinito" which he tried to remember, but could not pull it up right away. He pulled a loaf of bread out of a pouch and began to eat it as he walked, looking around at small wildlife running around through the trees. This place was beautiful to him, since he had never really felt what it was like to be in a real home.

A few minutes later, it came to him, that in one of the villages Mitaki had visited, he met other Enkidukai that were refugees from his old village, and they had taught Mitaki how to wield a sword, though he had not practiced much with it until he realized that there were important people he needed to protect. The word "Shinito" meant "Warrior of Dawn", a warrior that would bring upon the dawn of a new age for people. Malkari thought about it for a while, and he knew what Raskah meant when she called him that. She wanted him to change their village and make them give up these rituals, which even though they had good intentions, they were ruining people and punishing those that spoke up about it, like Raskah being executed for speaking up about the markings on his body.

"If I'd never existed...would Raskah still be alive? She would have never had anything protest, and she would have been spared..." Malkari said to himself, crouching down and putting his head in his hands. "There's no reason for any of this...I never wanted to be this way, and Raskah could still be alive right now..."

This feeling of regret brought about a new thought in Malkari, which confused him. He began to think of a time when his father was "torn in two." In his sleep, a warlock had cast a spell on him to separate the evil from his soul, and set this new entity against his friends. This memory just now coming to him, he wondered if this was something his father wished to forget. It was a strange feeling, like he was hollow inside after this had happened. His father began to have regrets about his own life, and why the Gods that everyone had worshipped did not save them in this time of need. Ikatim, the new entity that was cast outside of his father's body, his anti-existance, had begun to slaughter many innocent people, always leaving behind a trail of blood at a killing, and the trail ending at a burn mark in the ground, which was assumed to be a teleportation spell. After a few days of this, and many unfinished confrontations with Ikatim that he could not carry out the killing blow, he decided that the only way to save everyone was to kill himself...that shadow would have no more places to hide, being that he only existed because of Mitaki.

The memory cut at this point. Malkari began to throw up at the thought, because just then, a "second mind" started to interfere with his thoughts. This mind was Ikatim's. These twisted thoughts entered his brain, seeing the sight of his father's anti-existance slaughtering innocent people, the carnage spread throughout the small time this creature was let loose, was too much for him. Malkari thrashed around trying to shake the memory away, but it would not stop. It was as if a voice was speaking to him, telling him that there was a job unfinished. Malkari began to stop thrashing, and layed still on the ground. At the same time these two thoughts were clashing with eachother; Mitaki's thoughts of trying to get rid of Ikatim, and Ikatim's thoughts of making Mitaki suffer by killing people that were close to him. Being that these memories are newly carved in his brain, Malkari experiences each one as if they are real. Seeing the blood of innocents spilled, the satisfaction in Ikatim's mind, and at the same time seeing Mitaki's suffering, regretting his own existance because of what had happened, made him go insane.

Malkari got up and looked around the forest, seeing all of the wildlife scurrying around. He leaped in front of an animal and in an instant severed its head from its body. Seeing the blood on his sword, licking it off and getting a strange satisfaction from it, he began to look around for something else to kill. Ikatim's thoughts had overpowered Mitaki's courage at the time, as he was unsure of his own life being worth anything since it was the cause of Ikatim's existance to begin with, and he had been killing many people in that time he was alive. Malkari was driven by Ikatim's mad thoughts, and he turned around down the path and sprinted back toward the village he had left. In less than an hour, he had arrived at the village, leaping high in the air and landing on one of the huts. An elder Enkidukai walked outside and saw him standing up there, both of his swords in his hands, covered in blood.

"...Mitaki!? What the...you're supposed to be dead! Have you risen from hell to kill more of your own kind, you monster!?" The elder asked in rage. Malkari looked down at him, and found a good footing on the roof of the hut to leap from and cut the elder's throat in one slash. He grinned as the elder fell to the ground and the fresh blood stained his swords.

"More...I know there are more...I'm only starting to have fun. You killed that fool Mitaki without my consent, he was mine...so I'm going to take the life of everyone here until I'm satisfied..." Malkari said in a crazed voice. He tackled the side of the hut with a force that caved in the side of it and knocked it down. More villagers ran outside and saw what had happened. The elder laying on the ground with his head severed lying next to him, and this twisted figure standing there that looked much like Mitaki. The villagers began to scream and run back inside of their homes. A few children playing nearby had seen Malkari and cried, not being able to run away. Malkari quickly ran up to them and looked into their eyes.

"You have...something I don't..." Malkari said, his voice sounding somewhat normal, but quickly changing back to Ikatim's maddened screech. "You have my childhood!" With no more hesitation, he killed the two children that had been crying at the sight of him. The mother of the two children ran back outside and screamed in horror, Malkari quickly looking at her and realizing something that looked familliar about her. In that instant, another memory came to his head. He was walking...no, his father was walking, alongside Raskah and Rabalah, carrying their baby to this woman's house. When they arrived, blurry words were said.

