I like the tower, niko.

I can see that the balcony is too organic, but I like it all the same.

@Samno
I'm glad you like it and want to help out. Concerning the painting: I like the idea to include the mushroom forest where the klyros live most abundantly. However, I wouldn't make the placement of the mushrooms so symmetrical. A little variety in the layout can make a picture much more interesting. The trick, i think, is to not be symmetrical but to still maintain balance. Also, I've been using lots of cool colors and trying to use all three environments the klyros are comfortable in: namely air, water, and on land (as opposed to beneath it, though theoretically all of yliakum is underground...). I've also been using arches and ovals in the architechtural designs, as have niko and crj I believe. For wood and stonecarvings I've been using simply drawn and smooth scenes depicting once again the 3 environments.
With that established (hope it helps) I think your picture needs more detail and a cooler tone, as well as the unsymmetrical approach I mentioned a bit ago. I understand that you did it quickly and I'd like to see something that you had some more time on, as I think it might help me to better understand your drawing style. Also, just curious, what medium did you use?
I talked to niko about it too and he said he thought too much of the white background showed through. Once again i understand the time spent may be the cause of it.
I do really like the idea of using the mushrooms and if it's fine with you may do a sketch myself.
Also, I wouldn't write your name on it, because 1) I don't know if we're allowed to and 2) in doesn't seem in charcter to me... unless of course your character is name samno and is an artist well known in Amdeneir. I saw in your post on the character drawing thingie that you haven't played ps yet, so the artist may be something you could consider... Anyway, I wouldn't put your name on it.