"Mina, this child..."

The memory cut off again, and Malkari looked into this woman's scared eyes, realizing that this person was Raskah's sister. He took a few steps back, and began shiver, tears pouring from his eyes.

"Go away...GO AWAY!" Malkari yelled at the evil that has possessed him, and he ran back out of the village and tripped in the dirt about a mile away, landing next to his bloodstained sword. He could do nothing but lay there, thinking about what he had just done...

(To be continued...)
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Re: Malkari
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2007, 05:28:04 am »
ohh...poor malkari...

btw, small grammar thing to point out, but it stuck out a little-"began to ate it" in the first paragraph should be "began to eat it"

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« Reply #9 on: September 28, 2007, 07:16:38 am »
[They are Enkidukai, correct? So, you could replace girl with fenki, or just call her a woman.]

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« Reply #10 on: September 28, 2007, 12:52:39 pm »
[I've never been fond of calling them fenki, it's more of a player slang than an actual name, so I'll call her a woman.]

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« Reply #11 on: September 28, 2007, 08:39:23 pm »
[Actually, I meant Rabalah or whoever.]

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« Reply #12 on: September 28, 2007, 09:14:31 pm »
[Ohh. Actually, she's younger than Raskah. Mitaki's in his 40's, Rabalah's in her early 30's, Raskah's a little older than Mitaki. I think it might fit, but I'll still change it to stop the confusion. :P

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« Reply #13 on: September 29, 2007, 06:07:43 am »
Malkari stared at his sword, regretting everything he's done in his short time of consciousness since gaining all of these memories. He promised Raskah he would save the village, not cause havoc in it. He even killed Mina's children...Mina had been living a simple life, not even being informed of her sister's execution or anything that was happening outside of her happy life with her children. He'd just taken everything away from her...not even being able to control himself. It was like he couldn't control his own motions or thoughts, everything he did wasn't his choice to do. It was such a strange feeling...all being sparked from the memories he'd received from his father's anti-existance. Ikatim should have died long ago at the cliff he'd fought Mitaki at, and if not then, it'd be when Mitaki was hung. What had just happened to him was as if he had something living inside of him. Was a new Otaru (Warrior of Shadows) born of Ikatim's memories coming to existance inside of his mind, and not cast out of his body yet? This entity had just destroyed Malkari's goal, his promise to Raskah...if she'd somehow be watching him, she would never rest in peace seeing that. Once again, memories came to Malkari that he wanted to cast away, but did not have the strength or mentallity at the moment to do.

"I see...so this child will not be so much longer..." A woman said in the memory.

"What do you mean...? My son ages faster than normal Enkidukai?" Mitaki asked.

"These markings seem to have been done hastily...look, do you see this one here? I believe they meant to draw it the other direction...right now it stands as "Age", but they want to give him your courage. The artisan simply did not position himself right when drawing this...what a fatal mistake." Mina, the woman speaking before that had now been pictured clearly in Malkari's mind responded.

"A year after being marked, the mark takes effect and changes them to whatever is written..." Raskah said.

"How do you know all of this?" Rabalah questioned.

"Do you remember my sickness? Though you weren't around at the time I got it, a year ago before losing my husband to an illness, I marked myself to receive his fate instead of him...I sent you a letter, but I don't think it got to you. At the time, I did not know that this village's rituals took one year in order to come to effect. So, my husband passed away, and I was stuck waiting for death. A year later, around the time you met Mitaki, the marking had taken its hold on me, but because my husband was already dead, it made me feel like I had a parasite inside of me...that was probably what was happening to him in the grave when the marking took hold..."

"I'm sorry, but that's...disgusting, why do you people study such magics?" Mitaki asked.

"The potion you gave me actually did nothing more than kill the parasite. It was probably looking for nutrients inside of my husband's lifeless body, and after being sent to me it had a feast..." Raskah pauses and puts her hand over her mouth, makes a strange movement and then continues. "I don't think it was meant to swallow whatever was inside of that potion, I can still feel it inside of me...I don't know how to get it out, it'd grown huge in the short time it was in me..."

"Stop! Please...you're making me sick." Rabalah said, shivering.

Mitaki sighs. "So from that disgusting experience, you pretty much learned that these things take a year...and in order to draw the marking to begin with, you studied how to mark them on flesh."

"Yes...sorry about telling you that. At first I didn't want to say anything, but even now I feel like whatever that parasite ate is still inside of it, and it's...vital, to me, because I can no longer sleep at night for more than a few minutes without my lungs feeling like they're shifting. It scares me...but since we were on the subject of knowing how these markings work, I thought I should say something..."

"You could have at least told me...I know how to remove these markings. Hold on, I can reverse this." Mina said, walking into another room of the shifty wooden house she was living in. "Here, sit down, let me see it."

"Can you guys turn around, the marking's on my chest..." Raskah says to Mitaki and Rabalah.

"You're pretty flexible to be able to do something like that high up on your chest without messing up..." Mitaki says in another sigh. "This all's ridiculous. All I want to know is, are you able to remove these markings from Raskah and my son so we can rest without anymore worry?"

"Well, if you'd turn around I can begin..." Mina says, already starting to lift Raskah's shirt up.

"Oh, sorry!" Mitaki quickly turns around and walks into another room with Rablah.

Mitaki sits in the other room, his back against the wall that's separating the two rooms, listening to what's going on. Rabalah stands on the opposite side of the room with Malkari in her hands, looking at the two markings on his body and wishing that they would just go away.

"What the hell...?" Mina says. "What is this? You drew this marking in such a strange way...I can't find where the-" Mitaki tries to listen further, but the language became that of their native language, which he had not yet studied deep into.

A few minutes later, after the conversation between the two in Alturial (the village's language), they walk into the room Mitaki and Rabalah are staying in.

"Ishur al...I'm sorry, I forgot, you don't understand us, do you?" Mina asks Mitaki.

"If you're more comfortable speaking like that, go ahead. I can hear it later from Rabalah if it's bad news." Mitaki responds.

Rabalah and Mina held a conversation in that language that seemed like it took hours until they were finished. During it all, Mitaki sits still propped against the wall, simply examining their facial expressions as they talked. Rabalah raised her voice a lot, or it may have been an accent, and she looked really worried about whatever Mina was telling her.

"Hey...I don't mean to interrupt, but where's Raskah?" Mitaki asks.

"Raskah...liha...I mean, she's resting in the other room. You can go and see her if you want, the marking's removed, and the parasite in her body has dissolved. Problem is, the "lung shifting" she was having cannot be reversed, as the magic did not do that to her, it only put the parasite in her body. She'll have trouble sleeping, but she should be fine besides that."

"That's good to hear..."

Mina and Rabalah continue to talk to eachother, but the conversation quieted down and Rabalah seemed to let out a sigh toward the end of when they were speaking Alturian.

"Leave the child with me, Rabalah. You and Mitaki go back home and rest, I'm going to need you two to help me tomorrow. I have to make preparations for the child's ritual."

"Ritual?" Mitaki asks.

"I'll explain on the way." Rabalah says, holding his hand and pulling him out the door like she was rushing him.

"What was that about?"

"She told me that our child may not survive this ritual...he is too young, and Raskah had a lot of problems with it herself, which is why she's resting right now."

"What did she mean by 'preparations'? She didn't take that much time with Raskah...and besides, do we really want to take the risk of losing our child just to remove these markings?"

"If we don't, you're going to have a son that's the same age as you...I think we should try it. She told me that she's going to try and find a way to numb him so that he doesn't die from the pain. The ritual itself isn't much of a problem, just the physical pain may be too much."

"I see...well, he is my son. I hope that he'll be ok."

The next day looked familliar. It showed Mitaki running down the road back to their house, and Rabalah laying on the floor dead with a thief inside of her house. Mitaki had slain him in an instant, but seen it was too late for his wife. Mina ran into the house and saw Mitaki's bloodied sword, and the dead body of Rabalah, and without saying anything ran outside and yelled for help. That's where it all began...

Malkari opened his eyes, and looked at the bloodstained sword in his hand.

"I have no purpose...Raskah's dead, my father's dead, my mother's dead, Mina's been crushed...all because of me..."

Malkari picks up his swords and walks down the path, his eyes cold and dead, not knowing what to do anymore.

(To be continued...)
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Re: Malkari
« Reply #14 on: October 02, 2007, 10:33:14 pm »
Malkari walked for days, tired and hungry, so lost in thought that he did not even care anymore where he was going or what he was supposed to be doing. He tripped and fell on the ground, just laying there as he began to think thoughts of suicide, since his existance had only brought about sadness to people in the short time he's been alive. Memories of his father began to flash in his mind again, but he chose to ignore them. They were the cause of most of this. His father was a lunatic, having a side of him that wanted to kill, having such a deep depression, constantly thinking of people he'd lost. What did his father have that got him through it all? It just didn't make any sense anymore that feelings as deep as that would be hidden deep in his mind to a point where he could only forcefully bring them up, or in Malkari's case, have them pour into his mind as he experienced similar situations.

There was no hope for the future anymore. Even if his father had friends that he'd left back in Hydlaa, what would they think of his son after seeing how old he is and the blood of innocents on his swords? They obviously wouldn't believe him, and probably kill him, since they were apperantly people of great skill with a sword. Their judgement would be smarter than to believe such a ridiculous story. In a way it was his fault that he'd done what he did in the village, he could have tried to fight against the anti-existance's presence inside of him, but instead he sat there idley as it destroyed peoples' hearts and lives. Where was he supposed to go now? He got up and continued to walk toward Hydlaa, almost being able to expect what might happen to him, but only time would tell...

(End of the past)